MG SS - Dil ke rishte - [Part 6/ Pg 20/17mar] [updated] - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
the way u describe the prologue with the poem is awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
dat was so sweet
thanx fr d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Thank You All for ur likes & comments... 😃😃😃
& sorry for making you all wait for so long...
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previous Update- Part 5


Maan to Geet : Teacher jii... Plan To Mere he tha... [he wick at her]
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Geet : Maan Apko Toh Main...
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She turn & looked that Maan already Run Away From There...
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--Dil Ke Rishte--
Part 6 [By Zeba]
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Geet was running behind maan & all the kids where enjoying the scene and few was taking geet side and few maan's ...
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after sometime both got tired of running and sat at a place...
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Then rajji came towards maan and sat near him.
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rajji : wow bhai aap toh didi se bhi bohat tezz bhagte ho ...
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maan smiles at her ...
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geet hears that and went towards rajji and hold her ear...
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geet : oye tu meri bahen hai ya maan ki jab se dekh rahi hoon maan ka hi side le rahi hai ..
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rajji : didi chodo na bohat dard ho raha hai... ahhh
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Maan : geet chodo kya kar rahi ho ...
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geet : huh!! dono mujhe hi bhul gaye hai ...
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rajji kiss on maan's cheeks and ran from there...
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Maan : geet tum koi choti bachi ho joh complain kar rahi ho??...
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geet : aq loo aab maine kya kiya ...
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and geet moves towards the kids ..
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Maan {ST} : yeh ladki bhi na pal mai kuch hai aur dusre hi pal mai kuch aur yeh mujhe ek din pagal kar degi ... Kabhi ek mature Dost toh kabhi ek pyari se bade behen.. *smiles* toh kabhi bacho ke sath ek choti se bachi ...
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Geet to kids : chalo bacho aab mai kuch khelte hai ..
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kids got excited
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1kid : didi hum football khelenge na plss ...
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2nd kid : haan didi football
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one of the girl say : agar tum sab football kheloge toh hum kya karenge???
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1kid : tum sab aapne doll se khelena and starts laughing...
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Girls get very sad on hearing this...
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geet : arre yeh kya baat huvi boys chalo sorry bolo girls ko ,, yeh koi tarikha nahi hai maine yehi sikhaya hai tum sab ko??
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Boy's : sorry didi...
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Geet : sorry mujhe nahi girls ko bolo..
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Boys : sorry ...
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maan who was seeing all this maan {st} : yeh ladki kaise har cheez ko itne easily sambhal leti hai... Strange Girl ...
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After Sometime--------


everyone was playing but geet was feeling upset by seeing the kids play and happy ...
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she goes to a nearby bench and sit and was looking towards the sky and talking something ...
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when maan notice all this he went towards her and sat beside her ...
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when geet sense that maan is sitting beside her ..
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she look the other side and hide her tear and smiles towards maan...
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geet : maan aap yahan?
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maan : agar yehi sawaal mai tum se puchun toh?
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geet : matlab?
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maan : geet tum yahan kyu aa gayi ?? aur uss pe se roo bhi rahi hoo?
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geet : maan woh ...
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maan : geet as a friend tum mujhe se share kar sagti ho..
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geet : maan mujhe inn sab ko aise dekh k aapne family members ki yaad aa gayi hai ... hum sab month mai ek baar aise hi family picnic jate the...
mummyji papaji mere do bhai rajji aur mai ... lekin uss accident ne mujhe se sab kuch cheen liya maan sab kuch [Tears start rolling from her eyes ]
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maan : kaunsa accident geet?
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geet : humare ghar mai aag lag gayi aur uss mai sab kuch khatam ho gaya...
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sirf mai aur rajji bach gaye kyun ki hum dono shopping pe gaye the aur jab wapis aaye kuch nahi bacha tha... kuch bhi nahi... [Crying]
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maan gets upset after hearing this and takes her in side hug and console her ...
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maan : geet mai yeh toh nahi bol sagta ki family ko khone ka dukh kaise hota hai... mai samjta hoon lekin hum tumhe aapne aapko sambhalna ho aapne liye, nahi toh rajji ke liye aab who tum mai aapne mummy aur papa ko dekhti hoge na?? ...
hai aab tumhe himaat rakhni hogi tum aise nahi toot sagti aapna nahi toh rajji ka socho ...
woh tumhe aise dekh k khud toot jayegi...
Chup Ho jao plss..
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Geet control herself
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geet : thanks maan agar aaj tum nahi hote toh shahyad mai aapne aapko nahi sambhal sagti thi ..
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maan : arre thanks kis baat ka dost hote kis liye hai chalo aab warna sab bache aa jayenge...
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At Evening Time--
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they move from there all of them enjoyed the whole day at went back to orphanage...
After having dinner everyone was tired and retire to their respective room & maan also headed toward KM...
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All Night Geet was thinking about Maan ...
About His Smile, His sweet talks with kids & bonding with Rajji...
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& Most importantly The way he hugged her & Console her...
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With her thought & smiling face, she slept ...
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Precap-- Holi

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Edited by Angelrehana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
me first
nice updates
maan like geet nature
pal main kuch aur dusrey pal kuch
geet miss her family maan cosole her
witing for next
Edited by fariya20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Intrsting story nxt chp update sooon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
dil ka rishta hota hi aisa hai...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
aww so sweet update
geet shared her past with maan
nd he consoled her
pehle maan geet ke baare me soch raha tha
aur ab geet maan ke baare me
waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
lovely update buddy
maan likes geet
nd now wen shes missing her family consoling her
really love thr cute
frndship
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
awesome update...⭐️...Maan is impressed to see Geet's changing nature......Geet is upset remembering her parents...😭...Maan consoles her and hugs her...👏👏...precap is too good...😉...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
awesome part
geet missing her family and maan consoling her
all back to orphanage

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