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Marital Tie - A Journey In Marriage

Part 58

Maan's decision,

Geet was waiting for his touch and her skin turned red, "Geet," Maan voice made her to tremble and she opened her eyes slowly and saw Maan eyes filled with so much of emotions but there was no passion or desire, "Have some rest," Maan said and straighten himself and went away from there, it took a few minutes for Geet to realize what happened, Geet suddenly felt shy and embarrassed,

She remember her bold moves and then she remember his passionate holds, now all she can feel in her body was his hold, his tight holds, his hot breathe on her skin, his rough touches on her bare skin, those touches affected her deep inside her soul and this she can't forget even in her dreams and she didn't want to, she smiled at her state, but she still can't understand Maan's expressions when he left her, "what was he thinking,"

Maan rushed to his room, and held the table, "What have I done, how could I, instead of consoling her, protecting her, I even spoiled her by my touches, no, I should have done so, But what else will I do, her words provoked my anger, I didn't want her to suffer, that too thinking about that, that guy, I wanted to pull her out of it, I feel helpless and, I wanted to help her, her pain was killing me, and I" Maan was arguing with himself,

"Don't know what's going in her mind about me, I hope I didn't break her trust or believe she has on me," Maan thought, "Ji," Geet voice pulled him up from his thoughts and he turned around to see her standing near his door, "Come in Geet," Maan said and she came in, "o, actually, I even wanted to come but, anyways, I wanted to say that, the dance, I mean, I was angered by your words and I needed to help and," Maan was trembling slowly, not knowing exactly what to say, "Thank you," Geet sudden words made Maan too look at her, "Thank you," she said again, "you did it, you had pulled me out of the bad thoughts," Geet said her eyes filling up with a smiling on her lips, Maan was struck with no words,

"Thank you," Geet said and turned to leave and just then she was above to leave she stopped at the door way, "Ji" she called and towards her, "My mom always says that Baba ji will always protects me and said that he will be around me always in some form, and now I know that he is with me in your form, I always feel his blessings in your form, not now but from the day you saved me from that pit, when I was a little girl, you saved me than and from that day onwards, whenever my life struck in danger, you come to recue me, Thank you for everything, thank you," She said and walked away,

Maan was staring at her way and then he looked at the blank space before him, he don't know how to react or what to feel, she said she sees him as her god and when he remembered his acts towards her, his yelling, his anger bursting on her, making her cry, he felt himself as a monster, and he felt a heavy guilt and his heart was feeling heavy, atleast she is fear free, that was the only thing made him happy now, he silently went and laid back, but Geet's words was coming to his mind again and again,

"Chup," Maan yelled at a little girl who was crying inside a small pit, trapped down there and little girl too closed her mouth immediately terrified of his voice, and looked up sobbing slightly, Maan then looked around and saw a rope and went away and took the rope and came and throw it on to the Pit, And he held the rope and jumped in, the little girl watched him with her wide eyes, then Maan pulled her, he then scooped her up with his one arm, "hold on to me, tightly," he said and the girl immediately held his neck tightly,

As he got up on the ground, he still found that the little girl was holding on to him, "you can get down now," Maan said and then the little girl too got down, then Maan kneed down before her and she was starting at him with her shining eyes, "are you ok, did you get hurt," Maan asked and the little girl nodded a no, "What is your Name?" Maan asked in a rough voice, the little girl looked with her wide eyes a bit scared yet she smiled a bit and said her name, "My name is, my name is Geet," she said in her sweet voice, "Geet," Maan opened his eyes and saw the dark room around him, he turned on the lights, he knew it wasn't a dream, it was his memory,

Geet's words had provoked his memory, "Geet," he said to himself and was feeling restless, and stood up and looked around, he felt weird and so he went out, "why this girl", then his memory started to flowing, their very first meeting, where Geet was just a new born, lying in the cradle looking at him with her little shiny eyes, and then as the small girl and then meeting her at the house, her happy face and care less smiles and nonstop chatter everything came running into his mind,

"But after she came here, she haven't smiled like that or she didn't get a changes, did I spoil her life and happiness like this, how did I turn this cruel with this innocent creature," and as he was crossing Geet's room, he heard her voice, "Baba ji, somehow I need to practice some dance, I can't embarrassing him before others in the party,", Maan stopped and saw inside Geet's room, and there she was dancing, like a small girl looking at her laptop video ,

