If It Had Been Like This(MG ff)#4...Updated Part 32 Pg 3 - Page 2

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Thank u soo much guys i am shocked to see the response in just one day wowww guys and just bcz of this i am updating the next part so soon as i was able to write it soon too seeing such a good response on last part motivated me to write the next part this fast hope u like this part as well thank u luv yaa guys plz keep motivating me like this as this only helps me going and helps me write more and more 🤗



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Part 32


Geet: dadima I will not say anything because now u r decision will be the last decision for me and I promise u both of us will not say anything and will do whatever u tell us to do but I just want to request u one thing that please listen to the full truth first as half truth is more dangerous than full truth and please don't blame maan sir for anything he haven't done anything wrong and he can never do it either please trust us dadima please ...


She said this as tears rolled down her eyes and a sob escaped her mouth as she kept her hands on her mouth to control her sobs...while dadima just looked at her and her motherly heart couldn't see her liked this she has always think of her liked her own daughter so how could a mother see her daughter crying and her tears melted dadima's heart who still believed that her children couldn't do something so wrong and moving forward towards the bed dadima seat beside her and hugged her as geet to responded to her hug and cried in her arms... letting her all the sorrows and pain come out of her heart in the form of her tears while dadima just closed her eyes letting her cry knowing that this tears will help her to lessen her pain and even her tears rolled out of her eyes seeing her beloved geet crying like this and breaking in her arms...but still there were many questions that she wanted to ask maan only as she can see how much broken geet is and she doesn't want her to get stressed anymore at the moment as she understood how week geet is right now and this was not good when she was carrying she knows this plus at the end of the day she is a mother so how can she hurt her own daughter even if she was hurt herself by her child doings she could never do that...


After crying for some time geet was fully warn out but she felt light at heart after crying and lil stressed free that now they won't need to hide anything from dadima but still there was nervousness in her and she was scared too thinking if dadima will accept her or not after knowing the full truth after knowing that she was carrying someone else blood inside her womb will she accept her as her daughter in law or will she love her like this even after knowing past when even her own family didn't accept her how can she expect them to do it and this all was scaring her too hell but at same time she was determined to fulfill the promise that she just now give to dadima ...


Geet was lost in her thoughts when dadima was seeing her every expression after geet come out of her hug after her calming down and she understood that it will be good if she sleeps for a while as if she is awake her mind will not let her rest and she will continuously stress herself thinking about the things going on ...and getting scared so she told her to sleep sternly and didn't let her say a single word of protest and as she was already tired geet slept as soon as she kept her head on the pillow...


Here dadima come out to see a stressed and worried maan standing downstairs holding the sofa's back head...she moved down stairs and keep her hand on his shoulder and called him out in a worried tone as this was not the strong maan standing in front of her whom she knows in and out but here she can see a worried father and lover who is worried for both his would be wife and his upcoming child...


Knowing whose hand is on his shoulder maan turned and just hugged dadima tight knowing that its only she with whom he can share his heart at this moment and was sure that she is the only one who can guide him and help him in all this after all she was mother -father everything for him she was his dadima the one whom he loves more than anyone in his life...


Still hugging dadima maan said...


Maan: I am sorry dadima I am really sorry I know I had hurt u very much today by not telling u about all this but trust us dadima we both haven't done anything wrong please dadima...


When dadima made him to come out of the hug and cupping his face in both her palms she replied to him...


Dadima:If u didn't do anything wrong maan then why did u guys hide it from me maan... why didn't u come to me before and told me u r self about it what do u want me to think about it when I come to know that my would be granddaughter in law geet whom I think as my own daughter is pregnant ...


Dadima left maan and come and seat on the sofa holding her head in both her hands continued...


Dadima: what do u want me to think maan tell me do u know what is going on inside me at this moment do u understand even a lil how much hurt I am by getting to know about it like this when it should have been u coming to me and telling me about it and if this all is not enough I am even confused thinking how could she be pregnant when it's hardly a month that geet joined office ...please tell me maan tell me I want to know the whole truth maan ...


Then maan came and sit on the floor beside her legs and hold her both hands in his taking it off from her head and said in a said in a broken voice starting from when he meet geet first time ...


