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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 15 and 16 both are great
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 16
awesome dear...
excellent...
too funny...
Geet is now thinking about Maan only...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dance school reopening...

They have arranged a small party...

Most of the students have returned...

Geet has personally called them and asked them to come back...

They can't refuse her...they all come back...

Everyone remembers Dev and they all pray for him to get well soon...

Dev and NT also attend the party in disguise...

Only Dadi knows about that...

Geet had deliberately not invited Maan for the party...

Par Maan ko koi invitation ki zaroorat nahi haina?

maan has also come...

All the students are surprised to see Maan at the school...

The girls are well aware of his attitude...

Still they love him...just for his style and attitude...

Geet ignores him and is busy with others...

Maan can't help but fall in love with her dabang attitude again and again...

But his ego keeps him away from her...

He keeps convincing himself that he is here just to prevent any mishap as he is sure that the culprit would come to attack Geet and he has to find out who it is, the person who is responsible for his brothetr's coma...

Chahe Geet usski pathni ho ya phir Dev ki mangetkar, Dev ke absence mein Geet Maan ki responsibility banjaathi haina? Apne liye nahi par Dev ke liye toh Geet ko protect karna padega, ye Maan ka farz hai, Maan yahan apna farz nibane aaya hai

Dev knows that this is a big opportunity to bring them closer...

But these two show no interest at all...

Dev ko hi kuch karna padega...

Dev Geet ke paas jaatha...

Geet: tum kaun ho? meinne tumme pehle kabhi dekha nahi?

Dev: mein? Mujhe nahi jaanthi?

Dadi comes to the rescue...

Dadi: Geet bete, ye Dev ka friend hai, donno saath mein dance seekhe the, humne hi issko bhulaya hai, ab ye bhi yahan sabko dance sikahyenge, haina Yash?

Dadi winks ...Dev smiles...

Dev: haan Geet

Geet: aapko mera naam kaise patha?

Dadi: humne abhi abhi aapke barein mein Yash ko bathaya

Yash: Dadi aapki bahu bahut smart hai

NT kicks him from behind...smart hai?

Yash: tum yahi ho? meinne dekha hi nahi

Geet: ye kaun hai?

Yash: ye bhi dadi hi bathayenge, Dadi isska kya naam hai?

Dev winks...

Nt: toh tum mere naam nahi jaanthe?

Dev: sshhh, dhere bolo

Dadi: hare Yahs bete, ye kaise mazak hai, aap apne pathni ka naam kaise bhool sakthe? Geet, ye Pari hai, yash ki pathni

Nt is happy now...

Pinky: Geet

Geet: excuse me

NT: ab mein teri pathni hoon, samje?

Dev: kya Dadi? Aapne mere bachalor life ko aaj hi katam kardhi?

Dadi: hare Geet kahan chali gayi?

Pinky: Geet, Maan sir tumme bhula rahe hai

Geet: kya? mujhe unsse nahi milna

Maan comes and drags her inside a room and shuts the door...

Maan: mein bhi yahan tumse milne nahi aaya hoon

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: nahi chod saktha

Geet looks at him, he is very angry...

Maan: tum samajthe kya apne aapko?

Geet: aap ko kissne bhulaya?

Maan: tumne yahan kaise kaise logon ko invite kiya hai?

Maan ko Dev aur NT pe shak hai, innkko kahin dekha hai Maan ne par yaad hi nahi aatha khan dekha tha...Maan is scared that they may have come to hurt Geet...

Geet: mein jissko chahoon invite kar sakthi, aap kaun hothe ho mujhe sawaal karne wale?

Maan gets angry...

Maan: meinne pehle hi mana kiya tha, meinne kaha tha na? koi party ki zaroorat nahi, lekhin tum toh maanthi hi nahi, aur meinne tumse guest list manga tha, aur tumne woh bhi nahi diya tha, tum kya sochkke ye sab kar rahi ho?

