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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
beautiful emotional update
maaneet confessed their love and become one😊
hope geet is not planning to leave
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Fabulous n hawwwt update,
why is geet trying to go away from maan,
wating for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
awesome

I don't want geet to go away from maan

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
part 4
nice part...
is she still planning to leave?
Maan will be heart broken and furious...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
She can't easily give up !!!
Need to fight back to get her love.
wonderful story
do PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update yaar...ye geet aisa kyu kr rhi h maan k saath...ab wo jb maan ko chod k chali jayegi tb kya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A Girl who was born on 15th October

October 16, 2013

Part 5

She couldn't sleep with her heavy mindset, she sat up and held her knees together and looked at Maan, who was sleeping deeply, and she sat there just looking at him, she slowly laid back her head his hard chest and Maan held her in his sleep, and she looked at him and she recollected every moment, every expression, every word, every breathe of Maan, she was making a collection in her heart,

She then sat up and looked at the watch it showed 3.30 in the morning, she turned to see Maan lying on his back, sleeping deeply and he looked more calm, more beautiful in his sleep, a sudden pain hit her heart and she sat near him and caressed his hair, tears filled her eyes and a smile raised in her lips, she saw his bare chest moving up and down due to his breathing, and shyness hit her even in this pained movement looking at her lip marks on his skin,

She giggled between her tear and she kissed on his chest near his heart, "my best birthday gift ever," she smiled and Maan wined in his sleep and turned around, showing his back to her, where she found her nail marks, making lines, she slowly pressed her lips on it and tears rolled down without her permission and she stood up and rushed inside the washroom, she removed the blanket covering her body and stood before the mirror,

The mirror reflected her naked self, and she could see Maan's handmade impressions on her body by his tight holds and she could also feel the pain he gave her and she liked it and cursed herself for enjoying it, she saw herself in the mirror, "Why me, why me," she asked herself, "why should I see him, that too today, why, why should I get dazzled by him, why should I fall for him, and why should he fall for me, and why should I lost myself to him, why, why?" she asked, crying up and after a few minutes,

She went to have her shower, as she turned the hot water knob, the warm water hit her skin and suddenly her whole body was aching due to the pain and she smiled when the water reaches each parts giving her pain and it reminded her his touches and holds everywhere, she was enjoying and she knew she is gonna suffer because of this for a long time, but she stood there still, she made her mind strong, she recollected what's going around,

Then she came out and dressed up and looked at Maan who was still sleeping, she then took the a paper and started to write for him,

Maan,

I am sorry, I am sorry for what I had done and I am sorry for what I am doing, but I have no other way Maan, I had too, I really had too, but I don't want to Maan, I wanted to live with you forever, to be in your love, to know more about you, to see you sleep besides me every day, to spend every night in your arms, spend every day in your love, to see how you will look when you wake up, your mood swing, but I am not so lucky for that Maan, I am not, I am going away from you,

Carrying these dreams with me, and will live the rest of my life thinking about how it will be to be your lover and how it will be to be your wife, growing old with you, it's enough Maan, I feel lucky to have these dreams, and I promise you, you will be my first and last love, I will not give my heart to anyone else, Maan you asked me right, is anyone chasing me and am I trying to hide from someone,

Yes, Maan, he is chasing me and I am running away from him for last five years, and I know if I say this to you, you will try to stop him, but Maan he is so powerful, he is so powerful than anyone else in this world, and I am scared that you might get hurt if I stay here with you, I can't see you in pain Maan, no,

So I am going away, please forget me, please, forget that you ever met me, think this as a bad dream, don't try to find me Maan, please, I want you to be happy, I want you to live as happily as everyone, you should get all the success in this world, the whole world should talk about you and remember I too will be listen to that, smile a bit more Maan, so that I could see that smile in the papers or magazine somewhere,

Maan again please don't try to find me, start a new life, Get married, have children's and I am leaving the gift you gave me, I can't take it, Maan, give this to your wife as my gift, but I am taking this ring with me, this black pearl will always remind me of you and your eyes, Love you Maan, Love you like I never loved anyone, bye, I mean, Good bye Maan, forever,

Your love and only your love...

