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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: dqno1

🤗 Take your time Doc.

Mari's b'day is on Friday so have to try to write something by then😃

warna real mein fight ho jaayegi 😆

🤗

I know its twinnie's b'day... 😃

Both of you are going to update that day... mere liye treat ho jayegi twinie ke b'day ka 😉

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: Onir
🤗
I know its twinnie's b'day... 😃
Both of you are going to update that day... mere liye treat ho jayegi twinie ke b'day ka 😉

Is your twinnie getting a return gift from you? hopefully? 😳😳

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: dqno1

Is your twinnie getting a return gift from you? hopefully? 😳😳

Doubtful hai ... not sure of any of it

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Barbee

@Barbee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

😊 Love it dear...

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Muskan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: dqno1

will try but no promises

weekend was crazy busy and spent only free time translating..

have some scenes in mind but did not get a chance to type it.😕

Translating ???

Missed u

Will be waiting

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: muskanp

Translating ???

Missed u

Will be waiting

yea, last update was mostly hindi .. Gosh it was too long😆 I realized only when I translated.😆

writing now..😳

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
kahaan hain teaser?

teri thread pe.. pg 19😃

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romanceorlove

@romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Chapter 60: Banwri si preet mori...

Hey Avi, another long one 👏👏👏 (as for my comments, better late than never? 😳)

Is some sense getting knocked in to Maan's head finally? He loves and cares so much for her yet he prefers living with his MUs, mind believes eyes and ears keeps ignoring the heart!!

Dev jealous of Megha 😆 least did he know he would be stuck to her for life 😉 JK & MMM 😆

If I remember it right, this was first mischief played by Mr Tara, as they say, there is always a first 😆; CID, JK & Sherlock Holmes together turned out to be the push our two idiots needed 😉

Geet mad at Tara 😆 impossible!!! Our Ms Self Talk Believing Handa can only be angry with Mr Khadoos Singh Khurana.

As always you have managed to capture all human emotions in this chapter, how our views about people change with situations, after revelations. Its amazing how you remember all loose ends, (I had forgotten Ranbir though not Sona ma'm) how intertwined are all the characters with each other, like life 👏👏

I was hoping Brij 😡would have had it today from Maan for daring to mess with his Lady but looks like he has some more life left!! I hope you give this a** pathetic and deserving end, no man is allowed to get away with what he does with girls!! (his incident continues in next chapter 😃)

Our lady did not even feel Maan was looking for her 🥱 and what follows as usual makes the heart go "Aw!!!" and "THUD, THUD, THUD..." 😳

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romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Chapter 61: Naino ki mat maniyo re...

Loved the start of this chapter 👏👏 kept going THUD, THUD, THUD, THUD & THUD 😳

How blinded we get in our views and beliefs 😡 how this hurts our loved ones!! Not sure who hurts more though, when the truth unwinds 😕!!!

Feel bad for Sujal but another love story getting into the shackles of MU 😲

Again kudos to your idea, we generally only get to see Adi and Pinky as friends or colleagues, in love with each other and that about it. Here you have added a bit of their own story, well done girl!!!

Phew!!! Geet saved but was about to feel scared for the poor girl when you made me smirk reading the treatment this a**###e got. You managed escaping again but not long jerk!!!

Aw!!! you added Darji's POV as well. I love your Darji, again this is first FF where he is sensitive and caring, dotes on Geet :) I don't remember coming across Darji and Savitri's link with each other now, though had an inkling they were involved some way or would want to get Geet and Maan hooked up but did not guess this angle at all!!!

I could not believe it at first, Geet blaming herself for running away from Maan!! That was the most basic human reaction babes!! But hardly did I know there was another MU waiting for them, this time for Geet though, oops

JK & CID in action, Maan's MUs begin to clear :) it was hilarious imagining Dadi's facial expressions through out :)

Well done again Avi, keep going babes!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

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romanceorlove

@romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#350

Chapter 62: Meri Aashiqui Tum hi ho...

Woah!!! you managed such a long chapter 😲 in your schedule 😲 Way to go girl!!! 👏👏

I am surprised MSK did not die of over information 😆😆 -- Dadi's half-truth, Dev finding his letter to Geet, Dev and Tara's relationship, Kabir, Kabir's Mum, Kabir and Megha, Tara's family issues, Tara and Megha turning out to be sisters

Must say though, bad timing Nakul :) would have made a good session, he would have got teased very bad 😆

Proud of Kabir for not taking up MSK's offer 👏

Teasing moments between Dev and Megha made me go "aw!!" 😳

Felt very bad for Geet :(

Finally this lad understood BF could not mean Boy-Friend 😆

"Love is trust. Love is believing in each other. " - agree with you hands down 😊

lovely moments in rain on the terrace :) again you have a commendable way with narration!!!⭐️

Funny when one has a clear head, the other is still in the maze of MU

Getting ahead to read Chap 63 Part 1 again 😳

Edited by romanceorlove - 11 years ago