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Posted: 11 years ago
My Parents Part 5
I dedicate this part to 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6.I know it's difficult to satisfy you 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6.But still I hope the Maaneet scenes in this part will give you happiness.Sorry if I am not able to make you happy.This update also has Vicky-Apeksha scenes which cannot be avoided.Bcz these are very important scenes.Just bcz its a maaneet ss the other couples cannot be avoided.Right?

Thanks to my my readers for loving Viksha(The jodi name suggested by Geethanda87.Thanks to you).I know that Ritvik-Asha have lots of fans.But they are loved as Arjun-Purvi from 'Pavitrarishta'.But here they are Vicky and Apeksha.Still I got many good comments proving that they have been loved by my readers.Thanks a lot.
Thanks to ambbiha for telling that this ss is completely different from The Kids Are All Right .I have not seen The Kids Are All Right.Just took the idea of Artificial insemination from The Kids Are All Right and Buddy.


1 month passed.Maan-Aarav became very close to each other.Geet's anger started melting.Vicky-Apeksha continued ignoring each other.Though Apeksha tried her level best to keep Aarav away from Vicky,,Aarav became friendly with Vicky too.

Geet came in wearing a kurti.Maan could'nt take his eyes off her.Geet smiled.


While walking she slipped,suddenly Maan held her.They looked at each other's eyes.

Mahi...mahi...


Aarav came.He was stunned to see Maan holding Geet and Maaneet sharing eye lock.Slowly he smiled.Seeing Aarav Geet moved away from Maan and went inside.
A:What is this dad?Looks so romantic.
M:What nonsense?
A:Tell the truth.Did you start falling for mumma?
M:Are you crazy?
A:Somehow I feel like that.
Slowly Maan smiled.
A:See...you are smiling.So you have fallen in love.Right?


Maan smiled:Leave it Aarav.You won't understand anything.By the way do you have any girl friend?
A:No.
M:But you said your best friend is Pinky.
A:Yes.She is my best friend.
M:She is just your best friend?You never felt any love for her?
A:No.
M:You fool...you would not have realised your love for her.
A:Da,how can we love our best friend?
M:It's better to love your best friend.Because if you break up in the future you can at least keep in touch with her because of friendship.Anyways you think deeply about Pinky and check whether you love her or not.
That night Aarav was only thinking of Pinky...their fun moments...how he shares his happiness and worries with her.Slowly a smile crept on his lips.He took his mobile and dialed Pinky's number.She got excited.
P:Hi Aarav...how did you call me at late night?Usually you sleep early no.
A:I am not able to sleep.
P:Why?
A:I don't know.But Pinky...I know one thing that I miss you.
She was very happy.
P:Miss you too Aarav.
He smiled and cut the call.Pinky blushed thinking of what he said.

Maan opened the door and peeped in.Aarav smiled at Maan.Maan smiled at him seeing his son in love.

Maan remembered Aarav asking him if he has fallen in love with Geet.He smiled.
M:Geet,I wish you were my Aarav's mother.Then my wish to have a family with you would be fulfilled.Geet...are you the one who concieved Aarav?


Geet was busy writing a novel.Maan knocked at the door.
G:Come in.
He came inside.Geet was surprised as she never thought that it was Maan who knocked at the door.
G:Maan!
M:Hi Geet.Heard that you are writing a novel.That's why I came.I love reading.
Geet smiled.
M:Heard that you have written a lot of books.
Geet was proud to admit it:Yes.It's true.
M:But heard that your protogonists are feminists.They hate men.
G:Yes.So what?
M:Why do you write such nonsense stories?
Geet fumed with anger:What?You called my stories Nonsense?

She stared at his face:See...Mr.Maan Singh Khurana...you have not seen my real colour.M:Oh really?A writer should accept criticisms also.If not that writer is weak.
Geet yelled at him:That means I am weak?How dare you say that Mr.Maan Singh Khurana?
M:By the way I don't have to listen to your criticisms as I am an award winning writer.
M:But the rumour is that you bribed the judges to get you an award.
Geet lost her control:Mr.Maan Singh Khurana...how dare you?Wait...
She took the phone.
G:I will complain to the writer's association that an arrogant business tycoon is insulting a well known writer without reading her works.
M:Oh really?Then call.



G:I will really complain.
M:Ok..I don't care.
She thought:This guy is so daring.He does'nt care for anything.
She pretended to be dialing the number and kept the phone close to her ear.Then she lied.
G:I think they are off.Not picking up the phone.
Maan controlled his smile.
M:Geet...be serious.Tell me why you avoided marriage?
G:That is my personal matter.I don't have to share it with you.And you also did'nt get married no Mr.Khurana.
M:I will tell you why I did'nt get married.I have no problem.
G:What?
She never expected him to be open.
Maan looked at her eyes deeply:I loved a girl.But she did'nt love me.I decided that I will marry only her.Understood Geet Handa?
Instead of being irritated she was calm and emotional.


G:How can a man love a lady like this?My dad never loved my mom.He tortured her continously and finally it resulted in her death and my dad got arrested.Tell me how can I opt marriage?
Geet was very emotional.
Maan became sad for her
M:All men are not like your dad Geet.What if a man who really loves you proposes to you?Will you accept him?
Geet became very emotional.

She looked at him.
They were lost in each other's eyes.
Mahi...mahi...

