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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 63: Aankhon ki gustakhiyan... Part 1

As for your A/N, I am surprised you manage to update and reply to your reader's comments at all!!!

Comments trow :) bye for now, take care
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: romanceorlove

Chapter 60: Banwri si preet mori...
Hey Avi, another long one 👏👏👏 (as for my comments, better late than never? 😳)

Is some sense getting knocked in to Maan's head finally? He loves and cares so much for her yet he prefers living with his MUs, mind believes eyes and ears keeps ignoring the heart!!
Dev jealous of Megha 😆 least did he know he would be stuck to her for life 😉 JK & MMM 😆

If I remember it right, this was first mischief played by Mr Tara, as they say, there is always a first 😆; CID, JK & Sherlock Holmes together turned out to be the push our two idiots needed 😉

Geet mad at Tara 😆 impossible!!! Our Ms Self Talk Believing Handa can only be angry with Mr Khadoos Singh Khurana.

As always you have managed to capture all human emotions in this chapter, how our views about people change with situations, after revelations. Its amazing how you remember all loose ends, (I had forgotten Ranbir though not Sona ma'm) how intertwined are all the characters with each other, like life 👏👏

I was hoping Brij 😡would have had it today from Maan for daring to mess with his Lady but looks like he has some more life left!! I hope you give this a** pathetic and deserving end, no man is allowed to get away with what he does with girls!! (his incident continues in next chapter 😃)
Our lady did not even feel Maan was looking for her 🥱 and what follows as usual makes the heart go "Aw!!!" and "THUD, THUD, THUD..." 😳

So next time all I will write will be Thud Thud Thud. You guys will understand right?
😆😆😆
Brij will get justice soon. I am so going to miss all these comments and chatting with everyone.
Thanks so much. I don't know your name..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: romanceorlove

Chapter 61: Naino ki mat maniyo re...

Loved the start of this chapter 👏👏 kept going THUD, THUD, THUD, THUD & THUD 😳

How blinded we get in our views and beliefs 😡 how this hurts our loved ones!! Not sure who hurts more though, when the truth unwinds 😕!!!

Feel bad for Sujal but another love story getting into the shackles of MU 😲

Again kudos to your idea, we generally only get to see Adi and Pinky as friends or colleagues, in love with each other and that about it. Here you have added a bit of their own story, well done girl!!!

Phew!!! Geet saved but was about to feel scared for the poor girl when you made me smirk reading the treatment this a**###e got. You managed escaping again but not long jerk!!!

Aw!!! you added Darji's POV as well. I love your Darji, again this is first FF where he is sensitive and caring, dotes on Geet :) I don't remember coming across Darji and Savitri's link with each other now, though had an inkling they were involved some way or would want to get Geet and Maan hooked up but did not guess this angle at all!!!

I could not believe it at first, Geet blaming herself for running away from Maan!! That was the most basic human reaction babes!! But hardly did I know there was another MU waiting for them, this time for Geet though, oops

JK & CID in action, Maan's MUs begin to clear :) it was hilarious imagining Dadi's facial expressions through out :)

Well done again Avi, keep going babes!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Geet is too soft hearted to blame other people. She would have assumed it was her. It is her gentleness that I find most attractive about her. There was a reason to create the second MU. I don't like stories where only one person is wrong. Most of us are grey whether we like to think it or not, not all black, not all white..
Thanks again.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: romanceorlove

Chapter 62: Meri Aashiqui Tum hi ho...

Woah!!! you managed such a long chapter 😲 in your schedule 😲 Way to go girl!!! 👏👏

I am surprised MSK did not die of over information 😆😆 -- Dadi's half-truth, Dev finding his letter to Geet, Dev and Tara's relationship, Kabir, Kabir's Mum, Kabir and Megha, Tara's family issues, Tara and Megha turning out to be sisters

Must say though, bad timing Nakul :) would have made a good session, he would have got teased very bad 😆

Proud of Kabir for not taking up MSK's offer 👏

Teasing moments between Dev and Megha made me go "aw!!" 😳

Felt very bad for Geet :(

Finally this lad understood BF could not mean Boy-Friend 😆

"Love is trust. Love is believing in each other. " - agree with you hands down 😊

lovely moments in rain on the terrace :) again you have a commendable way with narration!!!⭐️

Funny when one has a clear head, the other is still in the maze of MU

Getting ahead to read Chap 63 Part 1 again 😳

Comments ki baarish...ClapClapClap
You made my day... I guess an early update will be happening just for you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
so happy that got both maaneet and dev tara doses...

Maaneet
CID daadi ke chaalu pothe😆... and geet ufff... tai chi maan is definitely a heavy dose... kisi ko dosh nahi de sakthe other than he himself for being so extra hot😳😳😳

good girls dont think stuff like this😆

maan j of water drops... 😆 geet ko jhatka diya hoga with the next set of shaayari ...thank god gas off kiya... 😳

Devtara

charmng dev ne apna jaadoo chala diya...

We need to be needed, above all else. 👏⭐️

his gesture to bring meghas memories to chandpoonam was so touchy.. and poonam crying on chands shoulder was lovely... meghas arrival in their life will definitely bring them close...

the naughty dev at the end ... missed him... give them more na plz...

Adinky😆

as guessed his sis... but the best thing i loved there was ur explanation with regard to his shuttering... though we have read adi many times in many stories and he is portrayed the same as show... but am reading this for the first time👏

precap

geet kya good girl banne ki koshish kar rahi hain?🤣


Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃
This Dev has the magic in him...
He can make anyone to act as he wishes without even the other person knowledge...
How easily he made Poonam as a part of the family...
That was really cute he got MMM's pics for her parents...
Maan - Dev team up to trouble Dadi maa... 😆
Geet ne kya kya socha Maan ko dekh kar 😛
Maan J of the water drops 😆
Adi-Pinky story back on track...kaamaka Adi par shak kiya Pinky ne...
bechara kitna gabraya gaya hoga Adi jab usne phone answer nahi kiya hoga...
Geet can stop torturing Maan but Avi will not 😆😳
Part 63 abhi tak katam nahi huva 😲
waiting for more more & more more more...
Edited by reachsky2011 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mai yaha edit karna bhul gayi.😆😆😆😆

lovely update avi. finally all love stories going towards the final happy ending...
Edited by mannu_minnie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lovlyyy part,...

maan playing tricks on dadima...am loving it...but glad that dev is with him in this game...
but dont let him play with dadima for loong...poor thing is lil sad as of now...let her not take it tooo much seriously...but lil mazaa toh lena chahiye maan ko...😆 naughty dadi's naughty pota...😆

lovv Dev for doin what he did today...he is adding life in poonam and chandan... guess Dev in this story is far more matured n understanding than maan...right...
loved the lil closeness and talk chandan n poonam shared...they deserve their set of happiness...hope they get it sooon😊 lovvvd this entire scene, them having fud together, sitting together n watching meghass pictures n evrything, just lovly one...NT missed this ...

and now waiting too see angry NT n Dev manaofyinng her😉😆

phew!!! suuper happy that everything turned out well in adi-pinky case too😃

lovvving whatever maan is doin with geet...poor geet...😃

and where did you stop my dear...how do u come up with such aawwwssommmee romantic moments Aviii...eager to read more of it...
Edited by honeygrape - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Later..?? Bole toh..😛 (Munnabhai style)😆

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