Geet was dancing and spinning around as the girl does in the video, but suddenly trips and before she could slip off, Maan caught her hand and Geet looked at him shocked and Maan was looking at her as if he is seeing her for the first time, Maan pulled her up and she stood close to him, she looked at him as his reaction worried her, his face showed no emotions and he slowly went close to her and she closed to her eyes shivering inside due to his closeness and her lips started to tremble, he was having too much effect on her,

And seeing her state Maan only got pain, "Geet" he called as his hot breath hit her skin and she opened her eyes slowly, and Maan then left his hold on her and pulled back, and Geet again felt embarrassed and she looked at him blushing up, "it's too late, you have to rest," Maan said and before she could reply, he held her and walked her towards her bed and made her to lay back, and went and turned off the lights and closed her laps,

Geet was looking at him puzzled, she had never seen him this calm or soft, Maan saw her staring at him and he went near her, "Sleep well Geet," Maan said and pulled her blanket up to her neck and went away, Geet turned herself and saw Maan walking out of her room, "Baba ji, what happened to him, why is he acting strange, is he ok, please take care of him," Geet prayed and closed her eyes,

Maan straightly went to his practice room, he was restless and he wanted to free his pain, he started to do his marital arts in the midst of the dark night but his mind was not ready to concentrated, his mind replayed her words, her smile, her care, her tears and her every acting, and Maan stopped his acts, "Every time, everything I did was giving her pain, and tears and she was only giving me love and care, from the day one," Maan suddenly remembered the first day when Geet came into the house, the day when he made her sign the divorce papers, "How did I turn this cruel, I told her to end her life before even it started and she too did it, without a word of refusal,"

"Till now, she was doing everything I said, if she like it or not, and she was pouring me the love I am unfit for, I was so selfish, I was so selfish that I didn't even see that my every act was burning that innocent soul, which doesn't know anything else than loving me, how did I, how did I turn this selfish, and I had been shamelessly enjoying her love and care and her every act of being my wife"

"She is even ready to give herself to me," Maan thought as he remember her reaction a few hours ago, "she thinks that I am her husband and I have the right, but do I, what did I do to be a husband, I too want her, I too have the desire for her, and yes, I too love her, yes, I love her, but is this enough, for all the pain I gave her, no, a single word of love or an act of desire will not full fill it, for all that I had done, I have to make her happy, happy to the core, and when I feel that I had done enough, then I will take her as her rightful husband,"

"She thinks me as her god and all I had been was an devil, now it's time for me too change atleast to an human, I had done a mistake, a great mistake and I will even correct it" Maan decided and now he feel a little free as all his worries were lifted from his shoulders, so he went done and went inside his wash room, and he repeated in his mind, "I love her and I will prove her that, and then make her my wife,"

Morning sun shined bright on Khurana Mansion and Geet got up and felt fresh, and turned and looked up at the clock, "Baba ji, 8.30," Geet freaked out and went to the washroom and got freshened up and rushed toward the hall, "Good morning, Geet," Dev said coolly, "Dev why didn't anyone wake me up, and where is your brother," Geet asked worried, "Relax Geet, Bro saw you sleeping and said not to disturb you and he said he is going to the office now and asked you to come to the office, when you wake up and if you are feeling ok," Dev said,

"I am perfectly alright and so I am going to the office now," Geet said, "Geet, breakfast," Dev yelled behind her as she rushed to her room, "Will have in the office," Geet replied and went in and took her bag and came out, "Dev, Bye," Geet said and rushed out, and Rishi was standing there, "Geet Mam, Maan sir," He started to say and Geet stopped him, "I know, he said you to drop me in the office, if I come out, Right," Geet asked and He nodded.

