INNOCENT FLOWER-UPDATED PT 18 PG 116 ON 18-03-2019 - Page 62

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RECAP

Geet was sitting near the window and was writing a letter to god...

Dear God,

Why i slapped him?To cover up my mistake of drooling him.I know i have broken heart.I can't move on so easily.I have took a promise for myself am not gonna love anyone.Am gonna marry that man who papa gonna select for me.But today i was drooling over him shamelessly and slapped for the mistake he never did!Please god help me in this.Let me move on and forget the incident.Why you trust me when i have behaved like a mistrust person.Sorry god!...Maan!...

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Part 12

After writing the letter Geet left it into her window and went away feeling bad.After sometime air blew and the letter went off with the air.Geet came back and saw there was not letter of her and was shocked and looked outside the window and and saw the air is blowing the letter and it was not in her reach.Geet pouted and saw upwards and said,Why are you so angry with me?You blew this letter!

Geet looked at the letter for sometime and thought,Geet,why r u panic...no one is here who can detect your letter!Just let it be!No one going to catch it as it is not in their reach!

Geet pouted looking at the letter and went back to her bed feeling tired. The letter immediately turned its course and blew high and immediately reached Maan's room. He was sitting and was trying to work in laptop.He was glaring at his laptop because he wanted to send an email regarding his work.But due to worse weather he wasn't getting any net access.Air blew towards him making him feel something special.He turned towards the window when the letter entered inside his room from the opposite window. Maan went towards the window and looked outside.It was a pleasant view and soft breeze blew his face.Meanwhile the letter went inside his suitcase which was open.He was packing his clothes as he was about to leave because of the incident today with Geet. He blinked feeling the cool breeze while Geet to felt it in her room who was standing near her window.Both Maaneet decided to befriend themselves as they dont want any worst memories.

Maan walked outside his room closing his suitcase while Geet too walked outside her room towards Maan's room.

Immediately light went off and both bumped into each other.

"Ouch!,Geet exclaimed.

Maan asked hearing her voice,Geet,are you alright?

Geet said,Yeah...you toed me!

Maan mouthed,Sorry!

Geet said,Stay where you are!Ramu kaka,bring candles please!

Ramu kaka said,Yes dear!Geet spoke,May be inverter also went off!Ramu kaka came with the candle and showed the light to them.Both Maaneet had fell each other and had held each other's body.When the light came on that time they were in compromising position for they blushed and left each other.

Both got up while Ramu kaka said,Bitiya,dinner is ready!Will you have it now,or you r going to wait for them?

Geet said,They will be late kaka.We'll have dinner!I hope you don't mind?

Maan nodded no and said,Am hungry!

Ramu kaka went to serve dinner while Maan spoke softly,Geet,i wanted to tell you something!

Geet nodded.

Maan spoke,Am sorry!

Geet was puzzled while Maan continued,Er...for behaving with you like that this morning!

Geet felt bad hearing apologies from him and spoke,Me too sorry!I slapped you!

Maan said immediately,Its ok!Anyone would react like that only for that behaviour!

They fell silent looking around.Their silence said everything that they want to continue speaking when Geet broke her silence,Let's have dinner!

Maan nodded and both went towards dining hall.Geet walked faster that she tripped and was about to fell when she was wrapped by a warm hands.Maan saw her with concern while eye locked immediately.Before they drown themselves into each other Ramu kaka coughed and came towards dining hall holding the dishes.Both Maaneet stood correctly and walked towards the dining hall and sat in front of the table.Ramu kaka's dishes made their stomach grumble.Immediately they heard the laughing Meera and Pinky and Karan and Rudra and Kritika.Karan rubbed his stomach smelling the delicious smell of the dishes and they sat too have the dinner.

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Next morning both Maaneet got up early as they had decided last night to go trekking. Maaneet's friends had boosted them up telling abt their adventures. Both Maaneet started with their early breakfast with their friends and came to the trekking location point. Maan saw Geet excited but something was going on in his mind.He was doubtful that Geet can trek or not and unknowingly he dint wanted Geet to go alone. Meera was throwing instructions which Geet was listening intently but that was theory but not practically.

Maan decided and said,I want to partner with Geet and trek!

His friends were shocked as MSK was going with a girl. Rudra gave an meaningful look to Maan while he avoided his gaze. Rudra nodded while both Maaneet went downwards holding the stick and rope. Meera saw Geet and was happy as Geet was distracted.Immediately they felt tremors and Meera and her friends were shocked as a big avalanche came running down.

Meera screamed with panic,Geet!

