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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Amazing update ...oops poonam -chandan relationship still sour ..Megha-karan wow

ooops hamesha maaneet mein yeah call kyo a jati i hate disturbance lol

waiting for next update

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

An emotional update as each couple seems to dealing with a different set of emotions. Very well written. Poonam has been burnt too many times and now doesn't have the courage to take another chance with Chandan. The revelations of Brij's deeds is now impacting on Tara it seems, is she too thinking along the same lines as Chandan. If so I don't think this will stop Dev from marrying her. Megha and Kabir's relationship is moving along nicely. Maan as usual is misunderstanding Geet and is taking steps to distance himself from her and hurting not only her but himself in the process. Looking forward to the other half of this update. 😊

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#713

hi thanks 4 da pm n excellent update! Wonderfully written! Fab song! Poonam has been hurt many times n is afraid of moving ahead wit chandan! Megha n Kabir r happy! They confess! Tara seems to be re thinking! Maan is upset! He is hurtin himself n Geet! update wen u r better! TC !

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#714

Amazing... Loved the way you are writing about all the Couples like Maaneet, Devtara, Megha-kabir, Ponam-chandan Hats off to you ❤️ Maan assigned her work to sasha 😔 poor geet thats so sad.
loved it ... And Congo you are sizzler now

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#715

First and foremost do take care of your health. It's the one thing that's most important, especially when you have a family who depends on you🤗 I'm sure most of us here won't mind waiting while you get back into your full shape.

Regarding the story, I must admit the one twist I never saw coming was Megha's parentage. As with most stories, the promise of a happily ever after with the happily ever after is one that tends to please the readers. Considering all that Megha has always wanted and desired, even if she never voiced it, the idea of her eventually finding herself with a ready-made family--one that will draw her closer by both marriage and blood--is indeed a sweet thing. Bounty after barrenness. I'm going to refrain from commenting on Maan's obtuseness. The man needs to spend a bit more time outside of his head for his own good. As for Chandan and Poonam; I'm sure a part of her has completely forgiven him for the events of the past--if such a thing is is possible--and yet it is clear that she is not ready to allow herself to move move forward, at least with him. Perhaps it is the familiarity of that always having been the only equation to their relationship for a long time, and I suppose an obvious change for the positive will take its time to work its way into her system. As they say: all good things with time.

Edited by Kittya_Cullen - 11 years ago

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#716

update ke neeche comment edit kiya avi

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: priya111111
update ke neeche comment edit kiya avi

working till 11pm tonight. ghar ja ke reply karungi 😃

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#718

just to tell u that i have read the lovely update... will comment tom...

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#719

Wat happened not feeling well
Take care sweety updates could wait
Said that
Actually can't 😛

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#720

U should not stop writing
Ur an amazing writing

Just love every bit of ur writing

Coming to t update awesome

U have so much maintained each character intact
Beautiful yet perfect
Just amazing

This maan really needs a reality check

I felt u rushed through the hurting part of maan as his tai chi

I thought u would elaborate.. But yah it will be too heart breaking to read agreed

Already everyone eating ur head for the milan

😉

Btw u didn't write wat hAppend to geet after maan left her abruptly like that

Ok sorry being a pest rt now