THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 72

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

thanks for the pm and the blog update beautifully done maan not understanding what geet was trying to tell him when he wanted to get close to her loved that geet talked to tara and she explained to her and loved that maan realized how innocent geet was and that she was just doing what she was thought and she was not wrong in her pov and dadi ma caught him loved it so cute and kabir and megha got engaged loved the update amazing

Glad you liked it Kathrina. Thanks for the support.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

me still thinking avi what to write aand how to write in comment😆😆😆😆
still in maaneet land naaa

Laut aaoo...😆

lovely update full of passion with rootna manana
love the way maan couldnot hold his love and tried to express it without proposing and
then geet saying no to him because she does not understand what is happening to her and it is tooo much for and she think about daarji's as well

ufff maan ka gussa to naak pe rehta nd him stilll informing her that he will be late tonite at work sooo don't wait

love the way tara helped geet to realize the need of talking to maan and tell what she wants and
thennn der aaye par darusat aaye and maan saying sorry to her and she to him

and after theat the what happened in maan's room was sooo passionate, her taking initiate to kiss him and sweep him off to another world😳😳😳😳

hayyy love dadi and her matchmaking giri, she did found out that maan is lying and geet is there with him😆😆😆🤣🤣🤣
ufff maan babu dadi se nahin jeet sakte tum and saying dadi is great was wowww.


love the way all the couples were kind of in their own world but happy for megha as well.



thanks for pm

Thanks so much Jas. Glad you enjoyed it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LM1991

Avi,
Lovely update! 👏
"Agar bhuke sher ke saamne Bambi ko chud do, to yeh to hona he tha"! 😳Loved to see the mutual understanding between Geet & Maan regarding their intimacy!

Jab bade kahe tein hai "humne dhoop me bal safed nahin kiye", how true it was as Dadi at once glance cud make out what was going on!! Dadi also had her fun with Maan & hiding Geet. 😉

U fulfilled my wish of seeing a romantic, passionate, possessive,loverboy & agressive Maan. Can't stop reading the update again & again.
LM

Thanks LM 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Thanks for the pm. Your friend Mari is lucky to have u as her friend. A update dedicated just for her, hai!

Lovely update as usual.
Remember in my comment I had mentioned about a jatka for Maan. Well it was Geet stopping him, which Maan had not expected.
One can see the maturity of Maneets love, Maan realizes his mistake and immediately sets it right. Geet understands Maan's feelings and try to reciprocate as far as her sensibility will allow.

CID ho tho dadima jaisa. She is the best.

Poor chandan and poonam, not able to show their love for their daughter even at this important phase of her life. Hope the reports come soon and a happy reunion later.

Maan and Dev are going to become Joru ka gulam.

@underlined: I am the lucky one. Without her support this story would have ended in 3 parts. She has proofed each and every chapter of mine without any hesitation. There is so much care among the writers left on Geet forum, so much support. I don't think any other forum has that.
Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Geet is so innocent.. But liked the way she told Maan.. that she didn't want anyone raising finger to her Darji N his upbringings.. Still love brings passion.. Huum.. Maan she is ur Dadima...finally CID jeet hi gayee over ur nautanki... 😆 Dadi's couple matching is not still stopped.. Now Teji N Pari.. I love this dadi.. Kash sabko aiseehi dadi mile..Coolwali..😎Awesome part Avi..

Ooh I like the puppy in your DP.😃
Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow lovely cute emotional update.. te way my maan ki passion and te way he burning his geet too and she too responding him was lovely cute.. te way once she realize wat they doing and her tears and stopping my maan and my buddhu maan took it as his ego and saying he wont touch her and avoiding her was lovely emotional.. te way geet ki sadness and tara making her realizes and te way my maan too realizing and asking sory was lovely .. te way my maan seeing his geet and fida on her and te way both lost in they passion was lovely cute.. te way cid dadi came , i warned u maan becareful with ur cid dadi , now she turned te table ad started to threatened u and te way she teasing him was lovely... te way both couples dadi pls arranged they marriage soon before they get kids before they wedding ha ha ha , bechare ur grandsons struggling with two devils...i love te update

Thanks so much. Please continue the support like this. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

lovely lovely lovely update...poor maan ...could not stay away from geet and this bambi pushed him away while romancing...but glad that tara made her understand that it was normal bet couples...and even maan too understood her naivety and no knowledge about this...
loved geet's boldness in his room...
so cid dadi found out what was going in his room...

fianlly chandan - poonam could meet theri daughter megha...dadi made her to take their blessings also...when will she come to know that they are her real parents...
so megha -kabir ki to baat pakki ho gayi...lekin ye dev-tara aur maan-geet me abhi bhi nok-jhok shuru hai...
eager to know how dev is going to pacify her anger..
so cid dadi is again on her mission of mathmaking of tej & pari...
yes, maan needs to do all things before marrying geet, flowers, hearts, chocolates, proposal tab jake geet puri tarah se samjhdar hogi...lol
waiting for maan's proposal...

Ab story almost last round mai hai toh I am hoping I can meet all expectations.😃
Thanks so much for the support Madhuri😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh.. Geet ko karate ate hain.. toh ho jaye ek competition..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow teasing teaser
Sorry forgot to like the update :(
Now I have liked it :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome teaser

Don't worry abt the likes sweets

It will follow

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