While Rudra screamed,Maan!

Both Maaneet saw the avalanche coming and tried to come up.They were halfway when half of the avalanche went downwards below them while some part of ice knocked them and the grip loosened and they fell on the ice which made them stuck deep in the ice.But upper ice covered them immediately.

Rudra and his friends ran towards the avalanche while the security dint let them in.He had called police.Here Maan who was fully equipped tried to dig some ice and lit a torch and screamed,Geet!

Geet dint speak as she was hurted in her head.The hard ice had hit her so hard that she was bleeding in head.

Maan dug some ice to come upwards and screamed,Geet!

Maan turned his torch around him and saw the rope fixer. Maan tied his rope to it tightly and tied it around his waist and started to dig more ice to come upwards.He looked around him and his fingers started to become numb as he started to catch cold.His protective suits were wet due to the ice and he started to breathe less oxygen. Maan felt dizzy then only he saw Geet the other side of him frozen and cold.Maan tried to focus when he saw that she was bleeding.Maan went towards her digging some more ice.

Precap-Maan asked worriedly to the doctor,Her body is freezing,what do i do?Doctor said,Take the clothes off her and give your warmth to her!Maan was shocked hearing it...

Maan saw trembling Geet and closed his eyes and took a deep breath and took off his warm clothes and he started to take off her blankets.He entered inside the blankets and held Geet.Geet trembled as her teeth chattered due to cold.Maan started to rub her naked body slowly.He felt her breast when his hands moved over it and her nipples tightened.Maan froze feeling it with wide eyes.Geet started to breathe unevenly when he hovered on her and immediately kissed her tightly giving oxygen supply from his mouth.

Edited by maangeet9387 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow an update!!
I almost forgot reading this story😆

It's amazing how maan is indirectly bhagwan of geet!

Ab in the real world bhi ye dono attracted hai😳

Next part bhi de do plz


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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Wow an update!!

I almost forgot reading this story😆

It's amazing how maan is indirectly bhagwan of geet!

Ab in the real world bhi ye dono attracted hai😳

Next part bhi de do plz


Waiting!


Will try to give my dear!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
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wow thanks 4 updating! terrific surprise! fabulous update! superbly written! Geet's thoughts well portrayed! she feels bad 4 slapping Maan! Oh no her letter made its way 2 Maan's bag! Maan decides 2 leave! Maaneet apologise 2 each other! they gng trekking n Geet gets hurt! nice precap! update asap 😊👏⭐️

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for updating

Its amazing that Geet still writes her letters to God and still somehow Maan gets them
only this time he needs to read this one and I think then he'll know the person who have been writing them all these years
Both apologize for the morning incident and the next day decides to go trekking with their friends Maan's concern for Geet to trek alone makes him go with her and while trekking an avalanche bowlers over them burying them into the snow lucky Maan has come with his equipment he can dig to surface

precap is captivating
will be waiting for the next chapter
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RECAP

Maan dug some ice to come upwards and screamed,Geet!

Maan turned his torch around him and saw the rope fixer. Maan tied his rope to it tightly and tied it around his waist and started to dig more ice to come upwards.He looked around him and his fingers started to become numb as he started to catch cold.His protective suits were wet due to the ice and he started to breathe less oxygen. Maan felt dizzy then only he saw Geet the other side of him frozen and cold.Maan tried to focus when he saw that she was bleeding.Maan went towards her digging some more ice.

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PART 13

Here Maaneet's friends were worried and constantly troubling the police officer who was trying to calm them.

Rudra said angrily,Why aren't your search team assembling here?

Karan asked bewildered,Till now they will be frozen cold!

Meera said angrily,What i say to papa?He had sent Geet with me thinking,i'll take care of her perfectly!

Kritika said,Don't blame yourself Meera,nothing will happen to Geet!

Pinky who was worried was munching chips in top speed.

Rudra said warningly,Officer this is the limit,till now there's no progress of searching Maaneet!If something happens to them then am not gonna leave you!You know that am Rudra Singhania,i'll make your life hell!

Police officer said softly,Sir,the way which search team was coming,on that way avalanche happened once again.They are coming from other way and it takes time!

Rudra said kicking his car tyre,Damn!Where are you Maan?I hope you are ok!

On that time Maan dug the ice around Geet and she came safely to his arms.She was frozen cold and he was freezing too.He cant able to walk carrying her.In difficulty he dragged her towards a tree which was covered with ice and the tip was seen.He held the tip of the tree to support and held Geet close to his chest.Unknowingly Geet felt him as her god and snuggled to his chest.She whimpered in pain and Maan's strength came back seeing Geet responding to him.

