The Locket (12) MG FF, new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jojo2802

nyc part...excited for next part...nd plz blog mein mat dalna...i will surely comment from now on.


Thanks😃 As long as everyone supports me I will keep it here only
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ameeranalikhan

good update

avi aap k liye jaisa teekh lagai waisa hi update kijiye😊
maan is bundle of misunderstanding
thoda gussay pe khabo rakho maan chill misty apki hi hai😉

Advance mein mubarak". Giggling to herself, she did a twirl on the not so painful foot in front of the mirror. Savitri is the coolest dadi


Thanks Ameera. Koi toote dil pe kaise kaboo rakh sakta hai..


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

ufff geet pyaar toh door ki baat hai yeh toh aap parr bhadakne ke chakkar mein hain
yaar he assumes too much
and she hasnt had he chance to clarify her stance
ufff what to do he knows she wouldnt have let dev come near him if she didnt love him
which she does but as her jiju to be
and her devar to be
but what to do maan toh maan hain
this should be fun
geet yaar aur bhadkayi inhe by saying such things
hmmm i wouldnt mind if they are long and spaced out or short and frequent
as long as we get more updates i dont mind either way
cheers for pm


Chavvi how is he supposed to clarify beyond what he saw. It's been only a few hours now.. thoda time toh de do..

besides that I want a J man, passionate and possessive.. so that's what's coming😃

Thanks for the support
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

Uh ooh!!!😲

now i knw why last precape said 'dusht dhanav'...another misunderstanding ...it was saddening to see maan so heart broken...& he burnt the diary also😭😭😭
every time he assumes n our bamby has to deal with its repurcussions😡 wait maan till tara or dev knw abt this...😈
i thought geet wd b all sad aftr seeing maan so angry bt luvd how she took it all postively n can't wait to see geet doing "din bhar pyar se baatein" n all😎...n luv daadi😆 she z a sweetheart
& nakul... us bechary ki muft main class ho gai🤣
& OmG the precape had me superrr excited eagerly waiting for the next part!!!👏👍🏼
Thank u...thank u thank u so much for the update Avi!!!😳😊


Pooh🤗

I am excited to write it too😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: annbell

I'm soo sorry .. i really forgot to press "like" button for the previous update ..

nd abt today's update its just fantastic as always..
maan is totally heartbroken 💔, frustrated , angry😡, ...
i couldn't accept d fact dat he just burnt all pages of his dairy.. 😔
yeah from his p.o.v. he is doing right as he don't want to be an obstacle in his brother's life ..
nd mainly he is not able to overcome his love for geet as it is soo deep dat no one could ever imagine ..
his dream.. as it is adding fuel to an already flaming fire ..
but his heart is breaking knowing his dream will never come true..
on d other hand geet is too nave to understand d reason of his anger..
poor geet trying to make him happy... by preapring lunch nd wat not..
interesting part is daadi started her matchmaking without knowing dat dey are already in love .. only d confession is left..
most importantly maan's misunderstanding should be cleared ..
hmm ..
i'm excited to know dat dey are going to work together.. i think der is more to come in picture ..
nd i loved d precap 😃..
geet is going to face a possessive maan .. i don't know how she is going to handle d situation and him ..
excited to read further..
maan lover boy to dushat dhanavv possessive Khurana .. 😃..


You summarized it so nicely. Thank you.

Yup let the fun begin now.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatema_007

Ufff nothing can be done of this angry but idiot young man ...kuch bhi nahi jaanta ..na kisiko kuch puchta hain aur nahi batane deta hain..apne aphi har batt ki kuch na kuch conclusions bana letahe 😡
I am soo worried for Geet cauz she's the one who'll be the most hurt in this fuss


Nahi hurt hogi.. tum log kitna darte ho yaar...😲 mazze lo. it will be fun


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30

lovely update
oh no maan thinks geet is the girl whom dev loves


so he wants to stay away from them
maan dreaming about geet😳
geet preparing breakfast for maan😃
aur maan tho apne DD mode mai agaya
dadi ne apna hobby shuru kardiya matchmaking
staff is happy that dev and dadi are out of office
arre tum log ko nahi patha ye toofan se phele ka sanata hai😆
ab dekho real DD ko poor KC staff
haha geet maan ko sun rahi hai ki she has seen people who are foreign return but doesn't behave like him
but geet to geet hai BF(bachpan ka friend)
ab ye maan thodina samjhega😕
dear BF ka maine break fast , boy friend patha hai but bachpan ka freind ye tho hamari jhalli hi soch sakthi hai👍🏼

eagerly waiting for next part


I loved your comment.. so cute the little emos are 😃

Thanks for the support.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AISHAJS

Please get rid of this confusion soon, but the angry young man is also very appealing. Thank you for the update.


