THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 70

Hey, its me. Ive come on the forum after a long time. My mid terms ended 3 weeks ago and my semester finals r starting from 1^st, since the semester is ending all the deadlines of my projects, presentations r on my head, so I will be irregular but I will comment bcz if u can plan and write the updates despite ur workload so mera comment karna tou banta hi hai. But the good thing of cuming after so long is that I get to read all the updates in one go, im not that great at being patient to read the next part of ur story. Anyways cuming to the updates

Part 59

I really felt for geet when she was feeling so lonely amid so many people. it sucks that her graduation ceremony made her feel like that. I liked the reference to the balloon, adrifting in the open sky searching for its place.uve described her insecurities, confusion and unhappiness so beautifully that I cud totally imagine her walking around the hostel , lost in her thoughts without really seeing where she was going.

Part 60

Maan finally caught on, hes getting near to clearing his misunderstanding. And lol, maan hiding behind a tree and secretly watching her graduate. Thank god the old man came out from underneath the tough dusht danav exterior, he saw her tears and joined in her graduation. Feeling very generous towards him. And his restlessness in understanding the situation. Mam who r u kidding- u r totally a love sick puppy. And back to dust danav again. Idiot broke the thread. Men and their egos.

And dev, I can totally understand not wanting to share maan. Yayy dev found out about maan loving get. I knew that he and dadima wud plot together. And tara also knows, go tara- nice move making maan jealous. Maan entry-he looks so hot in black 9 actually he looks hot in any color) Hayye good memories about the dance and kurbaan hua.

Part 61

Geet is so in love with him and maan is drowning in his anger. Uff the dusht danav hurt geet, she saw his bare neck. Idiot giving her so much pain and giving rise to her insecurities again. Shukat hai maan realized his stupidity. Sadness all around-pinky also unhappy. But best part brij getting beaten up.

And omg, dargi also knows and is a co-conspirator with dadimaa-did not see that cuming. I love the grandparents in this story. Bechari geet misunderstanding, good thing dev saw her. Misunderstandings on their way to b cleared up.

Part 62

Maan starting to think rationally and geting some sense knocked into him. Chalo one misunderstanding cleared. Its good that hes talking to dev, now hopefully he will figure out the truth of geets feeling soon. And meghas and her parents happy ending cuming soon. Geet in so much pain, good thing maan has gained his senses and is cuming for her. Loved the ending scene, geet thinking that shes imagining maan and maan confessing, haayee😊

P.S. Will comment on part 63 when it will be complete. Srry for short comments, im writing this at 3 in the morning and I hav to get up at 8 to go somewhere, I thought writing something wud b better than nothing cz im already commenting after a long time. Oh and congrats for 2 new threads, the last time I came u were on 13 n now its 15. And thanku so much for the pm. Very well written as always.⭐️

Originally posted by: jasraj123

omggg avi even i forgot to hit like😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
sorry because it straight opened to blog and when i came to if i commented but forgot to hit like and i am sure there are many stupid like me who could have commented but forgot to hit like due to reading on blog😕😕😕😕

I will keep in mind next time sorry

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

that was defnitely a maar daala part...

though yes maaneet moments were utmost special and loveable... but i thoroughly enjoyed our dadis CID giri...the way her eyes were scanning the room and maan like an x ray was just too much!! dadi has surely under estimated the elder khurana... her eyes didnt failed to notice the ear ring or the lip stick!! tab patha chala hoga maan kisise kam nahi😆
I love to write Daadi as naughty. Mine used to be very strict😆
years of bottled love and passion just overflowed which surely scared bambi... or is it that she herself was not able to control 😆 but i liked when maan understood her side and took the initiative to clear things between them... and tara ke words ka asar bhi huwa hain bambi pe... her initiative just shows her admiration to this man who is madly in love with her... i so much loved this...
I think I like it better when she is expressive. That is probably the best reward for him, for being so patient and loving for so long. I think it was time for him to get some love back.😳😳😳
bambi in saree...🤢... maan ko dosh kaise de sakthe hain??😆

kabir megha taking blessings of chand poonam was really touchy!!! am waiting when megha will know the truth...

and ur description of khurana couples in corners just made me laugh visualising it...
Daadi the great had a laugh at that too😆
thank u so much for this lovely part avi ...
Thanks Lakshmi! Your support at all times has made this so rewarding for me. Especially going through so much to make me banners all the time; it is true that the most effective way to show someone we care is give of ourselves. This was the ultimate reward for me in writing. So many of you have given me so much in exchange for my words, I feel blessed.🤗

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

Hey Avi,

this update was simply wow and HOT!!!!!!!

loved the love and bonding which geet shares with her tara di. and as as usual CID daadi is on the roll. and maaneet were so steamy just loved them and i cant wait for megha to hear the news about her parents. and teji i just hope he falls in love soon. AND PROPOSAL WHAT PROPOSAL AND KISKA PROPoSAL????????????????

waiting for the next update soon

tc

ABINAYA

Originally posted by: heytal

What an dreamy update

Haaye dil khush kar ditta😳

Aakhir Avi ne kuch accha kar hi diya...😆😆

Maan is Maan 😆

Bechaari Geet has to deal with his mood swings all her life

Somethings never change😉

CID Dadi was the show stealer😎

Kya pakad aur dhoya Maan ko

bathroom angle bhi nahi choda🤣

Aur Geet keeping safe distance from their room

kahin phir pakde gaye toh😲😵

Maan besharam ho sakta hai... Bambi nahi..😉

Avi I was so going to tell u about Pari-Teji fixation

And see Dadi did the needful

Paanchon ki shaadi ek saath kara do

kharcha bhi bach jaayega😉😆

Done deal😆 Avi ka typing bhi😉

Aur Maan and Dev ki bekaraari bhi khatam 😳

Superb song selection and as usual awesome lines from Nauri😃

Nauri kab ki chali gayi thi but I had held onto her words... Acchi baatein seene se lagati hu, fevicol se...😉😆

Thanks so much for an awesome update

Maari ke saath saath u made our day too

🤗
So glad😃 Thanks Heytal

Originally posted by: paponecon

dadima the match maker really th best...wow teji n pari...plz dadima tie chandan n punam .. geet kabtak khud ko control kar payegi..is it possible. whn thy will get marriage...