Geet: pehle aap bathao ki aap yahan kya kar rahe ho? ye hummara school hai, , aap dance ke barein mein kya jaanthe? yahan wahi aathe hai jinkko iss kala ka samaj hai, jo iss kala ki kather karthe hai, ye hummara mandir hai, yahan aap jaise insaan ki koi jagah nahi hai, samje aap

Maan stares...Geet stares back...

Geet: mein kissi se darthi nahi

Maan holds her shoulders and pins her against the wall...

Maan: toh tum itne bade kalakaar ho?

Geet: haan

Maan: itna ahankaaar achcha nahi hotha

Geet: ye ahankaar nahi, ye kalakaar ka garv hai, aapke faltu ahankaar se issko compare mat karo

Maan: kya?

Geet: aapkke baat katam ho gaya toh mein chaloon?

Maan: tumse baat karna hi bekaar hai

Maan releases her...

Geet leaves...

Maan keeps an eye on her...she won't listen to him anyhow, she would do whatever she wants, Maan has to stay alert, he doesn't want another mishap...

Geet wants to tease Maan, she wants to show him that this is not his KC, this is her place, she is the boss here, and also show him that dancing is not child's play... every one can't dance, definitely not MSK...

Geet introduces Yash to the students...

Geet: dear friends, meet Mr. Yash, hummara naya dance instructor, ye Dev sir ke friend hai

Maan is shocked...he doesn't know any friend like that...

Something is wrong?

Geet continues to parise Yash...

Geet: he is an expert dancer, we are lucky to have him here, we have to thank dev sir for this, hope Dev sir ajldh hi wapas aathe aur humme phir se sikhathe, Dev sir, we miss you, we miss your guidance, pls come back soon

Geet is in tears...all of them feel bad...

Yash: come on guys, lets start the party, come on Geet

Geet: haan, aaj ka special performance by our super talented guest, mr. Yash, every body give him a big hand, welcome to Khurana dance school, Mr.yash

There is a huge round of applause...

Yash gives amindblowing performance...

Geet looks at Maan and smiles...

Geet: kya dekhthe ho? iss kehthe hai kala, aap ko ye samaj mein nahi aayega, issiliye kehthi hoon ki aap isse dhoor raho

Maan stares...

Dev notices Maan's anger...

Dev pulls Geet to join him...

Geet dances with dev...

Maan feels jealous...Dev's plan working...

Geet keeps looking at Maan...

Maan is furious...he keeps staring Geet...

NT can't watch Dev with Geet...

She comes and joins Dev leaving Geet standed in the middle...

Dev moves aside with NT making room for Maan...

Maan steps in...Geet is surprised...

Geet tries to step out of the dance floor...

Maan stops her and pulls her towards him...

Dev changes the music...

Kuban hua ...

Maaneet passionate dance...
Geet mersmerised by Maan's dancing skills...
She can't match his aggression...she surrenders...

She is smitten by his magical touch...

This is not the usual choreographed dance made perfect by practice...

This is spontaneous...this is real...real feelings oozing in his eyes that captivate Geet and enslave her...

Actually yahan Geet kurban ho gayi...

Maan couldn't let her go ...he wants to hold her in his arms like that for ever...

He wants to own her, own her body and soul...

He believes that she belongs to him and him only...

Ye meri hai, meri Geet, Maan ki Geet...

They realize their felings for each other...

Though they keep denying the fact that they need each other, they love each other and they care for each other, they know very well how much their hearts yearn for each other...

They are incomplete without the other, Geet ke bina Maan ahura hai aur Maan ke bina Geet adhuri hai...they complete each other...

There's a huge round of applause...no one has seen such a soulful performance before...

Geet steps back from Maan's hold and she moves away unable to face his eyes...

They are torturing her, that killer look almost killed her...

She has lost herself to him and she feels empty inside as if her soul left her body and merged with him...

Her body aches to merge too...she can feel the urge and it's getting harder and harder to suppress it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
part 17
awesome dear...
excellent...
the impromptu dance too good...
i just love the sequence KH...
damn too romantic and beautiful...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 18

After the dance , dinner is served and the party ends successfully...

Dev clears the crowd quickly and leaves Geet alone ...

