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jhilik mukherjee

@mammam

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

THANKS A LOT FR WRITING THIS UPDATE IN SPITE OF UR POOR HEALTH AND HECTIC SCHEDULE. WILL COMMENT AFTER READING THE 2ND PART.

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

U r great writer dear and update was as usual super awesome
And u write so well
Eagerly waiting 4 next part
Thanx 4 d pm dear... Take Care

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Comment raat ko... 😉

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television9

@television9

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Wonderful update... And Thank you too. I love this attitude wala Maan..

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#695

Nice update maan give the project to shasa lovely update waiting the time when maan come to known about truth

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#696

awesome update...⭐️...beautifully written......loved it...❤️...waiting 4 next update......pls continue soon...😊...thank u 4 pm...😃...

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Originally posted by: ritzy09

not done Avi...i want you as a writer not only as a reader and poster of pics...

if you are busy you take break for few days and then start and as i said update slowly but I am not letting you quit...you cant quit...you just cant

Am not cut out for this stuff Ritzy... Sach mein. I can't imagine how all of you can write so much and so well each time. It takes me a torturous time to put something down and even then I am unhappy with it at most times.

I think I am more suited to SS or OS's. Uski koshish karti rahungi😃 when time permits.

🤗Thanks again for being so sweet dear.. Mujhe yeh khushi hai that I was able to make the people whose work I like, like something I did.

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#698

Firstly Avi thanks so much for dedicating this chapter 🤗 Love you ❤️

This whole chapter was full of romance and love in different forms and with different intensities... 😳 Hayee maar daala 😳

Be it the love of longing and one harbored and cherished as pain of years between Chandan-Poonam ... I loved Chandan's approach to hold onto whatever he is being offered for the time being...as if living the love in moments too few but enclosing them in a sand clock to keep reverting them in his mind when he may not be left with them in real... Poonam's desperation and helplessness combined with her anger towards Brij.. sow ell brought forward... I loved that line where she wants to hurt him with a lightening strike only if she could hold onto... 👏👏 One line speaks it all.

Maan-Geet.. Kya bolu in dono ko... 😆 I love them. Chup Bilkul Chup fetarures here again... and me flat ... Mann Thud!!! 😳 Aww BF ka pura biodata/matrimony add de diya par DD ko J ke fog ke siwaye kuch dikha hi nahi... 🤣 Woh baat alag hai ki use lips dikhe... 😉

Dev beech mein aa gaya 😡 Nhai toh 😆 still I know something would've come in between as its Avi's twist... Maan will be made to suffer 😉

Dev-Naina ... ohhh!!! There are one such couple that is so much sizzling yet adorable.. My favourites .. and you including them in this update in such a way just made my day 😃 Shrew's wadrobe is now-a-days getting bolder 😉 Dev ka asar ya phir its her own plan of taming her flirty BF... 😆

Megha-Kabir... Somehow even these two have made a special place in this whole story. They make me smile with their own chemistry... they're somewhere the in between couple where the two different ends are occupied by D-N and M-G...

I liked that thought of Megha where she is craves for more after years of longing and being away from something her own ... Kabir is a new hero in his own sweet way 😳

Shasha ko project de diya 😡😡😡 Maan not only is hurting her but is hurting himself... But then I guess that's needed for this couple to outshine their own follies, fears and insecurities with respect to their feelings for each other...

Waiting for more... 8 parts to go... I have mixed feelings about this ...

Thanks again ... 🤗