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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: geetsmile


gey dont say sorry plzz..i know m making u all wait but will try to update at least once pakka

thanks...will b waiting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its November...no update as yet...pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Prologue and CS is Interesting

Geet now married but her husband is in love with another woman

Edited by taahir004 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Both Maan and Geet does not want to marry for Geet its because she wants to continue in her career she just received a good placement and was told by her family that she has to marry as she is of right age .
while for Maan its because he loves a girl from his college and she is also working in his company but he does not know if she also loves him but he knows that she is serious person like him and has no one in her life .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

A day was like year for maan, he spend his whole day in thinking about ria n his family's decision but he was not getting any thing, he only knows that he love ria n somewhere his heart too says that ria is also in love with him. But as dadi said he need to confirm that ria too loves him, but another thought came in his mind that if she doesn't love him, then also he cant be with another gal, he cant love her back, he cant give her ri8 of a wife. He was soo much mad with his family decision, he loves ria n need ria only in his life. Full day went like this.

Whereas Geet,she was lost in her thoughts as it was her off. She looked at up n said "i don't know baba ji, who is that, will he love me, will he respect my feeling n my thoughts moreover, is he ready to spend his life with me". She closed her eyes n smiled only, she was happy with her life, she want to enjoy her day becoz tomm.is the biggest day of her life, she is gng to showcase her 1st design, she was happy n nervous too becoz tomm. Only he is coming to see her, she spend her whole day in thoughts of her would be n her fashion show. Full day passed like that.

Sab kuch badal raha tha

Zindagia v badal rahi h

It was gonna to be best day of Geet life where as worst day for maan life. Both were ready to start their day. Geet woke up early n did her small pray to her baba ji n was rushing to college when mohinder called her "pari yaha aaeiya" Geet came near her papa n asked "what happened papa ji u know m getting late for college,aaj humara fashion show hai." mohinder made her seat on chair then said "hume pata h bt pahle aap bfast kijea" "but m getting late" while Tanya came with geet's sandwich n said "chup chap kha le" Geet made faces n started having it n asked " bhabhi aap nahi chaloge college" Tanya smiled n said "nanad ji chalugi na but i m having exams from 12 so u don't worry i will come, wase v have to do some preparations for ur show" Geet smiled n said "ok i will be waiting for u all" when Geet was about to go when mohinder said "beta woh log aaj nahi aa rahe h so apne show pe bas dhayan dena, they r coming tomm. I requested them" Geet smiled n nodded her head n took blessing of all elders; all gave her best wishes n she went to college for her show.

Whereas maan was happy as he got one more day to think more about this things n after thinking little he thought to know about ria's feeling for him n if it will be positive then he knows what he have to do simply. But he was confident it will be positive so he smiled widely n said "I know what I need to do it perfectly n how"

Day was passing so fastly for geet n maan as both are busy in their world, geet was busy in her show as she wants everything perfect n maan was busy in executing his plan to know ria's feeling everything was gng but everything was changing too, where as their family was excited for their children 1stly geet's parents for her 1st ever show n for the proposal they got from khurana, they know maan will keep their daughter happy but they don't know what's in their daughter destiny. Whereas maan's parents were happy as they know geet have all quality that a gal must have, n she will keep their son happy n more over they are made for eachother, in all one person was damn tensed that was dadi, she know maan, how much rigid he is on his every decision where as she knows her son too, when come to his decision he will fulfil it with hook or crook, but she was feeling bad about geet, she knows geet meet her soo many times n know how navie n innocent she is. She just prayed to god ki jo v ho sab sahi ho.

Everything was gng gud for maan, he was about to get success, so he played his last card n called ria." Hi ria hws u" ria smiled n said "m f9 maan, u say" maan smiled n said "m gr8 u know what I want to share something wid u" but before maan complete ria said "I know what u wanted to say" maan smiled wide n asked "what" ria smiled n said "that u r getting married at last" maan smiled thinking she is talking about them but again she said "u know maan m happy u r getting married at last, i always wanted to see u settled with someone who is perfect for u, nd m 100% sure she will be perfect" maan smiled n asked "how u know m getting married" ria simply answered "isme kya hai maan, u was saying last tym too ur family is behind u to get married soo i was confirm this year uncle n aunty wont leave u, wase i too have something to share with u" maan said "yeh say na" he was excited thinking she is gng to confess her love for him but his thoughts were broked by ria words "maan m too getting married to sanjay verma" whattt as the only word maan said, when ria continued "yes maan i love him from our college days at last he proposed me somedays back n i accepted n now he wanted to marry me so he cxame my home with his parents n my family too accepted" this all words broke maan somewhere deep he too love ria from college days n now she is getting married to someone else he cant accept it happily, after what ria said he was unable to hear he just heard her saying bye n he too in broken voice replied bye to her n cut the phone n he collapsed on floor, tears flowing from his eyes continuously he was feeling miserable n thinking he if had confessed his love in college only she will be his now.

