THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Teji ke aate hi sab bechari Pyaari ko bhool hi gaye...

Teji is so jovial nature person...

maan is not jealous of him...thank God...but how will Teji make him confess his love...he already confessed it is Geet who is misunderstanding now...

awesome update...

waiting for next part...

Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 11 years ago

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: dqno1

Their love story is based on the OM SHANTI OM dialogue... Saari Qayanat mili hai inhe saath milane mein...😃 Teji ke liye do candidates hai... am debating which way to go...😃

Thanks Purvi

seriously saari qayanat... 😃😃 sivaii inn dono ke, sabko pata hai in donon ke feelings ke baare me😆

aha teji keliye bhi Avi ne doond ke rakha hai...thats sooo nice n exciiting😃😃😃

waitinggg to see his love story tooo...you are the best when it comes to making love stories😊😊

waise moi missing dev tara

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Alpha01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Teji is a true friend and has noticed Geets state. This has made Maan realise how selfish he has been. He may love her but has never thought to express that love in any way. Love how Darji got him to come home as he noticed that Geet was missing him.😛

It'll be interesting to see Maans answer to Tejis question.

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lily

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

geet ne to maan ka fuss hi nikal dia hei,,,,

geet tezi frendhip s osm,,lov deir cmfrtness,,,

dev taara dadi daarji aur ab tezi lage hein mneet ko milane mein...

lappy scene s bst,,,,,😳

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Zeal-DD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Nice Prt... Maan was enjoying Geet and Piyari's talk chup chup ke and Teji-Gert gave him shock... I like Teji-Geet bond ... Geet told him everything about Maan... Or kisi ko nahi bataya... Darji Called Maan to come home because geet was Looking for him ❤️ I really want D&D (Dadi-Daarji) 2gether for maaneet's nokejhonk fun 😆
Loved it

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sona rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

wowww its Awesom muahhh Avi:))))

haey abb Maan kya kahay ga:)))

Kon Larki,Kaisi Larki hahahahaha

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: dqno1

Bade log, bada kaam.. kya karu... koi issso-so writer ko bhi attention kyun dega..😲
Thank you😃 for showing up... Late hi sahi..😆 VIP wali entry marne ki aadat ho gayi hai..

Haaye haaye! So so writer kaun? Aapke toh itne maddaah hain. Yahan tak ke hum bhi aapke maddaah hi hain! 😃

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

u know avi, u remind me of director madhur bhandarkar of bollywood. u take so many characters in your story, wherein there are many substories running at the same time yet u never damage the integrity or continuity of any character. u also close all the characters perfectly without taking any deviation from the main story line.

the last part is beautifully written. my all complaints at rest. abhi maan got the taste of his own medicine. lets see whats more in store !

keep ur flag flying !!!😛