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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Happy New Year😃

Thanks Avi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 4
Change is the only thing which is constant in life and is the same thing which I am experiencing now. My sense's which has always been active in alerting me of my surroundings has changed its allegiance. My eyes never leaves the sight of her as it only tries to find more about her while I always search to hear her melodious voice in every sound that hits my ears, I wait for the moment of slight touch of her veil every time we have bump into one another. It takes every ounce of my will to resist from tasting this forbidden fruit. She is all bent to change me as she smells like a dew drop making me to hate the thought why I hated that before.

The fact which I always certain about eradicating the darkness & lighting it seems to be lost with the way my life had taken a turn. My day which always used to start with the sprinting before the breaking of dawn to keep me fit and focussed has also changed. Now after sprinting I would do my exercise using fire to help me keep focus on the issue that is on the hand. Every day I try new ways with fire I would light up the edges of the stick with fire and swinging the blazing stick in different ways so as to wipe out that vision which has plastered to my eyes.

That day when our eyes had met, the world around me had just ceased to exist. Those deep blue eyes held me captive in her spell that I felt I wandered into a place where every thing was so serene that I didn't know whether I was lost before or am I getting lost now. I was looking deep into violet & green mixed pupils of her to find what all secrets that could unfold infront of me. But what I found was a haze image of person's face which started to disturb the tranquilly of those orbs a bit later what I saw was it was not just the disturbance but vanquishing the glow with the flame of that persons mere presence which turned into my face. That was the harsh reality of mine which broke my trance and I had left the table in a rush leaving everyone to ponder anything what they wish.

I would now rather light up the whole place to make me remember the fact of my presence in anyones life would only harm everyone. How could I forget why I am all alone? I break one another stick that was in my hand with the rage which had only amplified the concealed fire in me. I have led lonely life because of this reason, when ever I have lost focused I have not only lost my dearest and nearest but also have felt the burnt of it my own self. How unlucky am I to even not retain a companion for even a small part of this long life. With these thoughts cruising in my mind everytime I would never know when the dawn breaks & the day starts. But with my starting ignorance with the surroundings one had not left to remind me about my college and that was Yash who used to call me with his stupid problems.

Exactly now I got a call from Yash making me realise the time as even the sun elevated high in the sky failed to be gain my attention as I was busy fight with the inner battle. I switched on the Bluetooth and without a second delay he started his cribbing.
"Maan do you know what is the problem with this stove the burner is not burning and I am unable to find the lighter which you were playing with last night."

That reminds me of the act of last night when I had held the light in my hand & had snapping the fingers lighting it & switching it off with my thoughts running about the past and trying to get the things straight in present.

"15 minutes." I reply and make my way to start yet another day just like past 8 months but before I leave this shore I put of the fire which I had set around the place. Out of all these things against me this is one thing that I am glad of this deserted place to give me my privacy.

As always my eyes search that place where I had seen her on the first day but as every other day even today I couldn't see her there maybe it was just by chance that she was here that day. I again console my heart which still wants to see her against my will. And in these 8 months every single day didn't end without an encounter of ours but every time I shifted my course away from her as those eyes held something which could not be comprehend. During the classes I try to gauge her reactions but she didn't let me through her lashes making it difficult to read her.

Things which made these encounter possible were Yash & Pari and their budding love story. There talks left me know more about Geet, how she is, how even she came here after losing her family. How lonely she has become now and how she is coping with her life. What her aims are, how she has influenced Pari to be more focused about the future. I get to hear each and every word about them from Yash.

There is not a single place in the college which doesn't remind me of our encounter and just a week ago when Geet was searching for Pari near this fountain at the entrance of the college where I am standing that was the time we met again face to face to let me read her mind through her own blue eyes.

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Edited by Jeevana. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


am first😳

loved the update...

maan is completely in geets spell... loved how u described maan tadping for her sight, sound, touch and smell👏...

is it just maans fear to come close to someone again as he have lost much till now??? or is there some thing else too???

again u left us when their eyes just met... not fair...

agla update jaldi ...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmmm whats he hiding
more like running from
what was his past
that is making him run from her
he wishes to see her and yet doesnt wanna do the same
confusing that aint it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update especially the indepth look of Maan's longing for Geet. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part.. emotions and you... cool... 👏

what's the mystery yar...🤢

guess you need to extend the story... you know what i mean... 😉

i was starting to feel happy finally they met again...🤢.

when saw... the part has been ended ...

my reaction is this 😡

chalo mujhe next update do ...just login and start typing ... 😉

boss and kaam ko bad mein dekhna... 😆


drrose31 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyaa... forgot ... yash and pari... ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update.
So, when will we get to read Maan's story. Looks like even Geet has a sad past. Would like took know her feeling about Maan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was fab one i loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
maan is running away from his past from geet...
yash n pari...
they met again n u ended the part!!!
nt fair

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