Toote Hue Khwaab ~ Check note on pg 132 ~ 17th December

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

poor maaneet both r in so much pain masn blaming himself for not being with geet when she needed him the most and geet too is blaming herself for not being able to save maan from pain. how much both love each other then why r punishing each other by staying away
pia is really cute . eager to know who she is

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

It was very emotional update Dear bt u penned der emotions very well... 👏
after readin dis chap...felt lk reading d story all over again...dat promo..trailer,...its jus awesome...yaar..ur an amazing writer...
i wish i so wish dat pia is maaneet's daughter...

Maan n geet both are suffering both in pain ..guilt nd wat not..
cant c dat pain... 😔

Pia is such a cutiepie..yaar...nd her talks...nd her pic too..not able to take my eyes of dat pic yaar...🤗...

Interesting precap. cant wait to know who is dis cutipie...😊

Continue soon...

nd thanks a ton for PM...🤗

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

am little confuse

tumne ek baar ek update mein

hero ko kissi se phone pe baat krte huye shoa kiya tha

like wo uski girlfriend ho

now he says to daadi he loves angel... am confused...😕

next update mein note mein ya mujhe pm mein batna

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

part 14
awesome...
nice one...
who is this kid?
and Daadima wants to know what had happened...
cont soon dear...

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Samina

@Dipti_Sam

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

I'm really confused how suddenly my likes can decrese so much? in part 13 I've got total 133likes but in the next one I've got only 111 likes. Why? You guys are not liking my writing and leaving this story? Or don't think it's not good enough to even press a like?

here I'm writing for hours just to give and update, sending total 346 Pms regularly after every single updates, and you guys can't even use your 1 mins to give a response or just a second to press the like button?

com on guys, try to understand, we writers do have some feelings as well. and these less responses are just making us leave the GF forum. and very few are still here, so at least give them lil bit of encouragement. if it will continue then i will definitely leave IF and will shift this story in blog and will give password to my regular readers only. but yes, i really don't want to do that

anyways, update will post tonight as I've written only half of it. for now, enjoy the teasers

and yes, i really mean it that i will leave IF if i will get this much responses continuously.

Teasers 01:

Maan: you could have called me Daadi ma. We've talked almost every day and you never even mention these to me

Daadi: we thought she was trying to destroy your image for saving hers

Maan: the girl who almost died just to save me when she was only 14, can never do that Daadi. How could you forget that because of her, I'm still breathing, I'm still alive damn it

Teaser 02:

Geet: Maan leave

Maan: I have to talk with you

Geet: we will talk later

Maan: I need to talk with you, right now

Geet: I have a meeting, so I need to leave

Geet was about to go, when Maan's voice stopped her

Maan: why you did this with us Geet? You left me saying I don't deserve you, you said you don't love me then why you let them blame you

Geet: Maan please, don't

Maan: first you left me with a cause that I don't deserve you. I wanted to show you that I'm the best and I do deserve you. But now when I came to you, you just let me know that you took my baby away from me. How can you do this to me? How many times you will break me Geet?

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Interesting teasers

Will be waiting for the updates

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

awesome teaser

waiting to see their confrontation

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

very emotional tsr..hope geet will express her self soon..sad to see maaneet in pain..as for your note..this an amazing story and ppl were actually looking forward for update..pls dnt feel bad plss...tk u..