SS~Ever After Is A Step Away~NOTE PAGE 69 - Page 16

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Rocking fab update! Loved it! Maan confronts Geet abt kissing! Geet has answers to all his ?s! Love this Geet! wonderfully written! Cld nt wait 4 pm! Btw unable to read updates frm 31 Jan to 22 Dec will b in India on holiday! Will read wen I get back!

Originally posted by: dqno1

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The first line made me cringe... 😆

Out of cuiosity now, why is this an SS? It seems like it could be an FF easily. There is, I've always believed, a way of telling a story. There's a charm in every story, and it's a fine line a writer walks while crafting a story. Drag it and the charms lost. It can be extended, sure, but to what end? When I think of this story, I think of two people in love with one another, I think of two individuals who are meant to be, I think of why love hasn't found a way, I think of why they aren't quite together. The moment they find an answer to THE WHY love wins. And how they find it, well, there's many ways as such, but only one right way. And that would makes this an SS. Besides it will have around 15 chapters in total, that I think of as a short story. But many might see that as an FF. So I guess it's just a matter of terms😃

This type of push and pull have been my favorites since I started reading romances😳 Glad you're liking it :)

You wrote it wonderfully.. Thank you :)

Thanks for updating

Originally posted by: Priyasi

I am in LOVE with this FF. I am humbled😳 Once you start reading you just cannot ignore it. Thank you. The concept, the story telling, the language everything is simply PERFECT... And me liking their little fights and Geet is hell bold and Maan, I have never seen him so stupid in front of her... But I am loving it. A girl does what she must 😛 A guy can resist, but how long is debatable😆His inner fight and urge to be with her and yet to stay away with her. Men!!! Life would be so much simpler if they did something with their confused head. 😆You summed it all so nicely. Thank you :)

I am loving this story with every passing update...

But yes, miss the little boy' and the little girl'. I just love their conversation...They'll keep coming now and then😳 I love them too😳 When I write those and think of the kids, I have to smile, I can't help it.

Can I hope for a quick update... Well, cant be satisfied with just one update... Maybe in a day or two😳