Geet went to her office, "Geet," Pinky called, "Pinky, will speak with you later, please," She said and smashed inside Maan's cabin, "I am so sorry, I didn't know I was sleeping late and," just then she realized that Sasha was sitting in the room with Maan, and she smiled her silly smiled and Sasha was looking at her puzzled, "Sasha, you go, will discuss it later," Maan said and Sasha didn't like Geet at all now, she scorned at her and walked away from Maan's cabin, "Geet, what happened, why are you getting hyper," Maan asked softly and she can't believe her eyes, "Baba ji, did he smile," Geet looked at him, with her wide eyes, "O, you came from home, without even waking me up and I didn't even make you your black coffee, so I felt bad," Geet said sadly,

"Geet, it's ok, do you want to continue in the office or go home," Maan asked softly, "want to be here," Geet said and Maan nodded, "Ok, and ah, in your cabin, I kept you a dress to wear for the party, Rocky sent it, wear it now even and see if all the fitting are ok, or else will ask him to alter as we have to go in the evening," Maan said and Geet nodded with a big smile, and Maan too nodded with a slight grin,

Geet came out of his cabin and felt like dreaming, "Baba ji, am I dreaming, he didn't yell at me, or even a hard word, instead, he spoke softly and he was smiling, what's happening Baba ji," Geet thought wondered by Maan's behavior and went to her cabin, Maan was feeling happy as he relaxed back in his chair, seeing her smile like this was giving him an immense happiness, and he wanted to make her more happy or want to make himself more happy.

Geet rushed to her cabin and saw a shopping bag and took it and looked inside, "Baba ji, better, not be those torn dresses." She prayed and to her surprise it was a salwar suit, she smiled big and her face glowed in her happiness seeing that dress and Maan could see that from his cabin, and he felt double happiness seeing that she liked the suit he choose, she then griped the dress and went to the girls room, and she went inside the wash room and changed the dress and came back to the girls room and stood before the mirror,

She can't believe that she looked studding in that dress and she blushed seeing herself on the mirror, and suddenly she opened her eyes widen as she saw Maan reflection in the mirror, "I am impressed, I do select well, didn't I," Maan asked and Geet turned around and nodded a yes, she was blushing up, with her new found happiness, "Geet," he called in his seductive tone and she looked at him slowly, "you are looking beautiful," Maan said and Geet turned red blushing high due to his open comment, and it was first time, he said something so openly like this, she don't know how to react.

Maan then went away and Geet was still blushing up, "I am really dreaming, it's so wonderful to be true," Geet thought and stood there for a few minutes and then went up, everyone in the office looked at Geet, actually staring at her, not knowing what's happening, everyone was murmuring something about her some good and some bad, but that didn't bother Geet, she was so happy to concentrated on that, "Black Coffee" Geet thought and went and Made Maan's black coffee and went to his cabin,

"Geet, I am going out to meet a client, and will be back soon, so be ready ok," Maan said as he had the coffee, "Geet, do you want to go home and rest before the party," Maan asked, "No, I am fine, I will wait in the office even," Geet said with a smile and Maan too smiled back and stood up and took his briefcase and went out and Geet too followed him out, Maan called adi and gave him the suitcase, and turned to look at Geet who was staring at him, and he smiled and nodded and went out,

Sasha was watching them with her anger spilling out, what the hell is happening," , "Geet," Pinky pulled geet into her cabin, "what's going on," she asked with a big smile, "Pinky, I too don't know what's happening, Maan sir, gave me this dress and we are going to Mr.Castle's Party tonight and it's a dance party," Geet said with an excited and Pinky hugged her, "Finally," Pinky started and Geet closed her mouth, "Pinky, no, not here," Geet warned and Pinky too nodded,

Sasha was hearing everything from outside, "Geet going with MK to a party and he bought her a dress, this Geet is double crossing me too much, her existence here is always a trouble for me," Sasha thought, "I need to do something, something,"

Precap: A Danger to provoke more love,


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Edited by mayarhea - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update... So Maan has finally realised his love for her... Loved his changed behaviour... interesting precap...Sasha thinks that she will make Maan and Geet apart... but she is so wrong... i hope so😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updt,...
Maan finally realized his love for her coz I didn't want him to pity her or take dis relation as a duty...
Sasha stay away
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Lovely ... Am I dreaming to??
Maan .. all smiley smiley
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awesome update..
maan being sweet with geet is really good going..
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was too good.maan realised his love for her. ab yeh sasha kya karanewali hai pata nahi?,per kya geet ko bacane ke liye maan sabake samane bolega,ke geet, GEET MAANSING KHURANA hai? kya woh apna pyar geet ke samane confess karega?
egarly waiting for the next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
sasha dey r already together...kuch nehi kar sakti ho tum...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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