Tabhi toh Maan Geet ke aur paas aayega, jasoosi toh ek bahaana hai Geet ke paas rehne ki...

Ab toh Man ko Geet ke saath rehne ki aadat padgayi haina?

Aur Geet ko protect karne ke bahaane Maan ek deewana ki tarah usske peeche karthe raha aur Geet ko admire karthe raha...

Ab toh Maan Geet ki har adaa ka deewana ho gaya hai, usski muskurahat, usska gussa, usski nautanki, usski shararat, usski bewakoofi, usski pagalpan, usski masoomiyat, usski bak bak, usske har nazar, usske har style, usske hawa mein utthe hue zukfein, usske chor aankhen jo hamesha joot bolthe hue pakadjaathe, usske attitude jo Maan ke attitude se kuch kam nahi hai...aur usska zabardast dance...

Haan iss dance ki asar toh donno taraf hai...

Geet is mesmerized in the hands of MSK...

Jaise Maan ke paas koi jadu ki chadi ho jiskke jadu se Geet ko apne marzi pe nachatha...

Geet didn't know what she was doing, she was just reacting to his moves...

And Maan's every move made a longlasting impact on her... .

She is yet to overcome that magical moment...

She is still in that intoxicated state, when she was in his arms...

Aaj tak kissi ke touch ne Geet ke feeling ko itna affect nahi kiya...

Jaise Maan ke touch se usske andar ki jawaani khil utti...

Woh kehthe haina? Kuch kuch hotha hai...haan Geet ko bhi patha hai ki kuch toh hua hai, ya kuch toh ho raha hai...

Ye kaise ehsaas hai jo aaj tak Geet ne mehsoos nahi kiya tha...

Ye bahut anokhe hai jo kissi aur ke saath mehsoos nahi hua, even Dev ke saath aaise kabhi nahi hua jaise aaj Maan ke saath hua tha...

This is strarge, ye kyun hotha hai?

Waise Dev ko Geet bahut kareeb se jaanthi hai magar Maah n ko toh teek se jaanthi bhi nahi...

Magar jo ehsaas Maan ke nasdheekiyan se Geet mehsoos kar paathi woh Dev ke saath kabhi nahi hua...

Ye kaise bandan hai? Ye kaisi dor hai jo inn donno ko bandh ke rakha hai

Geet thinks of the past and realizes that she never had any such feelings for Dev...

As she thinks about the passionate dance with Maan she feels happy...but why?

Ye kaise kushi hai? Aur thoda dar bhi lagth, ye achchi hai ya bhuri?

Aur kya ye sahib hi hai ya nahi?

Mamaji: Geet, wahan kadhe kadhe sogayi ho kya? Yahan aao, mere madat karo

She is helping mamaji to shut down the school...

Par mamaji ka aaise chillana kissi ko bilkul pasand nahi aatha...

Ye toh usska adhikar hai, Geet ke upar chilana , lekhin koi aur Geet ke saath aaisa beshatha toh uska khoon ubaltha...aaise gussa aatha ki usske gala dapakke usske bolthi bandh kartha, haina?

Lekhin mamaji aaj bach gaye MSK se...

Luckily Dev takes mamji also with him...

Geet goes upstairs to switch off the flash lights...

Only Geet is left in the school...

She is a little scared after switching off the lights...

Mamaji has got the torch and Geet calls him...

Ye mamaji achnak kaise gayab ho gaye?

Geet: mamaji...mamaji...

Someone comes with the light...

It's Maan...he switches his mobile light and comes to take her...

Geet keeps looking at him...

She is getting nervous...

As he gets closer Geet's heart pumps faster...

Iss dil ko abhi apni takat dhikana hai kya?

Aaise dudhth jaise koi race ho, hare ye Maan koi electric current hai kya jo mere dil ko itna energy detha? Ye toh Maan hi jaantha ki Geet ko kaisa shock laga hai, haina?

MSK ko apne Mishti ki dil ki dadkhan ko bhi padna aatha haina?

