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Part 57
Outburst of love...
Maan and Geet entered the house silently, "Nakul, Rahul," Maan yelled out scaring Geet for a second and Nakul and Rahul, rushed from the Kitchen, scared of Maan's voice, "Maan sir," Rahul looked at his calm face and felt a bit relief, "Nakul, Rahul, listen carefully, from today Geet is not allowed to enter in to the kitchen and if I ever find that she kept her feet there, you both will be fire,"
Maan said in a determined tone and Nakul and Rahul nodded immediately, Geet was shocked and was looking at Maan with her wide eyes, "But Ji," Geet started slowly and Maan looked at her with her stern look and Geet stopped her talk, "Geet, I don't want any buts you too heard what the doctor said right, you are hell weak, so you will do as I say, until I feel that you are healthy and fit, you are not doing any work, in the house nor in the office,"
"But, Ad?" Geet asked shocked, "That Sasha can even do, and I will explain the condition to Mr.Castle and I think he will understand," Maan said, and Geet face turned upset, "you and Sasha Mam are going to do the lead," Geet asked and Maan could see an mounting jealousy on her face, and also he could see her upsetness, "Ok, today you will take a total bed rest, and you will not keep your feet on the ground, if you accept for it then, I will let you do the ad," Maan said and Geet's face brighten up,
"And this week fully you will not work in the kitchen nor in the office, Ok," Maan said and Geet nodded immediately and your time begins now, go to your room, change yourself and get on your bed," Maan said and Geet nodded and went to her room, that day fully Geet didn't come out and was laying back, Maan send her some books to read and music to hear, and in the evening Maan made a meeting with Dev, Nandhini, Lucky and Mama ji and said about her condition and asked them to, not to disturb her,
Even for the night dinner, Geet wasn't allowed to come out, it was send to her room, and Geet too didn't say anything, Maan was busy with his files and things and it turned 12 when he closed his files, he went in refreshed and went to bed, as he laid back, suddenly something hit his mind, "Geet, is she ok now, it's a moonless night and it's too dark, what if she get scared, and it's not good for her," Maan thought and then took his cell and called her,
Geet was sleeping well due to the medicines she had and she got disturbed by her cell phone ringing, "who is calling me at this time," Geet thought and looked at her caller id and her sleep just vanished away seeing Maan's name, "why is he calling now," she thought and took the call, "Geet," He voice was low, "Geet you are sleeping right?" Maan asked, and she was puzzled, "Ji, yes, it's 12.30 and I think I was sleeping until you wake me up, what happened," Geet asked slowly, "Oh, nothing, you are not, I mean you are not scared right, you are ok," Maan asked,
"I am ok," Geet said, "but why did you call?" Geet asked still confused, "just to make sure you are sleeping," Maan said, "Ji, you wake me up, to ask me whether I am sleeping, well I am sleeping," Geet said with a grin and Maan felt suddenly foolish, "Good night," he said and cut the call, "he cut the call, now what happened to him," Geet thought and dozed off as her medicine was pushing her into sleep,
"Maan you idiot, will someone do like this, calling her when she is sleeping deeply and asking her is she sleeping, can't you go and look in to her room, all by yourself, now you even disturbed her sleep, Maan you are turning crazy," Maan thought to himself and smiled at his own stupidity, "being with this girl, I think I too turned crazy like her," Maan thought and slept off,
Morning was fresh and wonderful, Geet felt so normal again and as her regular habit, she got already and went towards the kitchen and Nakul and Rahul jumped and blocked her way, "Geet Madam ji, please, don't come inside, we will lose our job if Maan sir sees it," Rahul said and then Geet remembered Maan's rules, but she really wanted to make him coffee, it was her daily routine, and she made her baby face and thought for a minute,
"Nakul, Rahul, you both go to the market and get some Pasta, cheese, coco powder, eggs and aloo," Geet said and they looked at her, "Geet madam ji, are you planning to send us out and then enter into the kitchen," Nakul asked her and Geet let out a breathe, "yes, look, Maan ji said, he will fire you when you allowed me in, and if you guys go out, then you can't stop me when I enter and I promise you both, I will make just his black coffee quietly and keep in his room, ok, please," Geet said and Nakul and Rahul melt up and nodded and went out of the kitchen,
