VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

wow lovely emotional cute cute update.. te way my maan thinking abt karan and his warnings was so lovely.. te way geet ki cribbings and my maan laughing seeing te way she complainly why she is so short was very cute , buddhu geet then only my maan can bend to kiss, so u have made te great msk to bend in front of u , ha ha ha ,and it will be easy for my maan to carry u naa 😉...te way my maan making her to sit on his lap and pushing te swing and geet ki trust was lovely emotional... te way my maan looking after his geet with so much love was lovely emotional.. te way geet knitting and my maan want to learn and asking her wen she laughs , te way he glares and atlast geet teaching , lovely emotional, my maan was so cute i want to pull his cheeks..wen geet ask abt my maan's family his gussa , wat happen why he is avoiding to talk abt them.. i love te update..

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Maaneet moments.. tafter karan's death Maan is slightly relaxed..He is enjoying his angels arrival with Geet..But why he became so angry. when Geet asked abt his parents.. ? She is ur wife man she too needs to know abt u n ur family..
I read all stories of u..😊

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Very nice update. The small things which happen in day to day life was very nicely put across.

Worried about shasha though. Where is she.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

part 64
nice part...
lovely...
what is this Sasha involvement?
cont soon dear...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

am following every work of urs...so pm me and plz dont discontinue any story dear...

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

so maan still thinking about karan's words about sasha. their cute swing romance and maan wants to learn knitting sweater is lovely.maan doesnt want to tell about his parents and now geet wants to know everything