This is what she was fleeing from , she is scared that she might let out her feelings for him...

she was not sure about Maan's feelings...

As Maan moves forward Geet steps back...

She decides to break this silence that's fueling her desire...

She decides to defend herself with her mighty shield, anger...

She wears a fake anger in her eyes...

Geet: aap ka shak katam nahi hua?

Maan knows that she is acting...

He holds the light near her face...

She can't hide her feelings now, her eyes send the wrong signals...

Ye hamesha aaisa hi hothe hai, ye ankhen toh sach ko chuopa nahi pathe...

Bechari Geet, unko sambal nahi payi...

Maan ko dekhthe hi Geet ke aankhen Maan se apne aap batein karne lagthe hai...jaise koi jadu ho? Geet bahut mushkil se bolthi...

Geet: sab chale gaye

Maan: mujhe patha hai

Geet: aap abhi tak nehi gaye?

Maan: jab tum yahan ho toh mein kaise jaasaktha?

Geet: kya?

Maan: mein tujhe akhele kaise chodkke jaatha Geet?

He is very concerned and so caring...

Geet: aap ko galatfami hui hai, mein akhele nahi hoon

Maan: achcha?

Geet: aap ? aap mujhse dhoor raho, aap ko lagtha hai ki mein akheli hoon

Geet is scared...

Maan smiles...

Maan: meinne kab kaha kit um akheli ho, mein hoona tere saath? Mere hothe hue tum kabhi akhele nahi ho sakthi Geet

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, mein hamesha tere saath hi hoon

Geet: mamaji, mamajiii

Maan: mamaji nahi hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: yahan sirf hum donno hai, mein sur tum

Geet starts sweating...

Geet: aap mujhe kuch nahi kar sakthe

Maan: phir tum itna kyun darthi ho?

Geet: nahi, mein kyun daroon? Mujhe koi dar nahi hai

Maan: mujhe lagtha hai kit um mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho

Geet is scared that he would find out her hidden feelings...

Geet: nahi, mujhe choda, mujhe jaana hai

Maan: aaj tum mujhse nahi bach sakhti

Geet: kya?

Maan: tummare ankhen mujhse kuch kehna chahathe hai Geet

Geet: nahi

Maan: haan, tum unkko kyun rokhna chahathi ho Geet?

Geet bows down...

Maan raises her chin...

Maan: ye aankhen mujhse kabhi joot nahi bolthe hai Geet

Geet looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahi...

Wind blows and the screens fly...

They hit a lamp and it falls and breaks breaking the silence of the night...

Maan hugs Geet fearing that someone is there...

Maan: Geet, chalo, hum chalthe hai

He holds her hand rushes down the stairs...

Maan is very scared...

Geet is puzzled...

Maan: Geet, tum teek toh hiana?

Geet: mein bilkul teek hoon

Maan : Geet, tum fikar mat karo, mein tujhe kuch nahi hone doonga

Geet: lekhin mujhe kya hoga?

Maan: tum jaanthi nahi ho Geet, tumme koi marna chahatha

Geet is shocked...that's why Maan is acting weird...

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan Geet, woh tumme bhi marna chahathi

Geet: kaun?

Maan: mujhe patha nahi, par ek bar mein usska patha lagtha toh mein ussko zinda nahi chodoonga

Maan is realy fuming...

Geet can see his pain...he loves his mishty so much...

Geet: toh isska matlab mamaji sahi kehthe the

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, mamaji ko pehle hi patha tha ki Dev ko kissi ne jaanpoochkke marne ki koshsih ki

Maan: tumme pehle hi patha tha? Phir tum itna laparwa kaise reh sakhti ho?

Maan gets angry...ye ladhkki kab sudhregi?

Issko pehle hi patha hai ki yahan koi kathra hai aur ye bar bar yahi aana kyun chahathi?

Geet: mein ussko itne asaani se nahi chodoongi, woh mere Dev sir ko markke bach nahi sakthi, ussko mein sabak sikhathi hoon

Hearing dev's name Maan lets off Geet...