She completed her letter and looked at Maan and went and kept her letter on the table nearby and weighted it with the jewel box he gave her and took her handbag, and looked at him, "What are you thinking girl, get out now, before he wakes up." Her mind warned, she made her heart hard and went toward the door and as she reached the door, she turned back and saw him, she can't control herself,

She rushed back to him and pressed her lips on his lips for once and caressed his face and ran away, as she came out, she looked at the watchman, "Ramu Bhai," she called, "Ji Madam," he came near her, "Ramu Bhai I am vacating the apartment today, but I have guest in my apartment, he is sleeping, wake him up at 6.30 with a black coffee , with no milk and one cube of sugar and then after he leaves lock the door and give the key to the owner," she said,

"Ok Madam," he said and she took thousand rupees and gave him, "Take it Bhai, bye," She said with a smile, "Bye Madam, take care and if you come back to Delhi, come here to see us all," he said and she smiled big, "sure, sure, this would be the one place I would be aching to come back," she said and looked at her apartment, "I am leaving my soul here," she thought and went away,

Maan sleep got disturbed as the sunlight hit him, he stretched his body as he sat up, and suddenly the reality hit him, he was not in his bed room, or in his mansion and what happened yesterday came before him as a dream, and he turned beside him, "where is she," Maan looked and found himself still undressed, and he looked around, she was not there,

His nightmare hit him, he stood up rushed and looked around and saw his dress on the chair, he dressed up and went to the wash room, she was not there and he rushed around the whole apartment, no one was there, he then rushed out, and saw a guy walking towards him, "Sir, you are awake," he asked and Maan looked at him puzzled, "Madam ji said to wake you up at 6.30 and give you a black coffee, with no milk and one cube of sugar,"

Maan looked at him as his nightmare turning true, he looked at the guy and got the coffee and kept it on the table and saw the Jewel case he gave her, "She left behind my gift too," Maan thought and saw the letter underneath it, he took the letter and he read it, anger and pain both filled his heart as he read the letter and he crushed the letter and put it down, "What the hell did she think of me, Forget her, no, no, I will not, I decided to live with her and I will live with her, I will find her and make her mine and whoever is chasing her will die with my hands,"

"I will not let you vanish like this girl, I will not," Maan anger raised in him and looked around and got his mobile and car keys and got out of the apartment with the letter and the jewel case, I will find you and will make you wear this on our wedding, it's Maan Singh Khurana's promise and not even the gods could change it," he said looking at the jewel case and rushed out, it was too early and the roads were still deserted, Maan knew exactly where he was going to go,

Maan stopped his car before a small house and he rushed in and knocked on the door, "Mr.Khurana," Mr.Kumar, the travel agent, got shocked as he saw Maan this early at this door steps, "Mr.Khurana, Please come in, what can I do for you sir," Mr.Kumar asked seeing Maan's anger filled eyes, "Mr.Kumar, you remember we met in a birthday party yesterday right, of,," Maan forgot what name he said,

"Ms.Sona," Mr.Kumar asked, "Yes, yes, and you said you came to deliver the tickets rights," Maan asked and he too nodded, "Where, where was she planning to go, where," Maan asked and Mr.Kumar looked at him puzzled, "why is he asking this" he thought, "where," Maan yelled freaking Mr.Kumar, "To Bangalore, today's morning flight" Mr.Kumar said, "do you have a copy of that ticket," Maan asked and Mr.Kumar nodded,

Maan asked for it and Mr.Kumar too gave that copy, "Thank you." Maan said and rushed away, Maan while walking down, called Adi, "Adi," Maan voice was so stern, "Maan, where have you vanished, we had been," Adi started to speak, "Cut it off, I am going to Bangalore and inform to everyone and take care of the business until I come back and if you need to get signed, get Dev's"

