MG- SS-The Punishment - THREAD 6- UPDATED Pt76/Pg134/14 Oct .. .......

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The Punishment

Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan Singh Khurana

- Meredith Sapp

Prologue...

She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Character Sketch


Geet

A 23yrs old beautiful girl . Very simple and intelligent . Full of attitude and high in morels . .. Completed her grds with maths hon. She is joining her dream college for MBA.




Maan


A 25yrs old Handsome, arrogent and full of attitude boy.A brat and the eldest son of Mr. Ranjeet Singh Khurana , a well known name in business world. MD of Khurana Construction . He joined MBA college after completing his Grds in Archi . Engg. he is 2nd yr student.

Mr. Ranjeet Singh Khurana ... Maan's Father

Rano ...Maan's Mom

Dev Singh Khurana...Maan's younger brother

Smt. Savitri Devi...Maan's Daadima

Col. Mohinder Singh Handa...Geet's Father

Late cap. Garima Singh ...Geet's Mom

Parminder Kaur...Geet's step mother

Brijveer singh ...Parminder's son

Meera Shergil... classmate of Dev , Geet's friend

Aditya Shergil... Maan's friend and Meera's elder brother

Yesh Singh Rathod ...Geet's classmate and friend

Pari... Geet's classmate and friend

Sameera Setty... Maan's classmate and GF.

Nayantara ... Dev's classmate and GF.

Rahul and Samar... Maan and Dev's classmates and friends.

There may be some more ..according to the flow of story...

Note... This is my 1st attempt . If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is a fiction not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.













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Index


Thread 1

Thread 2



Thread 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3716359/mg-ss-the-punishment-thread3-updated-pt43-pg139-9-sept

Thread 6
part - 66

Part - 67
Part - 68

Part - 69

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Part - 71

Part - 72

Part - 73

Part - 74

Part - 75

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u r rocking babie...😃Congrats
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hi babie,,,,,,hw s dy 2dy,,,???jiju ko writing skill dekhae kya...??
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

u r rocking babie...😃Congrats





Lily..🤗



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for the naya dhaaga...
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi babie,,,,,,hw s dy 2dy,,,???jiju ko writing skill dekhae kya...??



Priya... how r u ..??😊
Kahan gayab ho..

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