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Posted: 11 years ago
M so waiting for maan to c her like dat...no doubt he likes her and dress is nt gng to change d beautiful geet to something else bt just want him to c her like dat
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi thanks 4 da pm n marvelous update. Maan n Daya meet! Daya realizes Maan married her! Maan tells him everything! Daya shouts him! Maan agrees to give the marriage n his love a chance 4 a month after Daya convinces him! Awesum Maaneet moments! Lovely precap! Well written, update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks daya for knocking some sense in maan hope he follow ,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
so maan is ready to give a chance to th marriage...to geet n him...good job daya...love u...abb dekhte hai jay k jadoo inn dono per kya jadoo chalata hai...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part
Thank god daya gave some good abvice to maan
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MAANEET HUG AWW LUVD IT!!!
PARTY IS FUL OF SURPRISES CNT WAIT TO READ FURTHER. . .thankya watng fr next. .
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Marital Tie - A Journey In Marriage


Part 54

Magic in the air.

Maan and Adi was waiting in the corridor to welcome Mr.Castle and a big black BMW came and parked before them and a foreigner came out from the front door and opened the back door of the car and a Happy, energetic man jumped from there, "Mr.Castle, Welcome," Maan offered him a welcome and Mr.Castle smiled big,

"Good to meet you young man," He said with a big smile, "You look more smart and handsome than I had seen in the magazine," he added and Maan felt embarrassed due to his open comment but he just grinned with a thank you, "Can we move, Mr.Castle," Maan asked and he nodded and they both walked together to the venue, "well My Young Man, I heard you are not married," Mr.Castle said suddenly putting Maan to shock,

"why is he asking this, why in the world everyone is talking about my marriage," Maan thought looking down, "I had read your interviews, my boy, you have an very wrong idea, you know when I started my business, I was doing very good, and once I got married to my brilliant wife, I was doing a brilliant job and now I turned excellent in my business because of my angel, my daughter, there is no inspiration and motivation to a Man's life than his family, his love," Castle talked and Maan didn't say anything but he was listening,

" I would like to marry my daughter to you," Mr.Castle said putting Maan to shock and he turned at looked at him immediately, "but she is too young, you know," he finished and Maan let out a huge breathe, "thank god," he thought, "Adi, go and get everything ready," Maan whisper to him and Adi rushed in, "Jay everything ready", Adi asked as he saw Jay, "Jay showed a thumbs up, "where is Geet," Adi asked, "Adi sir, she is getting ready, will be here in a minute," Pinky said,

"Where is Sasha?" Adi asked, "I am here Adi," Sasha said as came before, and she looked beautiful, "Wow, Sasha you look beautiful in pink," Adi said, "Pinky, you and Tasha take Sasha upstairs and wait there, I will give you a missed call that time bring her down ok," Adi said and they nodded and went up, Adi then saw Maan entering with Castle and so he and Jay went near them with a smile,

"So I heard that you are acting in the sample ad, is it because of your charm or lack of timing," Castle asked, "Both I guess," Jay interfered, "Hi, Mr.Castle, I am Jay, director of this Ad, working for Mr.Khurana," He said with a big smile, "Good, to see you Mr.Jay,", "Mr.Khurana, nice settings and nice party, I am excited to see things like this, it's so dreamy, I must say, well done Mr.Khurana" Mr.Castle said looking around, "Actually all thesr credit goes to Mr.Jay, he did this Magic," Maan said looking at Jay,

Mr.Castle looked at Jay and smiled and turned to Maan, "I like your honesty Mr.Khurana, not liking to take credit for others work ah," Castle asked and Maan Smiled, "I feel happy to work with you, so, where is your female lead," Castle asked and Maan looked at Adi and Adi nodded and took his cell and gave a missed call to Pinky, then they bought Sasha down the stairs, and Maan was pleased with Sasha's look and Jay, Adi, and Maan was looking at the stairs,

"There she is" Maan said looking at the stairs, "She is beautiful, "Castle said and Maan smiled, "As beautiful as an angel in this white attire," Castle said confusing everyone, "White?" Maan, Jay and Adi looked at Castle and saw him looking on to the floor near the artificial tree and Maan eyes went wide, looking Geet there in white dress, "she looks so beautiful Mr.Khurana, I love your chose for your lead," Mr.Castle said,