Maan spoke,Geet!

But Geet dint answer and he looked at her serene face as if he was looking his Geet. His heart was beating erratically and he dint understand this feeling for which he feeling for her...or for his Geet. Maan looked around once again and saw a village the other side of the mountain. Maan slowly with difficulty dragged himself and Geet towards the small village.In the beginning of the village he reached,he thought he had travelled there billion years as he was freezing and the body of frozen Geet making him in difficulty.He saw a person in that hazy vision and said,Geet!and fainted.

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Here Maaneet's friends started to search for them along with the search party.They were screaming for Maaneet when their scream made another avalanche and they ran towards the safer place.After that the security officer went with his team alone promising Rudra that he'll bring Maaneet safe and sound.

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Here Maan opened his eyes after few hours and saw that he was covered in numerous blankets.He looked around and saw he was inside a room.He felt the warm fire blazing near him.Maan got up slowly as his bones and muscles were paining due to the exercise he did today carrying frozen Geet.He ran towards the warm fire and opened his palm and feet to be warm and remembered the incident.There was a commotion and a old lady entered inside the room holding a hot chicken soup.Maan's stomach grumbled immediately.He dint look at lady just grabbed the bowl and slurped it.The soup was tasty full of Ginger and Garlic and Chicken.The old lady looked at him smiling as he drank the soup cleaning every morsel of liquid.He was a bit satisfied so he looked at the old lady.

Maan smiled at her and said,Thank you!

The old lady smiled and kept her hand on his forehead as he had fever due to the ice.

Maan sneezed immediately and said sorry.That old lady said,I'll bring you some medicines!

Maan remembered Geet and asked,What happened to the girl who was with me?

That old lady forehead wrinkled with worry and said sadly,She's not well!

Maan was shocked and ran to other room where Geet was sleeping shivering with cold.Maan's heart lurched seeing Geet like that.That old lady came with kada and insisted to have it as it warms him more.Maan took it and drank in one go looking at Geet.

Afterwards Maan asked,Do you know any doctor here?

That old lady answered,I've called him.He'll be coming by now!

Maan nodded but saw towards Geet worriedly.Doctor came and bandaged her wound and gave some paracetamol and said to observe her to Maan.That old lady tried to make drink the soup but Geet cane able to drink so Maan made Geet to drink in spoon slowly.Geet didn't come to consciousness and started to shiver more.Maan was shocked looking her like this and ran to the doctor.

Maan asked worriedly to the doctor,Her body is freezing,what do i do?

Doctor said,Take the clothes off her and give your warmth to her!

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Meanwhile Maaneet's friends were worried.Meera dialled to her parents after so many search and they arrived immediately to Manali.Rudra who saw that Maan was in danger he too dialled to Maan's parents and he too arrived in Manali.Handa farm house became very busy as both Khurana clan and Handa clan were searching for both Maaneet.

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Here Maan was shocked hearing it,how can he.He's totally stranger to her.He can't do this to her.What about her reputation..and what about his reputation.He knows her only his business partner Mohinder Handa's daughter and due to trust on him he's with Geet.Maan knows his limit so he doesn't want to cross his limit.

On that time that old lady asked,What did the doctor said?

Maan told her then the old lady said,Then do it na.You both are husband and wife.So there'll be no hesitation!

Maan was shocked hearing this that how did this old lady misunderstood us.

On that time that old lady said sweetly with twinkle in her eyes,Son,i know you've lots of love for her in your heart and that's why you were protecting her so much.Now also you r taking care of her so much.Am feeling proud that these people also exist in this world!Do it my dear,i wont say to anyone about this!

Maan was shocked looking at the retreating back of the old lady who acknowledged him the husband of Geet and the humanly concern was tagged as love.How come this becomes as humanly concern though Maan doesn't know Geet as his letter girl but the emotions which he feel for his letter girl Geet is same for this Geet also though he's acknowledging as humanly concern. Maan sighed but looked at Geet who was shivering under the numerous blankets.One look at her state and his heart unknowingly cried to save her.His eyes widened feeling a deep lurch inside his heart as his stomach grumbled lurching filled with emotions and he looked at cold Geet. He had an emotional blast looking at trembling Geet and kept his hand on the fire of the candle which was lit nearby to give light to the room.Immediately his hand was stopped by someone.He opened his eyes and saw it was Geet.

Maan asked happily,Geet,you are alright?

Geet said,No!