So angry young possessive and passionate should be the most appealing😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

Sad about maan's condition his dreams shattered to see his love in Dev's arms but who gonna tell him that Dev is her DeVeer Ji only 😆 Nakul bear DD's anger ... Geet such innocence trying to reason out his behaviour and going to office with him WHAT to office Maan will eat her alive 😆 I jist hope this MU solve soon and Dev introduce his Tara to Maan...
Precap: Geet's BF teji Bachpan ka friend 😆 Maan soche ga jab chor k gaya tha kitni masoom thi and now she has a BF and going to marry my bro adsending roses fir him 🤣


not to forget the doodhwala bhaiya and the school teacher in HP. lots of fun planned😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for less likes in last chapter, I think its related to blog update, which is password protected. So don't feel sad...readers should feel sad.

I will start my update with emotional chap 2. where Maan had a shattered heart and played same tune after 6 years of his parent's accident.

"Dard mein Dubi Dhun Ho, Seene Mein Ik Sulagan Ho
Saanson Men Halaki Chubhan Ho, Sahami Huyi DhaDakan Ho
Doharaate Rahen Bas Geet naye, Duniyaa Se Rahen Begaane"

😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔😭💔
Sadistic update...I am also in sadistic mood today and breaking-down with Maan. "Finally they managed to change his expression from anguish to serenity as they roamed through his thick hair and over his expressive eyes that had wept for his dreams that were lost tonight."....wonder ful description of his wonderful face which turned from shattered to calm,just be in Geet's dream (an illusion for him..." MUs ...GRRR...UFFF")
Thank God ! Geet already read the dairy before he feed his love to flames...me again sobbing😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 "..."I love you Geet Handa and I am going to ask you to marry me today"...when Maan burned that page without releasing the paper and burned his fingers, make me feel his heart is burning.🥺
Awww... such a sweet dream to marry with his Mishty but Mu's ne sab KACHRA ker diya."Desperate times called for desperate measures." very true...waise bhi ghar mein ek nahi 2-2 'agent 007' hai. Don't worry Maan babu if you didn't steel her and marry her in SRK style your bro and DM are offering you oppurtunities..."itni shiddat se maine tumhe paane ki koshish ki hai ki har zarre ne mujhe tumse milane ki koshish ki hai"
Such a KHADOOS...gain hurting innocent Nakul and Geet."..."Tum tension mat lo Nakul. Hum dono mil ke tumhare Maan Sir ka mood chutki mein theek kardenge. Main office mein aur tum ghar mein, theek hai?".🤣...Maan you are going to live a good and long life filled with great and terrible moments that you cannot even imagine yet! Geet aur Nakul mil ker tumhara kya haal kerne wale hai. Ab tujhe adrakwali chai, 2 fruits anr parathewali gali ke parathe nahi GHA-PHOOS milaga khane ko.😈

ROFL, geet's innocent cribbings and gusess to babaji...Maan babu ab tum shehri-babu se videshi babu ho gaye ho...."Videshi sho-sha dekh lo inke! Hmmmph. "
Dadi's 007 aentena active again...thanks for giving chance to our videshi-babu and gaonwali to bloom their pyar-mohabbat. She is supper-fast...thinking about great grandkids and dancing in front of mirror (which reminds me GHSP, which will repeat on monday in usa).
KC's employee ke khair nahi hai...really deadly storm is coming...is it a Blizzard or Hurricane or Volcano ?????


precap: I want to slap forehead not my but Geet's...Dhakkan, usein BF nafi BFF kehtey hai...kyon jaley per namak chidak rahi hai. 🤣


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