Geet then happily made her coffee with a smile, she felt so good, and she took the cup in her hand, "Made the coffee, now how will I give this to him," Geet thought, "will do one thing will go silently and keep this in his room and run back and hide in my room, so he won't find out," Geet said with a big smile, "Do you think that Maan Singh Khurana is that foolish," Maan's voice made her widen her eyes and to turn around, she felt caught,
"Good morning," she said with a silly childish look, "Geet, what are you doing here," Maan asked with his stern look, "didn't I say you to keep out of the kitchen," Maan continued, "O, Came to have some water, Nakul and Rahul was not there so, I came in to have some myself," Geet said with a scared look, "water?" Maan asked and she nodded up, "from when did you start drinking water in my coffee mug," Maan asked holding the coffee mug, "and went did our house water turned black, just as my coffee," Maan asked,
Geet felt caught, and his closeness and his deep look made her condition worse, "Geet I hate lying don't you know that," Maan asked as he stepped close killing the space between them, "O, O," Geet looked at him with her widen eyes, "what reason do you have now," Maan asked as he moved close and this time he was so close that his hot breathe was hitting her skin making her shiver and she lost herself in to his deep look,
Maan noticed suddenly her fear face gone and she turned calm and started breathing up and her eyes turned inviting and she parted her lips, Maan was so mesmerized by this, her big brown eyes was dazzling and her cute lips were trembling, for the first time, he wanted to kiss it off, and stop her trembling and some kind of shiver raised in him, just as he leaned close and Geet closed her eyes and as he was above to kiss her, his mind pulled him back, "Maan what are you doing,"
Maan backed away and Geet opened her eyes as she suddenly felt alone, "Ji, Sasha Mam can even do the Ad, I can't been like this sitting all day in my room alone, I will be as usual and so Sasha Mam can even do the Ad," Geet said and Maan looked at her standing with her baby face, "Geet, it's not about the Ad, it's about your health, you need to take rest, didn't you hear the doctor, atleast for a month you have to be in rest, so you can be fit," Maan raised his voice,
"And that's because she thought we are planning for a baby now," Geet spoke out too quickly that even she can't stop, as soon as the words came out she closed her mouth, "Baba ji, what did I just say," she thought and turned towards him and he too was looking at her shocked and she just ran away, "This girl, what am I suppose to do with her, now how will I stop this girl," Maan thought,
As Maan went to his room he got a call, "Mr.Khurana, its Mr. Rick from Mr.Castle's office, Mr.Castle is willing to give an party to all his Asian clients and friends an unofficial party, a themed dance party and he personally wanted to invite you and your partner, I mean, it's a dance party and you have to bring a dance partner with you," He said and Maan listened and said an ok, and Maan came out to the hall,
"Excuse me," A guy called standing at the main door, "Come in," Maan said and the guy came up, "Sir, Mr.Castle gave you this," he gave a bouquet with a note and a card and went away, "Mr.Khurana, I would like to have you on the dance party I am hosting and I wish you would bring your lead lady, that young girl, I am sorry I forgot her name, hope to see you at the party young Man, regards Richard Castle" the note read,
Maan thought for a minute and grinned up, "Geet," he called and she came out slowly, still feeling embarrassed for what she had spoken, "Geet, today you are not going to the office, so am I," Maan said and geet looked at him puzzled, Maan then gave her the card and the note by Mr.Castle, "Lead Lady, are you going with Sasha Mam," Geet asked with her childish charm, "Who said Sasha is the lead," Maan asked grinning at her,
"You said, if I disobey, you will put Sasha mam as the lead and today I disobeyed you and so," Geet said and Maan looked at her with a grin, "Yes, you disobeyed me, and you deserve a punishment, and that is, you will come with me to the dance party," Maan said and Geet looked at him shocked, "but, but, I don't know to Dance," Geet said, "but you can learn right," Maan asked and Geet looked at him,
"Geet today I will arrange for a dance lesson and by tomorrow you will be ready and we can go to the dance party," Maan said in his bold voice and Geet felt happy and also nervous, "can I that easy to learn in one day," Geet asked, "will see," Maan said and went in, and that day went well, in the afternoon, after a long time, she saw the full family and they had normal chit chats, then at the evening 5 Nakul came to Geet's room, "Geet ji, Maan sir asked you to come to the closed terrace upstairs," Nakul said and went away.