He feesl uneasy...he feels like someone is snatching his mishty from him...taking her far far away from him...and he can't stop her...he is helpless...

He is fighting with himself for one part of his heart yearns to own Geet, it says that she is his mishty, his wife, the other part stops him saying that she is dev's love...

How he hates himself for loving his brother's love...

Though Dev himself wanted them to get married that was a decisiom atken in the fear of death...

Maan withdraws himself , gets back to his shell and he is gone silent...

He drops her at the hostel and leaves with a heavy heart...

He stops following her and hires the detective to keep a watch on her...

He stops seeing her and tries to forget her...

But he can't stop thinking about her and he keeps tarck of her from the detective...

Geet is busy managing the dance school...

Dev helps her and prepares her to handle it on her own...

She has to take care of it now...

Maan is back to his duty...

Though he can't tolerate this distance he maintains his indifference towards Geet...

Poor Geet! She has just now found that Maan is also sailing on the boat...

He too has the same feeling for her as she has for him...

This is mutual...so, what happened to him now...

Why is he moving away from her...

Geet is desperate to see him, she wants to know what's wrong...

Geet wants to meet him somehow...but he has stopped coming to the school and he has banned her from entering KM...

Dadi is worried that they will separate for ever...

She tells about Maan's indifference and is angry with him for his attitude...

She thinks that he is still the same old MSK...

Lekhin Dadi, aap ko fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, Maan toh bahut pehle hi Geet ka DD ban chukka hai...ab toh koi unkko alag nahi kar saktha, MSK bhi...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awesome update n waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part
poor maan thnks she is still in love wid dev..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 18
awesome dear...
oh ho these 2 na...
whats wrong with Maan?
idiot...
the fire is from both the sides...
how come Maan hasnt noticed Dev's empty bed when hes here as Yash?
cont soon dear...
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Part - 19

Deepa, achcha hua tumne mujhe yaad diladhi, Dev toh coma mein haina? Aur Maan apne chote bhai se milna zaroor jaayega, haina?

I forgot about that while thinking about Maneet and Maneet only...

Meinne issko yahi katam karne ka socha tha, par Deepa ki sawaal ne ek aur hospital sequence ka idea dhiya hai...so I'm jumping to that track...

Ye faltu detective Mann ko chulbul aunty ki tarah chatpata kabar dethe rehtha...

Ussko lagtha hai ki ab usske naukri ko kathra hai kyunki koi aur Geet ko follow kar raha hai...

He is offended that Maan doesn't have faith n him and hence hired another detective...

Maan is confused...

Maan aaise kyun karega?

Maan gets angry...

Iss nikambe se koi bhi kaam teek se nahi ho saktha...

Pehle issko kaam se nikhaalna padega...

Maan: tum apne kaam chodke kisske peecha kar rahe ho? Tummara kaam toh Geet pe nazar rakhna aur usske aaspaas rehna thakke koi bhi kathra ho toh tum usse bacha sakthe

Det: par Geet m'am ke saath toh hamesha wahi rehtha, mere kaam bhi wahi kartha toh mein kya kar saktha hoon?

Maan: tum bar bar kisske baat kar rahe ho?

Det: wahi, aaka school chlatha haina? Yash

Maan: Yash? Mein kissi Yash ko nahi jaantha

Det: kya? Toh ye toh aap se bhi bada chalaak nikhlaa

Maan: ye Yash kaun hai?

Det: lagtha hai ki woh Geet m'am ka boyfriend hai

Maan gets furious...

Maan: ye ladhki har din apne BF change karthe rehthi? Toh mera kya? I mean Dev ka kya?

Det: sir

Maan is lost in his thoughts...

He is afraid that he would loose hi Mishti...

Nahi, aaise kaise ho saktha?

Meinne usske ankhon mein jo dekha woh kya joot tha?

Nahi, usske masoom ankhen kabhi joot nahi bolthe, haina?

Phir isska kya matlab?

Shayad woh Yash Geet ke bolebale nature ka faida utana chahatha ho?

Aur iss stupid Geet ko usske barein mein patha nahi ho?

