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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Mera u red them sach? Haha ye sab bakwas tha
i am not considering my self as poet re:-D
u are saying urself as starter u have written almost 50+ poems
i have written hardly 5 or 6 i think:-D

Originally posted by: ---nishu---
becose
i have read some of your work
and
its too gud to be inspired
and that to
from my work
as i knew
i m just fresher hand at writing poem
yaar kuch aata hnahi
bas jo line mind main aati hai
write kR DETI HU
AS SOMETIME I FEEL
WRITING A COMMENT IS MORE DIFFICULT THAN WRITING THOSE FEW LINES

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Part 2

awesome

deal for

blood and brother

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

wazud mera nahi

par phir bhi ,zinda hu main !

kyu bhatak raha tha ,

sadiyyon se !

yeh tujhe dekh kar ,

ab jaana hu main !

seene main pyaas thi ,

tere lahu ki !

jise liye kab se ,

tadap raha tha main !

milli tu .

to lagaa

ki suraj ki tapti

hui garmi ,

jo jal rahi hai mere ander

bujha luga usse !

pee kar tera lahu ,in hootho se !

par ye kambakht ahsaas,

jo nahi the kabhi mere paas !

kyu jagne hai laage

paa kar ,

tere saanso ke garm ahsaas !

hope yu like it guys

just for you all

me need reaction from each and every one

nahi to😡

comment long chahiye😆😆

Edited by ---nishu--- - 12 years ago

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Mera u red them sach? Haha ye sab bakwas tha
i am not considering my self as poet re:-D
u are saying urself as starter u have written almost 50+ poems
i have written hardly 5 or 6 i think:-D

i m telling you truth dera

its really hard for me

to belive

some one admire me this much

ok my work😉😆😆

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

wazud mera nahi

par phir bhi ,zinda hu main !

kyu bhatak raha tha ,

sadiyyon se !

yeh tujhe dekh kar ,

ab jaana hu main !

seene main pyaas thi ,

tere lahu ki !

jise liye kab se ,

tadap raha tha main !

milli tu .

to lagaa

ki suraj ki tapti

hui garmi ,

jo jal rahi hai mere ander

bujha luga usse !

pee kar tera lahu ,in hootho se !

par ye kambakht ahsaas,

jo nahi the kabhi mere paas !

kyu jagne hai laage

paa kar ,

tere saanso ke garm ahsaas !

hope yu like it guys

just for you all

me need reaction from each and every one

nahi to😡

comment long chahiye😆😆