VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19 - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago
Welcome back...lovely update...👏😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved both monologues.. both started understanding each other really well.. suhana n dadima's meetind kind of emotional. n suhana is so happy seeing her children so happy with each other.. Loved update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
suprb update dear...
both's monologue was nice...
really geet ne maan ki life change kr di h...
sahana happy maan n geet ko dekh k...maan telling about his emotion to geet
waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 69
nice part...
they are finally happy...
and Maan is happy that he got his mother...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb chappy...
waited for sooo long...
sahana deserves hapiness and i am sure maneet will give her...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago



RECAP

He spoke guiltily,"Jaan,i lost my mother when i was so little...on that time i craved for my mother's love.Then dadimaa came into my life.She took the charge of my life.She gave me motherly love but i always craved for my mother's love and when i dint get it then i became stone.I searched for her for many years and then came to the conclusion that she's no more.But now i believe in god that he never did bad to me.It was me who became bad...it was me who became rude...it was me who despised him...am lucky to get u and from u to get my mother...!"

He wanted to speak more but she muted him by keeping her finger on his sculpted lips and spoke,"Enough!enough!"

And immediately took his lips.She kissed him with immense love and he responded with the very same.

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PART 70






Many Many Happy Returns Of The Day Behna Sumaiya Riya😃

Sahana walked all over the mansion trying to catch the old times when she felt the very same door closed which was always her study.She got curious that why is it locked and tried to open the lock.She dint know where the keys kept and she walked back from there.Everything has changed in KM since her exit 20 yrs ago.Sahana came to her MIL who was lighting the lamp in sacred room.Sahana stood there folding her hands while dadimaa lit the lamp and she too closed her eyes praying to god.Sahana too did that and when dadimaa opened her eyes then dadimaa saw her two children standing behind Sahana.Dadimaa did aarti and gave it her two children and walked to Sahana who was still folding her hand closing her eyes.Sahana wished that the happiness which is becoz of Geet wont waver ever and her children will be safe from evil eyes.Least she knew that evil's eyes has been fall upon her children mainly Geet who is bearing the heir of Khuranas.

Maan made Sahana to settle down in her room while Sahana abruptly asked,"Beta,where is ur father?"

She dint know what had happened when she was dragged by his lusty companions.Maan stiffened immediately and his jaw tightened controlling his anger as he dint wanted to blast his anger on his mother.

On that time Geet came and heard Sahana's questions and distracted Maan immediately,"Maan,don't u want to prepare ur mom's favourite dishes.U even stopped me by doing so!"

Geet pouted cutely and he calmed down and looked at her gratefully being glad of running away from Sahana's questions.Maan went outside immediately while Geet entered holding her baby bump and walking slowly.

Sahana saw her being clumsy and held her and said,"Be careful beta!Come on sit down!"

Geet sat on the bed and Sahana sat beside her and asked,"Which month doll?"

Geet said,"4 and 4/5 months mom!"

Sahana asked,"Are u taking medicine in correct time?"

Geet chuckled,"Mom,don't worry!Ur son is very strict abt this!"

Sahana chuckled too and got up to freshen up when Geet held her hand.

Sahana raised her eyebrows when she spoke,"Mom,promise me that u wont ask abt dad to Maan!"

Sahana was shocked and she looked confused.

Geet spoke,"I heard ur questions!I know u want to know what become of him after ur exit but please mom don't ask abt this to Maan.He feels angry everytime his dad is mentioned for slightest.His anger is so dangerous and sometimes this anger may leads his life in danger.That's why please promise me that u wont ask anything abt dad to him!"

Sahana understood her words as he was also witness of her state 20 yrs back and nodded and said,"I wont ask him anything beta!"

Geet smiled and came to her bubbly self and chatted with her eating her head.

Maan peeped inside their room and said,"Jaan,am sure u will be hungry eating mom's head which is tasteless so come to dining table.Everything is ready!"

Geet pouted glaring at him and he chuckled sweetly and went away.

Geet cutely complained,"Look at him,he wont change ever!"

Sahana chuckled but said,"Lets go or else baby will be hungry and tortures her mumma!"

Geet blushed and cutely got up holding her stomach.Before she would walk she felt the ground slip from her feet and looked that she was in Maan's arms.Maan stared at her lovingly and walked towards the door while Sahana chuckled and left them.Geet looked what had happened and pouted and turned her face opposite twisting her lips.


Maan said boldly,"As far as am concerned am gonna eat u here only jaan if u once twist ur lips with that cute anger but am sure my angel inside u will be playing Kabaddi with the mouse!I don't want her to trouble her mumma!After dinner i will surely eat u alive sweety!"