G:Maan...please leave.I need to continue writing.
M:Ok.Sorry for the disturbance.Continue writing.And one more thing.Sorry for ridiculing you.Actually I did'nt mean it.I was just pulling your leg.I have heard that your books are amazing and you truly deserved all the awards you got.
They both smiled at each other.
Maan went out.Without writing Geet sat on the bed and thought of Maan's words(M:All men are not like your dad Geet.What if a man who really loves you proposes to you?Will you accept him?)
Geet smiled.
Slowly she fell into sleep thinking of Maan's sweet dialogue.Though she slept off there was a smile in her lips.
Ater some time again Maan peeped into her room.He saw her sleeping
He sat near her:Geet...I could'nt tell you that I am the one who really loves you.But if I tell you that frankly will you misunderstand me?


He got up and went out.Aarav who watched Maan getting out of Geet's room smiled.


Aarav and Geet were arranging things in the shelf.
A:Mumma,can I ask you some thing?How do you like Maan?
Geet stammered:Why did you ask me about Maan?
A:Tell me mumma.What is your opinion about him?
G:He is ok.
A:Only that much?
G:Earlier I was angry with him.Because when I was angry he was double angry.But now a days when I get angry he keeps silent with a smile on his face.So I think he is not a dusht dhanav as I thought.
A:Mumma,you did'nt want to get married as you felt no one can tolerate your short tempered nature.But since there is dad who does'nt mind your temper why don't you think of marrying him?
Geet could'nt believe it:Aarav!What did you say?
A:Just a suggestion mumma.
G:Stop giving senseless suggestions.
Aarav smiled:Ok.
A book fell down from the shelf.From the book a photograph fell down.They were shocked to see the photograph as it was Vicky-Apeksha's old photograph.
Apeksha came.Geet showed her the photograph.
V:What is this mom?You and Vicky chachu?
Apeksha could'nt face Geet and Aarav.
G:Still you keep his photograph with you?Still you love him?

Flash back...

Vicky and Apeksha met on back stage after her dance show.He was impressed with her dance and congratulated her.He visited her very often as a fan.Later they fell in love.Once Apeksha went to Vicky's house as a surprise.But what she saw there shocked her.
A girl:Vicky...please don't leave my hand.
V:Ovi...go...I can't help it.
O:Don't say like that Vicky.I beg you.I am pregnant.
Apeksha was shattered.
Suddenly Vicky saw Apeksha with a shock.
Apeksha walked towards them.


V:Apeksha!
Ap:Don't utter my name.You are so cheap Vicky.Now onwards there is no relationship between us.
V:Apeksha!
She ran out.

Present...
Apeksha:I did'nt remember about this photograph.I don't love him.I hate Vicky.
Aarav snatched the photograph from Geet.
A:If Vicky chachu has wounded my mom's heart I need to question him.
Ap:Aarav,what are you planning to do?Just ignore it.It is our past.
V:No mom.I can't ignore it as you were a victim.
He grabbed her hand and walked to the drawing where Maan,Vicky and Savitri were sitting.
Aarav threw the photograph at Vicky's face.Vicky held the photo.Everybody was shocked.
S:Aarav!
A:Sorry badi dadimaa,but I can't help it.
They were shocked to see the photograph of Vicky-Apeksha.
A:Tell Vicky chachu,why did you betray my mom?Tell.
V:I did'nt cheat your mom.
A:Then my mom is lying?
V:Apeksha misunderstood me.
Ap:Misunderstanding?I saw with my eyes Vicky.
V:What did you see?I was just talking to my friend Ovi.
Ap:Ok.But what I heard..
V:If you want to know the truth I will call Ovi.
Vicky rang up and told Ovi to come.
O:Ok Vicky,I will come now.

Ovi came.
V:Ovi,please tell the truth to Apeksha.She thinks that I betrayed you and left you alone when you were pregnant.Did I betray you?



Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved maaneet scenes
looks like apeksha really misunderstood vicky!!!!!!!
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Coming out nicely. Keep up the work😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum update
loved mg moments n specially maan teasing geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update... thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful dear
so maan was in love with geet but geet dont believe in love so he never got married. I think geet has started to like maan
vicky and apeksha's misunderstanding will be cleared now
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab update...👏...loved maaneet moments...☺️...so Maan loves Geet from before...❤️...He wanted to marry her but she didn't love him...😔...Maan came to Geet's room and started pulling her leg...😉...Geet told Maan why she hates Men......Maan told her that all men are not same...😎...He told her that someone can love her and propose to her...🤗...Geet went to sleep and kept on thinking about Maan...😳...Geet and Maan shared some romantic moments...☺️...Maan came to Geet's room and saw Geet sleeping and told her that he is the one who loves her a lot...❤️ ❤️...but is scared to tell her as she can misunderstand him...😕...Aarav understood that Geet and Maan likes each other......He told Geet to marry Maan...😛...Geet was shocked to hear that...😲...Geet and Aarav came to know about vicky and Apeksha's relationship...🤔...Aarav questioned Vicky of cheating Apeksha...😡...Vicky confessed that it was a misunderstanding...🥺...He din't cheat her...Vicky calls Ovi to clear the misunderstanding...🤪...waiting to see more maaneet moments......eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsemm iupdate vicky apsgeka truth
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear, loved it a lot. Wowww... geet started liking maan and maan is in love with geet from start thats the reason he didnt marry anyone. Thats great... sooo now i think Viksha's MU will be cleared... amazing dear. Continue soon and thank you for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Maan is loving geet frm past & thats the reason he didnt marry till nw
He want geet to be mother of aarav to make his family
geet n maan's convo in geet's room was superb

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