MG-SS - THE PUNISHMENT- THREAD 7- UPDATED - EPILOGUE/ FINAL PART-Pg104

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vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Read itin 1 go

Ossumstory

Maans one wrong move turned geets life

She was boldn faced everything

She kept maan n dev with her as punishment

Which turned their life n made them fall in love

Very nice

Beautifully written

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arorasurbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#772

Just came across it...read all the parts in one go...
awesome ss

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SGuru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#773

Wonderful SS. ... Loved it...

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harmeenchawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#774

It was amazing story
Loved it ...

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Karamjeet Kaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#775

This is my second story of ur Work ...1st is Jinx which i recantly followingg..
which i read it in one go dear...
it's a Full Entertainment Story...
loved Each nd Every part...
loved d way Maaneet hatered turn in Beautiful relation...
It's Superbbb...
Intresting tooo...
i loved d way u Turn Maan Arrogant nd Egoistic character to Sweet nd Careing character ur Stories...
Now Lookinggg forward 4 ur other stories tooo...

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#776

Part 1 A

Lovely update

Maan caught while drunk and driving.

Maan understood that he was in trouble after hearing that the case will handled by the ACP.

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#777

Part 1 B

Lovely update

So man along with dev, Sam and nt was in jail for the attempt to murder charge.

ACP introgating them and taunting them.

Man was very ashamed to face how family as he put them in an embarrassing situation again.

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#778

Part 1 C

Lovely update

Maan was very disturbed and ashamed of his act an was feeling guilty.

He was scared of facing his father and was remembering the incident 2 years ago how his father stopped talking to him after his shameful act in colloge and how things changed after that.

He also remembered how after that incident his relation with his father also changed and how his after stopped talking to him.

Edited by prachidalmia - 10 years ago

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singh24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#779

🤗 so much all of u sweeties for liking this...

lots of love nd a big to all..😊

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#780

Part 2

Lovely update

Geet the ACP was happy seeing the hanging face of maan but was think what to do next. She was lost in the incident which took place 2 years back and changed her life but that incident also gave her 3 good friends who helped her in all the ups and down of life.

Maan's father gave his decision regarding the incident and gave both his sons to prove them changed on 6 months or else he will be giving the property which he and his father has created with hard work to charity.

Everybody present in the study was stunned and shocked with dev's reply to his father.

Maan agreeing to his father decision which shocked dev.