NEW SS-YOUR HOME BECAME OURS (part 9 updated on page 22) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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(both maan and dadi gets out fro the car..and seeing dadi geet smiles to her seeks her blessings by touching her feet..)
dadi: (st) arrey wah..humaari hone wali bahu tho bohoth sanskaari bhi hai..

(wow..my to be grand daughter in law is very sanskaari too)

maan's pov
(yeh tho dikhne mei hi nahi balki maan se bhi bohot achi lagthi hai..yeh meri dadi ko bhi bohot pyaar karegi..and he mentally scolded himself..are u hear for an alliance or to by a land..i dont know from the moment i saw her i cant take my eye off her..and smiles at her..)

geet: after seeing that elderly lady;just made me remember my on dadi..i took her blessings too.then i saw a handsome maan standing next to her..i think he is her grandson..i dont know it felt,as if i know him from ages..that chocolate brown eyes are so beautiful..is he married??? what..what am i thinking...how does that matter whether he is married or not...geet tu bhi naa...)

geet: namasthe dadi..oh sorry mam..how can i help u???

dadi:its ok dear..u can call me dadi..humari naam savitri devi khurana hai..aur yeh humara potha maan..

(myself savitri devi khurana and this is my grandson maan)

maan: hai

geet:hai..

dadi:bete...hum yahaan aapki di hui ek newspaper advt ki wajah se hai

(daughter.we are hear to talk about the newspaper advt u hav given)

geet: oh haan..dadi kya hum andar jaa kar baath kar sakthe hain??
(okkey..dadi..can we go inside and talk about this??)

dadi: sure..maan come..lets go inside..

(three of them sits in the drawing room of haweli..maan dadi on a sofa and geet opposite to them..)

dadi: isse pehele..ki hum aage ki baath kare.,,beta hum aapko kuch bathaana chahthe hai..hum iss ghar ke pados me rehthe the..22 saal pehele hume yahaan sab bechkar mumbai shift hona pada..ab meri kuch aakhri khwaishe hai..ussme se ek hai yahaan fir settle hona..phir meri maan ki shadi..lekin beta yahaan tho handas rehthe the..mohinder aur rano..

(before we get into the matter..i have to tel u something.we lived here before 22 years,but had to leave because some circumstances..now there is only some wish to be fulfilled ..among them one is to come back here and settle down..and second one is my maan's wedding..but this house was owned by handas earlier..)

geet: haan dadi..abhi bhi ye handa's ka hi hai..maa aur baba ab humaare beech nahi rahe..aur dadi mei geet hoon..agar aap ko yaad ho..
(dadi.now also this house is owned by handa's only..mom and are notalive now..and dadi iam geet..if u remember)

dadi..geet meri..bachi..(dadi goes to her and hugs her tightly)..tumhe patha hei;jab tum chotti thi bilkul ek gudiya jaisi thi..har waqt mere paas hi raha karthi thi..tumhe mere aur maan ke alaawa koi nahi chahiye hotha tha..

(geet..my baby..do u know..when u were a kid..u looked like a small doll..you always stays with me in our home..u only wanted mine and maan's company..)

(geet smiles through her happy tears..and suddenly dadi asks what happen suddenly that she had to take decision to sell this haweli..then geet tells dadi and maan about whatever happened after her parents death;shagun's marriage to aman mehra;then how aman's mom asked her dowry..after hearing all these maan was hell angry on aman and his mom..whom made his angel to go through these much problems in this young age)

maan: geet.. aman mehra..naam suna hai..woh kahaan kaam kartha hai???
(aman mehra...i have heard the name somewere,where does he work??)

geet: woh..jiju engineer hai..khurana construction mei kaam karthe hai..
(he is an engineer..he works in khurana construstion.)

maan: kya aman...woh tho humaare company ka ek efficient worker hai..he is very nice person too..but why cant he stop his mother;s deeds..

geet: jiju loves my didi so much..but cant speak against his parents..now i hope after giving the money didi will be kept happy in her family..

maan: geet..how can u behave so stupid??? is there any guarantee that;aman's mom's bahaviour will change after giving the money..what will u do..that even after giving the money also..she behaves with her in the same way..???

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
awesoome upd.revathy dear.
just loved it so much..
grt going keep it up sweety...
tfd PM too..
t.c.
love ya...
hugs..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
wow ab maan aur dadi ko bhi patha chalgaya yeh geet hai. and maan already dreaming about geet😳

after hearing truth waiting for maan's reaction
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Maanu is right what if she behaves the same way after getting money?.??
Anyways fab update
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
beautiful dear
maan and geet both geting attracted to each other and dadi too imagining geet as her bahu😊
geet told maan and dadi everything about aman and his family
now maan will handle everything as he cant see his angel sad😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Now they realised that it was Geet.What Maan said i true.Even after getting money what if mil doesnt treat shagun well?Dowry isnt a solution.since Maan knows Aman i hop Maan helps out
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Maan to the rescue!!!! I so love this man!
Maan made an excellent point about the mother-in-law! Greedy ppl never get enough!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Nice update! Waiting for Next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
lovely update
maan and daadi start dreaming
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
awesome yaar.. ab shagun ki saas ko pata chalega kisse panga liya.. cont soon hun..

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