Ye ladhki aaise apne aapko hamesha aaisi musibat mein kaise swaapthi?

Ye toh Geet handa haina? Phir aaise hi karege, yahi toh usski haasiyad haina?

Toh issme sochne ki kya baat hai? Ye zaroor koi nayi musibat mein pasnewali hai, aur ye mamla zyada badne se pehle mujhe hi ussko rokhna padega

Det: sirrr

Maan comes out of his thoughts...

Maan: kya?

Det : mera paisa?

Maan: ye lo, aur uss Yash pe nazar rakhna

Det: toh Geet m'am?

Maan: mein hoona? Mein usspe nazar rakhoonga

Det: sir?

Maan: yaad rakhna, Geet ko koi pareshaani nahi hona chahiye, samje?

Det: ji sir

After he leaves Maan tries to call Geet...

This is the first time he is calling her...

No. bhi uss det ne hi diya tha...

Geet: halo

Maan goes speechless after hearing her voice after so long...

It's only a week since he met her at the school and it seems to him as if he had not heard her for months...

Geet: hare halo, kaun hai? Phone liya toh baat toh karna chahiye haina? Lagtha hai koi pagal hai

Geet cuts the call...

Maan calls back...

Geet finds the same no and gets irritated...

Subhe subhe kaun pareshaan kar raha hai...

Lagtha ye aaise aadmi hai jo call karkke ladhkiyon ko tang kartha, aaj toh mein usse chodhoongi nahi, mein bhi Geet handa hoon

Geet: ullu ke patte, suvar ki aulad, tum apne aap ko kya samajhthe ho? Kuthe, gadhe, kamine tujhe toh mein

Geet starts calling him names...

Maan didn't expect such a language from her...

He is shocked ...

Maan ne aaise lafz pehle kabhi suna hi nahi...

Kisska himmat hotha MSK koaaise galiyaan dene ki?

Maan could't tolerate this anymore, aaise mein Geet do minute mein Maan ke do decade ki izzat karab kardegi, Maan cuts the call this time...

There is no use speaking with this idoit...

Mujhe hi kuch karna padega...

Agar mein ussko warn karne ki koshish kartha toh woh mujhe hi damki degi...

Maan ne itne kam samay mein Geet ko kitne achche se jaanliya...

Patha nahi MSK dekhthe hi Geet ko kya ho jaatha? She turns wild and gets mad at him...

Jaise bhi iss ladhki se Maan kitna dhoor jaane ki koshish kartha kismat uss Geet ko utna hi Kareeb lakhe kade karthi...najaane isska kya matlab ho?

Kyun bar bar ye ladhki mere zindagi mein gusthe rehthi?

Kyun bar bar mujhe isska samna karna padtha?

Kyun bar bar mein usske barein mein sochthe rehtha?

Kyun mein isska itna fikar kartha?

Maan ke paas aaise sawaalon ka jawaab nahi hai, par ek baat toh pacci hai, Maan ab Geet ko akhele nahi chod saktha...

Uss raat Maan Geet ke khayaalon mein hi rehtha...

Jaise Geet ussko itna affect karhti jaise kissi aur ladhki ne nahi liya aajtak...

Pehle toh Maan ko laga ki Dev ne aaise kissi stupid girl ko kahan se laya hai, aur ye apne khandaan mein aake kya karegi? Aur Geet ko dekhthe hi Maan ko laga ki ye bhi ek kamzoor aurat hai jo kissi ko apne rakshak manthi aur usse shadhi karke apne life ko surahshit karna chahathi, ye aurat log mard pe itna dependent kyun hothe hai? Unka apna duniya nahi hotha hai kya? Sab kuch kissi aadmi ke liye kaise kruban karthe hai? Aur unka koi bhi identity nahi hotha hai, they just want a surname, Mrs.Khanna, Mrs.Sharma ya Mrs.Kapoor, kyun? Ms.XYZ hone se kya problem hai? Kyun iss faltu sapne dekhthe ki koi rajkumar aayega unko le jaane ke liye, hum kabhi kissi rajkumari ki intrezaar nahi karthe? Haan, mein to iss rajkumari ke chakkar se dhoor rehna hi chahatha tha, hamesha iss stupid pyaar se bachke reth tha,Maan has always kept away from womwn, he doesn't want to be trapped in their hands in the name of love, pyaar ek handcuff ki tarah aadmi ko bandhkke rakhtha haina?