But Maan didn't hear that he was looking at Geet mesmerized, Geet was looking around and Maan, for sure knew she was looking for him, he so was hitted by her beauty, "Mr.Castle, she is not the lead," Adi said looking shocked, "she is our lead," he said pointing towards Sasha, "oh, I am sorry, I thought, she too is good, but still," Castle was looking at Geet and he was so impressed by her,

"Hello Mr.Castle" Sasha said as she came near and Castle smile and greeted her with a smile, "But who is that Girl," Castle asked looking at Geet, "Sir, she is Geet, she is Mr.Khurana's PA," Jay said with a grin, Sasha didn't like the fact that castle liked Geet then her, "Jay, why did you put her as a lead," Castle asked shocking Jay and Adi and they both looked at Maan, who was frozen with his stare on Geet, without a blink,

"Maan sir, Maan sir," Adi whispered, but no reaction came from Maan, "Can we meet her Mr.Khurana," Mr.Castle asked and Maan just nodded without any sense working in him and walked towards her, Geet too saw them come and as soon as she saw Maan's stare she blushed and looked down unable to see him, "Hello Young lady," Mr.Castle said and Geet looked at him with a smile, "Hello Mr.Castle, welcome," she said in a sweet honey voice, "You know Young lady you look beautiful," Castle's open comment made her blush, "Thank You Mr.Castle," she said humbly, "so as your voice," he added and she smiled, "I was asking Mr.Jay, why didn't he choose you as an Lead." Castle said shocking Geet,

Geet looked at Maan, and he was still looking at her deeply, "Mr.Castle, at first I too thought she was an model, and asked her too but she refused," He said, "Why My Young Lady, any special reason, I would really like to see you with Mr.Khurana," Castle said, "You both would make a perfect pair," Castle added and Geet was hell sacred now, what if Maan hates this idea and gets angry,

His silent look gave her creeps, why is he silent, is he upset, is he angry, Geet thought looking at Maan and Adi saw Maan, "Maan sir, Maan sir," Adi called and as Maan didn't react, Adi pulled Maan's sleeves bring Maan to life, and Maan was like someone who was out of hypnotism, "what do you say Young Man," Castle asked and Maan looked at Adi, "what the hell was going on," Maan thought, "Adi, what is he saying," Maan asked confused,

"Sir, he means, I think, he wants Geet as your lead," Adi said and Maan looked at Geet who was scared and looking at Maan, "you two would make a great pair," Castle said, "Absolutely" Jay agreed "and what's the problem, I mean I wouldn't be compelling, I just thought she would make a nice pair for you, it's your project Mr.Khurana, so it's your wish," Castle said, and Geet looked down,

"And you are My Client and I always respect my clients views, Geet will play the lead," Maan said in one go, shocking everyone to the core, especially Geet, Sasha was too upset by this and went away from there alone with Tasha, "I am sorry Mr.Jay I think you had to do the photo shoots again, no problem I will see Mr.Khurana's now and I will see her directly in the ad's" Castle said and Jay Grinned big, "Actually, no need for that, I was suppose to surprise Geet, so, one minute,"

Jay rushed away and suddenly the lights went off and then a focus light was put on the screen at the top and some stills started appearing, first it was Maan's stills and he looked so dashing hot in those still that all the girl on the room felt like fainting up, Maan was feeling awkward though it was only his staffs, then the stills stopped and after a few minutes Geet's stills started to appear and Geet was damn shocked so as Maan, Geet looked at Jay and he grinned, "I just made it to give you a surprise, I didn't know it would turn like this,"

After the stills stopped, the light came up and Geet was shivering and so scared of Maan, "Baba ji, what will he think, that I had a secret photo shoot with Jay? How will I ever gonna explain," Her eyes filled up and she looked at Maan, who was still shocked, "wow, that was fabulous," Castle said, "Actually Mr.Khurana, I shot it without Geet's permission, to give her a surprise, but," Jay said and Maan looked at Geet who was above to cry,