"Closed terrace", Geet thought and went there, and saw Maan standing there with a guy, and they were discussing something, "Ji," Geet called him and Maan turned and look at her, "Rocky, this is Geet, and Geet this is Rocky, he will teach you dance today," Maan said and Geet looked at him and smiled, "Hello Mrs.Geet, can we start Mr.Khurana," Rocky asked and Maan nodded, "Mrs.Geet, what are you planning to wear for the party tomo," Rocky asked and Geet looked at Maan, "Rocky, this is her first dance party, so he might have no idea,",
"Oh, never mind, I am a designer too and I have some sample photos of the party dresses in my album, you can have a look and if you like any of those, then I will even deliver it tomorrow to you," Rocky said and went and took his album and gave it to Geet, Geet looked at the photo and her eyes went wide, "Baba ji, I can't wear these things," Geet gave him back the photo's, Maan got those photos and looked at those, "Geet, these dresses looks good," Maan whispered to her, "These dresses, in some hands are missing, in some legs are shown and in some,, leave it, I am not going to wear it," Geet replied,
"Rocky, could you show something which is fully cover up, I mean, she haven't been used to modern dresses" Maan said and Rocky nodded and took another set of photos and gave to Maan, and Maan looked at those, "Why can't I wear a saree," Geet asked suddenly and Maan looked at her, "sure, but it's a dance party so, It might be," Rocky dragged, "No Problem, I will adjust," Geet said and Rocky nodded,
"Ok than you go and changed to a saree now, will practice in that even so, you would feel comfortable tomorrow," Rocky said and Geet smiled big and went away, after a few minutes Geet came out with a white saree and Maan was stud to see her in saree, "Can we start Mr.Khurana," Rocky asked and Maan nodded, "Mr.Khurana you are a well trained dancer, so no need for an instruction to you, Geet, Dance is passion, letting yourself go, so no restrain, ok, come on," Rocky stepped up and offered his hand and Geet too caught it.
She saw Maan who was coolly watching her, Rocky then stood behind Geet and touched her arms, and held her hand "Geet your body should not be this shaggy and now keep you head a bit straight and look front," He said and adjusted her head by touching her neck, and Geet nightmare raised before her eyes, Rocky touch remember her of Armaan's and she pulled from him and slipped and fall on to Maan,
"Geet," Maan held her and looked into her tear filled scared eyes, "I can't do it, I can't do it," She said and rushed away, Rocky was looking shocked, "I didn't do anything," he said, "It's ok Rocky, thanks for coming, will call you when needed," Maan said and rush behind Geet and saw her standing there crying up, "Geet," Maan voice made her to turn,
"What the hell was that," Maan asked his anger filling up, "I am sorry, but I can't, for a second I thought I was in Armaan's hold, his touches are still fresh, I am sorry, I can't," Geet said and Maan's anger provoked up, he held her hand and pulled her on to him, "Geet, still thinking for that, after all I had said and done, you don't believe me, you are still scared," Maan said and pushed her away and walked away,
Geet got scared and went behind him, and stopped him, "please, Please, it's not you, I trust you, I believe you, and I am not scared, but," Geet stopped, "But what Geet," Maan asked roughly, "but I can't get that, that feel from me," Geet said crying up, and Maan pulled her close by her arms, "What should I do to take those feels away from you, how can I help you," Maan asked between his teeth, "You can't, it's so strong, you can't help me, you can't," Geet said, her words hit Maan's ego to the core,
"I will take that from you," Maan said out and Geet looked at him puzzled with her teary eyes, Maan went and on the music up and came and stood beside her and she looked at him, his anger was shining in his face, "from today you will not know anything else other than this," he said and Geet didn't understand, but before she could say anything, she felt Maan's fingers on her back, on her bare skin,
And she closed her eyes as she felt a shiver, he slowly moved it up and turned her front and held her shoulders and took her hands and kept on his shoulders.
