MG-SS - THE PUNISHMENT- THREAD 7- UPDATED - EPILOGUE/ FINAL PART-Pg104 - Page 76

Originally posted by: freya123

superb part

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

👏
wow! what a story! i loved it very much!!
i like the most...
story line
geet ka character
type of punishment
simple character of maan
no villaain no kava dava
quotes
cs
maan ki family
aapko pata chala muje sab achha laga!!!!!!!!!!
jis simple note pe story suru huyi thi ,vohi simple note pe puri hui
gf ki most of story me maan ka character stong hota hai...par yaha geet ka character simple , strong aur positive tha.aapki writing bhi bahut achhi hai
muje ye story ke bare me der se pata chala par main khush hoon ke i am part of this journey...
aur aapka jaldi jaldi update dena to...sone pe suhaga tha!

Originally posted by: vkrish

Thank u for this ff...awesome and a sweet end.👏

Originally posted by: manikka

superb end dear...

geet got her own family filled with love and love only...

Superb , amazing and fantastic ff love it amazing sweet ending

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

First of all congrats for completing your very first story so brilliantly

It was a very complimentary moment really

I can understand how it feels when the first story comes to end, I'd literally cried the day my first FF had been finished but felt praised as well among my friends. I expect same for you

I loved how story started with Maan Geet being complete contrary and at the end they became one purely. Maan became free from all his ill-deed and forgiven by Geet and been guided too. Their journey was a complete bliss to know. Finally they became united and blessed by baby boy that was amazing, so sweet moment.

Well done for this complete journey and very best of luck for another tour