Magar ab Maan bhi jaane anjaane mein kissi ka kaidhi bngaya haina?

Aur toh aur Maan ko patha bhi nahi chala ki koi pyaar mein itna pagal ho saktha, Geet ko pagal ehthe kehthe Maan kudh pagal bangaya, ab toh lagtha hai ki Geet ko apna aap se dhoor rakhna namunkin hai...ye ladhki waise hi Maan ko tang karthi toh patha nahi kya hoga? Shayad mujhe kissi psychiatrist ki zaroorat padega, kyunki jaldh hi mein apne aapko bhool jaoonga...Maan usse thoda dhoor hi raho, ussko bachne ki chakkar mein kudh pasjaathe toh? Nahi nahi, aaise nahi hoga, MSK kabhi nahi badlega, aur iss ladhki mujhe kuch nahi kar sakthi, mein ek pagal ladhki se dar nahi saktha, mujhe pehle uss ki jaan bachana chahiye aur phir usse mera kya lena dena? Aur ye Yash kaun hai? Jab tak Maan ko patha nahi chaltha ki Geet aur iss yash ke barein mein Maan chain se kaise jeesaktha?

It's not that he is suspecting Geet, he is concerned that Yash may harm her, she has to stay away from Yash, that's what bother's him the most, how can she roam around with someone else?

Next morning Maan goes to meet dev at the hospital as usual...

He meets Dev and leaves for work daily...

Geet finishes her work and comes to see Dev...

So there is no problem that they meet each other...

But Yash held back Geet at the school till late night as they had some work and Geet couldn't come to the hospital at that time...

She comes in the morning...
Geet...isswaqt yahan?
maan stops seeing her...
Geet goes to Dev's room...

Geet is sitting beside Dev...

Maan is about to enter the room and he stops seeing Geet ...

iss waqt andar jaana nahi chahiye?
he keeps staring her...
What? Ye sapna hai ya sach?

Kahin ye raat bar Geet ke barein mein sochne ka asar toh nahi?

Geet Dev se batein kar rahi hai...

Maan looks at her and just can't stop admiring her...

She keeps on chatting with Dev, as if Dev is listening to her...

She tells him about Yash...

"Dev, patha hai kal raat mein kyun nahi aayi?"

"kal raat na, mein Yash ke saath thi, hum log ek naya step form karne ki koshish kar rahe the aur bilkul tummare tarah ye Yash bhi kissi bhi tarah har step ko perfect karkke hi chodtha, mujhe lagtha hai ki yash tera twin-brother hai, Yash is just like you not like your Bro, MSK tummare bhai kaise ho sakthe? Tummare ek bhi character unse nahi miltha, uss kadhoos, sadu , gussewale tummare ghar mein kaise paitha hue?"

Ye Yash ka naam sunthe hi Maan pareshaan hojaatha...aur Geet ke muh se apne barein mein itne achche tareef sunke Maan aur kush hotha...

He gets angry and controls himself for he doesn't want to create a scene at the hospital...

He steps back and waits out till Geet leaves...

Ab toh uss yash ki dulayi karne padegi...

Maan just can't wait to meet this yash...

Dev knows that Maan is there, he knows that Maan is never late, and he knows that Maan should have heard Geet...and from Maan's tone Dev realizes that Maan is upset...

Ab toh iss jealous factor ka faida utana padega...

Bhai itna possessive hai?

Toh ab MSK Geet ko apnane ke liye tayaar ho gaye hai?

Pehle Dadi ko iss kush kabri deni padegi...

As Maan leaves NT enters and she is ready to plunge on Dev and get him hospitalized forever...

She had heard Geet too...

Bechara Dev...ab ussko kaun bachayega?

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