Tujhe milke laga hai ye, tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhe milke laga hai ye, tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhme hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwab sajaa ja re
Mahi aaja re, mahi aaja re
Tujhme hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwab sajaa ja re
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mere mahi, mere mahi tu aaja mere mahi
Maan was spinning her like a doll, he was touching and hold her with all his passion filled anger, he wanted her to prove wrong, he wanted to prove that he could vanish the disgust she feels, it was his only feel that was driving him on her, and his closeness and hold and his hot breath and wild fragrance was filling Geet and she was totally lost,
Tujhe milke laga hai ye tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhe milke laga hai ye tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhme hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwab sajaa ja re
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mere mahi, mere mahi tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Ohhhooohhhooo..hooo...
Mahi mahi... mahi, mahi mahi... mahi
Dhadkano me mahi, saanso me hai mahi
Tu hi hai mere dil ki tamanna
Teri hi yaadein har lamha
De mujhe de apna aanchal
Dhoop me jalta main harpal
Tujhme hai kuch aisi ghataa sa
Jiske liye hu main pyaasa sa
Aa tu meri pyaas bujha ja re
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mere mahi, mere mahi
Tu aaja mere mahi dil roye ya ilahi
Tu aaja mere mahi
Maan's anger reduced as his passion and the heat between him and Geet increased, he could feel the changes this closeness making in his body, as his sense hit him, he saw Geet, and her eyes, which was filled with desire, and he felt caught, he slowly pulled his hold from her and left her there and turned back,
"What have you done Maan, you were not trying to remove those disgusting imprints she feels on her but you were yourself imprinting yourself on her, why Maan, what will she think, that all the guys are same, what if she thinks you and him are up to the same thing, Maan thought and the thought killed him, and he turned and saw Geet who was looking at him with her eyes which was holding the desire with her tears,
She didn't had enough, suddenly her shyness was gone and she turned greedy, she felt that Maan's touches were purifying her, and she wanted more of it, she wanted to feel him more on her, so she walked towards him and touch his hand and kept it around her waist and Maan looked at her shocked,
And as he saw her pleading eyes, he took her hand and continued his dance, and this time he didn't have any anger but he was having an uncontrollable desire rising in his heart, this time he let her do the lead and she too was doing it, she had no hesitation now, her love for him came up explicitly,
Mahi mahi... mahi, mahi mahi... mahi
Bas mera tu mahi saanso me hai maahi
Hain mujhe hai tera armaan
Hain tujhe hai mera banna
Har ghadi teri dil me aahat
Tu mile mil jaaye raahat
Judd ke bhi tu mujhse juda sa
Milke bhi tu kyu hai khafaa sa
Aaja meri baaho me aaja re
Ohhoo..
Judd ke bhi tu mujhse juda sa
Milke bhi tu kyu hai khafaa sa
Aaja meri baaho me aaja re
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mahiii... Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Maaa... Maaahhhiii Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Maahiii...
Maan doesn't know what to say or do seeing her crying holding him, but he didn't want to say anything, as he had no idea what's going on in her mind, so he slowly scooped her in his arms and started walking towards her room, and Geet too didn't say a word except for staring at him with her tear filled eyes,
As Maan reached the room, he went and put her on the bed and as he was making her lay back, Geet thought something else, he was above to do and so she held his neck around and was holding it while laying back, Maan pulled her arms holding his neck and Geet straightened up and was laying there breathing heavy, and she turned her face away and closed her eyes, expecting Maan touch on her skin,
Maan looked at her, breathing heavy and closing her eyes tightly and her face on fire, he slowly bend down and looked at her glowing face and touched her face slowly and Geet stopped her breathing for a second and held the bed cover in her fist and closed her eyes tightly, a chill shiver pass through her veins when Maan hot breath touched her forehead,
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