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SGuru

@CuteTommy

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Its a quite interesting start...

wat 'll happen wen she hears his name as MAAN???!!!???

OMG... me first... cant even blieve in my dreams... yipeee...

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Awesome update osheen...

i loved the update so much...

i was worried when he dropped her and started driving back.. but destiny made him to get back to her when she was abused for no fault of hers...

he actually did punch teji... 👏 her tayaaji and cousin... how can they be so cruel... i mean she cant speak.. but they dont even consider anything, just decide and treat her like a piece of shit... morons...

and am glad that maan took her away with him... and finally when he is so irritated with her silence and not defending herself for the accusation, he gets to know that she is a mute... a blow... the truth...

and again, the same qn.. when he seems to be so caring... and so against all the crap, how did he end up doing a rape for revenge... something is amiss... uff.. so much of questions in my head...

abhi jaldi jaldi update karo...

Edited by Shruthe - 11 years ago

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KhanAtiyah

@KhanAtiyah

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Wooow!!!!!! The part was sooo beautiful that I can't express in words !!! Absolutely touching & lovely !!! Beautifully written !! I'm speechless ! Muah!!!!!!! <3. <3

Edited by KhanAtiyah - 11 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

so geet cant speak i think she has witnessed something like murder like thing hence this

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Wat the hell her family was

were they human.., no they cant be as they are worst than animals..loved the way Maan grabbed and said tat he would cross his limits if anyone touches her..

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

you gave real blow in ending that geet could not talk really emotional update

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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Wow.. Superb update
Poor geet

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Congratulations on the new story. As usual it is another interesting concept you have bought to your readers. Poor Geet is unable to defend herself but still has pride and self respect in herself as she knows that she is innocent. The knowledge that Geet is unable to talk and has been like this for a few years is a shock to Maan. Once he recognises her it will add to his list of gunnahs and guilt. Waiting fir the next update. 🥱

I hope you will be updating Khumaari - the nocturnal beast soon as I am really enjoying this story of yours as it is an unusual concept but very well written.😊