Geet widened her eyes with his shameless remark but glared at him with blush lingering on her chubby cheeks.She immediately hid her face cant able to resist his teasing smirk inside his neck punching his left chest.He groaned feeling her soft body but walked towards the dining table.Today their daily routine wont be there as they r having dinner with their mom and grandmom.Geet grinned imagining that scene.Maan knew what is going on inside his little innocent wify's head and he made her blush with his words.


Maan said,"Penny for ur thoughts,but sure this wont be like daily.U will be in my lap and my lips inside ur lips with food.I love to feed u like that jaan,just u r spared today only!"


Geet pouted but cutely blushed and whacked his shoulder.He pecked her forehead and made her sit on the chair and pushed it near the table slowly holding her stomach.He kissed her hairs and stood to serve.Sahana was now getting the glimpse of Maaneet's love.He served them and at when Geet served his favourite and lovingly fed him.


She nodded him to bend and whispered in his ear,"I will feed u first and then eat it from my fingers only.In that way we will be connected!"


His eyes darkened immediately hearing it and said,"I will feed u too!"

Sahana was overwhelemed seeing her favourite dishes.He had made Punjabi cuisine for her and for him and Maaneet Italian cuisine.These days Geet was wishing Italian cuisine only.Both Maaneet fed each other lovingly while both mom and grandmom admired their love.Maan was purposefully licking her fingers giving his dark passionate stare while she blushed profusely looking at his teasing yet lovely eyes.Sahana and dadimaa finished their food and ordered the servants to clean up while Maan immediately dragged Geet along with his dinner plate and lovingly fed her from his mouth.Geet blushed feeling his hot rouch lips tasting her soft petal lips.After their dinner Maan carried to plate to the kitched and handed it to the servant and washed his hands there and came back to his room where Geet was standing near the window holding her baby bump and cutely whispering to baby showing the full moon.He immediately came towards her and hugged her from back holding her cute baby bump.


Geet giggled sweetly while he kissed her shoulder and spoke,"So lets start!"


She giggled sweetly and was abt to step out when she felt a swift kick and pain in her stomach.Geet squealed in pain and held her stomach.


Maan was concerned and asked,"Jaan,what happened?Why r u holding the stomach?Are u having pain?Should i call doctor?"


Geet felt another pain as another kick she felt and he immediately lifted her in his arms to walk towards the door.


Geet stopped him,"Maan am ok!"


Maan glared at her,"What do u mean u r ok?U r holding ur stomach continuously and don't hide that from me!"


He immediately stepped forward when she whispered,"Maan,baby kicked!"


Maan stopped and looked at her with wide eyes.Geet nodded and he gently let go of her and she stood steadily and held his hand on her baby bump.Maan was shocked feeling another kick and sat on his knees and nuzzled his nose on her baby bump.Geet once again felt the kick and he was shocked and fascinated.Geet cant able to stand due to that she stumbled when he immediately got up and picked her in his arms.


He immediately made her to sleep on the bed and came towards her baby bump and kept his ear on it.Geet giggled but she squealed in pain once again feeling the kick.

Maan felt it and pecked her baby bump and spoke,"Angel calm down,don't hurt mumma!Or else dada will also be hurt!"


He pecked her baby bump and after that she dint feel any kick.


Geet was fascinated and asked,"Shant hogayi?Sach me she'll be dada's angel!"


He chuckled and led beside her and made her comfortable beside him.Geet who was sleeping on his right shoulder asked,"Maan,r u happy?"


Maan looked up and asked,"Jaan,what type of question is this?Of course am happy!Am getting my happiness back which was snatched by fate.My mother and my priceless possession,my blood,my baby!"

He stroked his left hand on her baby bump lovingly.He once again felt the baby kick and she softly whimpered as if she expected.

Precap-Sahana's monologue.


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sahana wants to know what happened to maan''s dad but that question made maan angry but at right time geet diverted and asked sahana not to ask about maan's dad which makes maan angry.
sahana and dadi are very happy to see maaneet's love towards each other.

maan feeling for the first time baby's kick and felt happy


lovely update
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful emotional update! superbly written! Sahana questions Maan abt his dad! Maan speechless! Geet arrives n diverts her attention! Maaneet eat! naughty Maan! Maan is so caring! Maan asks him mom nt 2 ask abt his dad ever again! The baby kicks! Maaneet overwhelmed! update soon. pls update heavley love, COl, BD, n VD! thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wowww I loved maaneet moments yaar it was fab but dar b lag raha hai yaar kia hoga aage I'm v worried
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
love it
waiting for next update

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