"No one should feel that I am away, ok, and take care of Dadi, Dev and Annie," Maan said and cut the call, before Adi could say anything, "Maan," Adi said but his call was already disconnected, "what happened to him, Bangalore, what's going on," Adi thought confused but decided not to question Maan as he knew him very well, Maan then rushed to his car, and called Dev, "Dev," he yelled, "Bro," Dev spoke in his half sleep, "Dev go to my room, and take my pass port and meet me at the Airport now," Maan said and Cut the call, Dev was starting as he don't know what going on, but he could never question his brother,

Maan was walking before the airport, "wait, I knew she had gone to Bangalore but, from there," Maan thought, and he made another call, "Sanjay," Maan voice made Sanjay to jump up in his bed, "Mr.Khurana," he said, and looked at his watch, "Sanjay I need your help," Maan said and Sanjay shook his head, "Sure Mr.Khurana, what should I do," He asked, "I want you to come down to the airport now, with your passport"

"Now," Sanjay asked, "Yes, now, can you," Maan asked and Sanjay said an ok and as he cut the call, he saw Dev getting down from the car, "Bro," he shouted, "Bro, please tell me what going on," Dev asked as he came near Maan, "Nothing dev, My Passport," Maan asked and Dev gave him, "I will tell you, everything later," Maan said and Dev nodded and turned back and stopped still as he saw Sanjay, "Bro, is that Sanjay, our private detective," Dev asked looking back at Maan, who nodded,

"Bro, is everything ok," Dev asked worried, "Go, I will tell you later," Maan said in his bossy tone and Dev too went away, "Hello Mr.Khurana, what can I do for you," Sanjay asked as he came up, "You have to find a girl," Maan said shocking Sanjay to the core, "A girl," he paused and Maan looked at him in his stern look, "ok, sure, give me the details," He asked, "look, I saw her just yesterday in a party and I just knew that she was going to Bangalore today thru today's early morning flight, and I don't have any other details except her birthday date, it's October 15th" Maan said,

Sanjay was looking at Maan as he doesn't know what to say, "Ok, Mr.Khurana, you have her photo, atleast." Sanjay asked and Maan nodded a no, "wait if she is going to Bangalore, from here then her face would be in this CC TV footages in the airport," Sanjay said, Maan looked at him, "Can we see it," Maan asked, "One minute Mr.Khurana," Sanjay said and rushed away, then he appeared after a few minutes,

"Everything is done Mr.Khurana, come on in," he said and walked Maan to the control room, "here we have the footage of the everyone who had been here from yesterday Midnight, see if you can see her," Sanjay said as he pulled a chair for Maan, Maan sat there and started to view the footages, after watching for so long, Maan hit the table, "She is not in here," Maan said,

"But these are the footages of the Bangalore flight counters," a guy with them said, "Wait, can you show all the flight counter footages," Maan asked, "exactly after 3 and before 6," the guy said ok and showed Maan the footages, Maan was watching it all very carefully, and after a few minutes of watching, "Stop," Maan said and they paused the footage, "that scarf girl," Maan pointed to a girl who was wearing a big coolers and covered her face with a scarf,

"Are you sure that's her Mr.Khurana, because I can't see her face and," Sanjay asked doubted, Maan grinned and pointed towards her hand, "see that black pearl ring," Maan showed and Sanjay got it, "where is she heading to Ravi," Sanjay asked and the guy next to him, looked at the footage, "At this timing and this place, she must have been going to California," the guy said,

"California?" Sanjay asked looking at Maan, "Now what sir", he asked, "let's go to California," Maan said and Sanjay looked at him and nodded a yes, "Go, where ever you want to go angel, hide where ever you want to, but Maan Singh Khurana will find you somehow and make you mine, even if takes my life time," Maan said with a grin and walked away,

Precap: Truth about his girl... (Next part filled with lots of emotions and turns,,,, and will post it this week even, within Friday,)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
somebody is chasing geet 😲 she is running frm past 5 years like this ..
who is chasing geet & why ??
wowww maan promised himself to find geet ...got info also that she went to califonia ..
waiting for nxt eagerly
Edited by _SnowFlakes_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...So Maan in action to find his girl... i am sure he will find her but where i wonder... and what is that girl hiding??
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet maan is coming...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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