As he was telling dadima the whole truth about their first meet then all their meets and how every time he used to yell at her taunt her tell her every time how week she is and what not and then how he saved geet from her own brother who wanted to kill her after knowing that she was pregnant and how he saved her and what happened after that and what happened on the first day at their office and then how he slowly realized as to how capable geet was in handling all the office works and how she made him realize to see the happy side of life and not the sad past ...how looking at her leaving happy even after being alone and even after baring the pain of being disowned by her own family never made her a stone hearted person but she just got more strong and become independent and how even after all this her fate from humanity and truth didn't shake ...she was leaving here all happy being punished for the crime she never did but was force to commit it by her own family and her she was bearing it struggling in her this state to earn for herself and her unborn child to give the child a better life while the one who should be punished just wanted to kill her and hide their mistake from the world that they had forced their 18 year old daughter to get married to an unknown NRI just to get rid of her thinking of her as an burden and when they should have supported her they just blamed her saying she must have done something wrong that the guy left her and when they found out she was pregnant they told her to abort it and forget what ever happened thinking it to be a bad dream and when she said she couldn't they just thought to kill her and get rid of their mistake by taking not one but two lives...


Hearing all this dadima shattered completely she just couldn't believe what maan was telling her all the while when maan was telling her all this she just sat their hearing him getting shocked and at last when he told to whole truth to her she was left in a state of huge shock not able to believe that what maan was telling right now had all happened with their geet who always use to smile and make others smile too who could believe looking at her that she has been betrayed and hurt this badly by her own blood and her own people didn't even once think before killing her when...


She just couldn't think all this and then she heard maan say...with his voice full of pain...


Maan: kya app ku abhi lagta hain dadima ki Maine kuch galat kiya...kya yeh Saab Jane ki baad bhi app ku mere yaa geet ki rishty se koi aitraz hain dadima?


When dadima just shook her head in a no not able to say anything as her throat chocked while her tears just started flowing out of her eyes and just hugged him while he too lied his head on her lap feeling light after sharing it with dadima while his eyes too shed tears of pain thinking about the past while once again his guilt started erupting in his heart thinking about his earlier behavior with geet as both of them seat their sharing the pain and digesting the hard truth of life ...


After some time dadima composed herself and come out of the hug and maan too looked at her face feeling her composing herself and he too relaxed and composed himself and looked at dadima asking her...


Maan: dadima kya app abhi bhi hum se naraz hai?


Maan asked this like a small kid who asked this to his mom when he does something wrong while dadima just smiled looking at her grandson who at this moment was looking like a small kid to her who was trying to know if his mother is angry with him or not on his mistake...



She just shook her head smiling at her grandson and said...


Dadima: no maan beta after knowing everything I am not angry on u but I am proud of u today after knowing all this I can say that I did a very good job in raising u with great values and have teached u very well as to how to respect a woman...


Maan: dadima there is no doubt that u r the best ...there would have been no one else who cloud have raised us batter then u did dadima ...and we r lucky to have u ...I love u dadima...


While dadima smiled hearing maan and kissed him on his forehead saying ...


Dadima: I love u too beta... I love u too...


And then he just hugged her legs keeping his head on her lap and closing his eyes while dadima smiled knowing him very well and just brushed his head lovingly ...


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Sorry for any mistakes guys haven't re-read it... please tell me what u thought about this part will be eagerly waiting for u r views on this as i always do dam nervous as i really don't know how it com out 😆


Edited by kkiddoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part
lovely
pls use some colors fr editing i m frm mobile n it doesnt work fr me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

Nice part
lovely
pls use some colors fr editing i m frm mobile n it doesnt work fr me

Thank u dear 😊
i have used colors in editing dear 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tuni mere update ka sandwich banadiya sky 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u wrote it very nice
very good i loved it
awesome
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kkiddoo

Thank u dear😊

i have used colors in editing dear😕

oos sowiee
i mean dark colors
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: varthyadi000

u wrote it very nice
very good i loved it
awesome
waiting for next update


Thank u soo much dear u r saying this means a lot to me now i am not nervous about this part any more thinking if it come out good or not thank u soo much dear 😃

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Originally posted by: suhaaana

oos sowiee
i mean dark colors

no prob dear 😊 dark colors i like light colors more na that's why i use them with color combination blue for maan pink for geet and green for dadima ... 😉 do u any prob kya u were saying some thing like mobile main it doesn't work properly ?😕

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