"Well, I am so happy, now really excited for the Sample Ad's, Mr.Khurana," Castle said, "Well then let's start the party with this happiness," Jay said and Castle said an ok, "well why don't we start it with a dance of our new found leads," Castle said and Maan looked at Geet, and turned to Castle and Nodded once, and they all went away from Maan and Geet, leaving them on the center floor,

"Ji, I promise, I don't know Jay was doing this, I was just trying to help, and, I am sorry," Geet said tears filling her eyes, " I didn't" she started and Maan kept his finger on her lips, blocking her words, "Enough," he said slowly, "I trust you Geet," Maan said and his words Made her still, "I trust you," Maan said again and her heart felt like crying, and she looked deep into his eyes to see his mind,

Then the lights turned off and the spot light was on Maan and Geet, and the music slowly began, and Geet looked at Maan shocked, "I don't know to dance," Geet said slowly, Maan grinned and slowly took her left hand and kept on his left shoulder and then took her right hand and kept on his right shoulder, "Hold me," Maan said and Geet held his shoulder, Maan then kept his hands on her waist,

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon

Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon

Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Kisi zaban mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi

Ki jeenmein tum ho kya tumhein bata sakun

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen

kaynaat mein Nai hai kahin

Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

Maan slowly moved his feet to and fro and Geet too moved with him slowly looking into his eyes which was looking into her eyes and then he slowly moved his hands tight and pulled her a bit close to him and it made her to melt in his hold and she held his shoulders tight, and blushed up,

Shokhiyon mein dooobi yeh aadayein

Chehre se jhalki hui hain

Zulf ki ghani ghani ghatayein

Shaan se dhalki hui hain

Lehrata aachal hai jaise badal

Bhaahon mein bhari hai jaise chandani

Roop ki chandani

Main agar kahoon yeh dilkashi

Hai nahi kahin na hogi kabhi

Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

Geet then moved her hands around his neck making her more close to him, and Maan too held her tight and pressed her towards him without breaking their gaze on each other, and was holding each other close, they almost forgot where they were and the world is watching them,

Tum hue meherbaan

To hai yeh dastan

hoo Tum hue meherbaan

To hai yeh dastan

Tum hue meherbaan

To hai yeh dastan

hoo Tum hue meherbaan

To hai yeh dastan

Abb tumhara mera ek hai karwaan

Tum jahan mein wahan

Geet and Maan was dancing their day out, and there was love in their eyes and heart, they were somewhere beyond this world, holding each other close, there was no shyness, no hesitation, they were comfortable in each other hold, and they wanted this moment to continue forever, Maan grin and moved his one hand from her waist and held her shoulder and pushed her close to him.

Geet released her hold and she held his shoulder and was blushing high, she was sure she was dreaming, this was so beautiful and magical to be true and if this was a dream she wished she should never wake up, Maan was feeling something inside his heart, which was wonderful, he loved this feel, it gave him when he held her, looking into her eyes, she didn't want to move,

Main agar kahoon

Humsafar meri

Apsara ho tum ya koi pari

Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Kisi zabaon mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi

Ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein bata sakun

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen

kaynaat mein Nai hai kahin

Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

Finally the music stopped and Lights shined up and everyone clapped and Maan and Geet felt like they had been pulled away from an wonderland, they released each other immediately and saw the whole gathering were looking at actually staring at them with mouth opened, except for Adi, Jay and Pinky, who were so happy and Mr.Castle and his assistance who didn't see anything wrong, and they were normal,

Maan and Geet pulled themselves apart and stood away, Geet felt embarrassed, "Excuse me," she said and rushed away, Maan wanted to stop her but he didn't, "what have I done, she is my wife, but no one knows these, what will they think about her and her character, they knew she is married and I am just her boss," Maan felt guilty for doing so,

Geet rushed away, "what have I do, I should have kept my distance, what will they all think about him, and his character, that he is close with a married girl, he is my husband but no one knows it, so what will they think about him," as she walked towards the dark corridor...

Precap: Armaan's horrible attack on Geet.

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Posted: 11 years ago
fab part...maan ki to hawa nikal gayee geet ko dekhkr
dreamy updttt,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update.. so Jay's magic really worked... and loved Nathan Fillion as Mr.Castle... and me worried about precap.. hope Maan comes and saves her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
excellent chp dear
the way maan & geet in their dreamland
pls contd soon

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