The Locket (12) MG FF, new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 56

Originally posted by: mishtikhurana

Sorry for less likes in last chapter, I think its related to blog update, which is password protected. So don't feel sad...readers should feel sad.

You are right. A lot of them have PM'd me their responses only because they are too shy or they say they don't speak good English.

I will start my update with emotional chap 2. where Maan had a shattered heart and played same tune after 6 years of his parent's accident.

"Dard mein Dubi Dhun Ho, Seene Mein Ik Sulagan Ho

Saanson Men Halaki Chubhan Ho, Sahami Huyi DhaDakan Ho

Doharaate Rahen Bas Geet naye, Duniyaa Se Rahen Begaane"

😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔

I usually play the song on repeat when I have to write an update so Beqarar dil was one of my hardest to write as I was in tears too. The first two stanzas are in such a contrast to the last one.

Sadistic update...I am also in sadistic mood today and breaking-down with Maan. "Finally they managed to change his expression from anguish to serenity as they roamed through his thick hair and over his expressive eyes that had wept for his dreams that were lost tonight."....wonder ful description of his wonderful face which turned from shattered to calm,just be in Geet's dream (an illusion for him..." MUs ...GRRR...UFFF")

It is the divine grace of God when nature is the only thing left to soothe some hurts. He could not open up about this to anyone, so nature had to soothe him.

Thank God ! Geet already read the dairy before he feed his love to flames...me again sobbing😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 "..."I love you Geet Handa and I am going to ask you to marry me today"...when Maan burned that page without releasing the paper and burned his fingers, make me feel his heart is burning.🥺

How hard must it be to let love go from you? I tried for that feel... me too sad

Awww... such a sweet dream to marry with his Mishty but Mu's ne sab KACHRA ker diya.

This track is necessary to change the quiet shy boy into passionate possessive Maan, warna main nahi karti😃

"Desperate times called for desperate measures." very true...waise bhi ghar mein ek nahi 2-2 'agent 007' hai. Don't worry Maan babu if you didn't steel her and marry her in SRK style your bro and DM are offering you oppurtunities..."itni shiddat se maine tumhe paane ki koshish ki hai ki har zarre ne mujhe tumse milane ki koshish ki hai"

So true😆

Such a KHADOOS...again hurting innocent Nakul and Geet."..."Tum tension mat lo Nakul. Hum dono mil ke tumhare Maan Sir ka mood chutki mein theek kardenge. Main office mein aur tum ghar mein, theek hai?".🤣...Maan you are going to live a good and long life filled with great and terrible moments that you cannot even imagine yet! Geet aur Nakul mil ker tumhara kya haal kerne wale hai. Ab tujhe adrakwali chai, 2 fruits anr parathewali gali ke parathe nahi GHA-PHOOS milaga khane ko.😈

chahe kitna jagda ho jaaye koi ladki apne pyaar ko bhookha nahi dekh sakti.. meri jhalli moti mombatti hai... she will melt too..😳

ROFL, geet's innocent cribbings and gusess to babaji...Maan babu ab tum shehri-babu se videshi babu ho gaye ho...."Videshi sho-sha dekh lo inke! Hmmmph. "

Dadi's 007 aentena active again...thanks for giving chance to our videshi-babu and gaonwali to bloom their pyar-mohabbat. She is supper-fast...thinking about great grandkids and dancing in front of mirror (which reminds me GHSP, which will repeat on monday in usa).

KC's employee ke khair nahi hai...really deadly storm is coming...is it a Blizzard or Hurricane or Volcano ?????

Now add Geet to that mix..😆

precap: I want to slap forehead not my but Geet's...Dhakkan, usein BF nafi BFF kehtey hai...kyon jaley per namak chidak rahi hai. 🤣

Tum Geet ko kam mat samajhna... she is the only one to confuse him with her thoughts...😆

Thanks so much for such a pyaara comment again.

You went and re-read the chapters too...😳 I hate reading my own writing even the first time so I applaud you for that..👏

Originally posted by: ambeern

Simply superb
Awesome
Wonderful update
Loved it
Precap is interesting

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsemnn update

Originally posted by: gill123

Now dd return loved the update waiting the way geet going to manofy maan

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

So after completing the circle of past,we are here at the present again.Maan believing that Geet loves Dev and he is heartbroken to see her in her brother's arms.So our super hero decides to leave everything and go out of their life!!!!

Awww,kya MU hai yaar!!!!

And now the office staff will face the tornado of Maan's anger.

Eagerly waiting for next part.