Maan was shocked and looked at the Geet who was sleeping near him shivering in cold.

Maan said,But..!

But Geet closed his mouth from her soft palm and said,No matter you love me or not or accept me,i'll always be your letter girl!

Maan was shocked hearing it and was about to blast when he felt a sharp burn and he took his hands off the fire. Maan saw around him and felt it was only his dream.How can Geet become his letter girl.

But his one mind said,But why r you confused and why r u stopping yourself?You r trying to save a life.From where Geet and the letter girl Geet both r coming in your mind. Maan,you r trying to save her life!Do it!

After so many conflicts between his good and bad mind,he at once decided to help Geet.

Maan saw trembling Geet and closed his eyes and took a deep breath and took off his warm clothes and he started to take off her blankets.He entered inside the blankets and held Geet. Geet trembled as her teeth chattered due to cold. Maan started to rub her naked body slowly.He felt her breast when his hands moved over it and her nipples tightened. Maan froze feeling it with wide eyes. Geet started to breathe unevenly when he hovered on her and immediately kissed her tightly giving oxygen supply from his mouth. Geet started to breathe heavily as his hands rubbed her body and hands and feet. Geet moaned feeling it as she was being aroused. Maan felt it but still started to rub her body but how can he control his emotions too?When he has seen Geet like this and touched her like this..how can he stop himself?On that time his ***** became stiff and stood. Maan was embarassed feeling it and controlled.But who can stop his emotions..neither himself nor the nature.

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Here both Khurana clan and Handa clan got tired searching for Maaneet and started to blame themselves for being so careless. Suryakanth blamed himself for leaving his son alone in this troubled times.

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Sun dawned and reflected upon a couple who were sleeping peacefully. One was snuggling inside another's chest to hide herself from sun rays. They were Maan and Geet. Maan opened his eyes feeling tickly and saw Geet was sleeping inside his chest.She was freely moving her hands around his chest as if that was her favourite place to snuggle. Maan fell silent seeing her moving but controlled himself as she was creating havoc. After sometime she fell asleep peacefully inside his chest. Then Maan slowly moved her from him and made her sleep inside the numerous blanket.He got up immediately and put his outfit and walked outside.

He called doctor and doctor came and examined her and said,She's fine!I think you did as i instructed you!

Maan immediately said,No doctor,i didn't. Her fever subsided after sometime.So i didn't do anything!

He told lies to doctor and the old lady.

Doctor said,Oh,that's great,may be paracetamol worked!

Maan nodded and turned and saw Geet opening her eyes.Geet saw Maan smiling at her and spoke,Maan!

Doctor said,Geet,you need to take rest.I'll arrange for your transportation!

Geet smiled and said,Thank you.But what happened to me?

Maan said,You were frozen cold Geet when that avalanche happened and doctor saved your life by coming here at right time!Our friends don't know about this.May be they'll be still searching for us!

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Precap

Client Mr.Chopra said happily,Mr.Khurana am so happy today as our project started in collaboration!But i would advice you to keep another architect.Am very disappointed with Sasha.She shows only rich people ideas.We're doing this project for common man,middle class people!

Sasha said politely,Don't worry sir!I'll try my level best to show you best designs.

Mr.Chopra nodded and said,Mr.Khurana,why don't you dance?Young man like you need to be active!

Maan took the hand of Sasha and came to dance floor.He held her waist to twirl her but stopped mid way.

Sasha asked,What happened MK?Maan felt suffocated and said,My apologies Sasha,but am not feeling well!Sasha kept her hand on his forehead and asked,Are you alright?

Maan immediately took the hand off from him and felt more suffocated and said,Bathroom!

Sasha got angry and came back while her colleagues gave a taunting smirk. Maan didn't go to washroom but took his car and went to KM. Maan reached the home and ran inside his room without answering his mother's calls and turned cold shower.He was suffocated when he held Sasha like that.After spending the night with Geet,his body had stopped responding to others.Whenever he held Sasha or any other girl to dance or flirt or even sex with any other girl.He always felt suffocated.As if his body adjusted to Geet's body and he can't live without her body contact.As if Geet had sealed the sanctity of his body inside her body.

Edited by maangeet9387 - 8 years ago
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Thank God usne kuch aur kiya nahi🤣
Warna last precap k baad i had full shak on maan..
But koi nahi wo bhagwan hai na so he controlled himself at the last minute😆

I want to know ki geet pehle realize karegi k maan

But jo bhi ho i love the innocence geet has in this story
Hope it stays intact till the very end

Thanks for both the parts

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Awesome update
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