But who know what is written in destiny

Becoz its geet's name always written with maan

He was broken and don't know how to take this all, he kept himself all day in room, it was dinner tym when came in his room with his dinner becoz she wanted to know his decision n more over she was tensed about maan. She stepped inside room which was dark not a single light was on in the room, she 1st switched on the lights of room n then kept the dinner tray on table n went to terrace where maan was sitting alone n kept her hand on his shoulder n softly called him, hearing his name from dadi he broke n hudded dadi from her waist n cried his heart out, dadi patted his head n back n parted from lil. N sat beside n asked "what happened maan" on which maan just said "i lost from 1st love dadi maa" dadi felt sad for him but she need to console him 1st . soo he just patted his face n said "u need to control urself maan, u need to be strong this not the end of life, if u have lost something god must have thought best for you" but maan not listening anything just sat there holding dadi maa. She woke up from there n went inside room n bring food for him n took one morsel near his mouth n said "maan aapko yaad hai aap jab bachpan me v kabi rote the toh humare hath se khate the, or aese his hume pakkad ke baitha karte the" maan nodded his head when dadi gestured him to open mouth n made him eat food n then again said "aap humesa humari baat mante hai na maan, aaj ek baath or maan lijie, geet bahut aachi hai beta bahut khush rakhegi aapko, aap use jane ki kosis toh kijie beta, haan mana woh ria ki tarah modern nahi hogi but beta outdated v nahi hai woh fashion designer her, or sabse bade baat beta ek aache ghar se hai, sanskari hai aage jaa ke iss pariwar ko sambhal sakti hai, jo ki paris me rehne wali nahi kar paegi beta" maan was not naying anything but listening to dadi n then said "kya mai use wahi pyar de paauga dadi jo pyar mere dil me ria ke lie hai" dadi smiled n said "maan pyar toh ho jata hai aap cahe ya na cahe, but bina moka die aap kaese keh sakte h u cant love her, or sabse badi baat beta agar ria v aapse pyar karti toh hum ram ko raaji kar lete but beta humare pass v koi reason nahi h just give her a chance for ur dadi sake think about this" she patted his head n went after taking the food tray, where as maan was left to think about it.

Whereas geet's whole family was present there to see their princess show, which was fab n she got best collection awards which made their day. After show mohinder declared to go for dinner that to their princess fav. Restro, they enjoyed their time at dinner n went home to welcome new day which can change the life of their princess, whereas geet slept with so much expectation from the coming day, like every gal she too have some dreams about her would be.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow at a wonderful surprise! thanks 4 updating! really unexpected bt much appreciative! beautiful emotional update! superbly written! Maan thinks abt everything! Its Geet;s big day! she gets ready! Maan speaks 2 Ria! she is happy he is gtting married! Maan shocked n she explains! Ria tells him she loves Sanjay Verma since college! they r getting married! her family approves! Maan shattered! he shares his pain with dadi! she comforts him n advises him! Maan asks dadi if he will b able to love Geet! Dadi assures him! Geet is best 4 him! Geet's show was a success! she won awards! they celebrate! the next day is important 4 them! update soon! 😊👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
At last u updated.
Waiting for Maaneet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb and Energetic Update

Geet is happy as its her day where her collection will be shown and Maan is happy as has one more day to come up with a plan as he loves Ria from college days and he knows she too will give him a positive answer .
in all this its only Daadima that is stressed and very tensed as she knows that whatever decision Maan takes he will follow it through then her son too is adamant that Maan will have to marry Geet so Daadima wants to know about Maan .

Maan finally phones Ria and she tells him that he is going to get married and she is so happy for him then she also tells him that she is going to marry someone that she loves and this breaks Maan as he believes that if he confessed when he was in college than she would have been his .
Daadima comes and consoles him and also talks about Geet to Maan .
I'm actually happy that Ria too is getting married and I just hope that she goes through with her marriage .
but again Maan is only in love with Ria so how will he treat Geet
will he at least be her friend or will he ignore her

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
maan want speak to ria about his love
but he shattered ria alreads her college mate propose and want marry her dadi consoling him want give chance marring geet. here geet got award her fashion show, all are happy about maaneet allience what will next do waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
maan geet ko ek mauka deke dekho...shayad dadi ki baat sahi ho jaye...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much for the lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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