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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites






Thank you,, abhi dekha skul me

so chotu sa reply accept kar abhi ke liye

wese tera comment utna bhi big nahi tha ..mai aur padh sakti thi

tujhe sharm nahi aati ek bimaar bachhi ke samne ye drink pite hue






uthna bhi big nahi tha???

thoda sa aur likhthi tho ur readers would have doubted kaun sa update hain? upar waala tumhaara ya mera?

o... meri bimar bachi... chole bature khaane main tho tujhe koi problem nahi tha... mera drink dekhthe hi tujhe yaad aaya ke tu beemar hain???
😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

lots of things to tell today... aaram se bait aur padh...😆

pehle tho i came first... uff kithne din hue tere ff par comment kiye hue... so thats the second thing in mission... sorry yaara... for not commenting for the past few updates...

as i doubted maan was growing up thinking of geet where as geet was living a life without his memories... i loved how u brought the truth of her marriage before geet... and more over that loved how she is the perfect daughter... she didnt wanted to make her baba sad, and hence left the topic , atleast showed like that...

maan growing up as a rude msk but still such a lover boy of geet where as geet after knowing about maan, her dreams were filled with him... loved it...

their first meeting at the temple ... was just wow...seedha maan ke bahon main...

kya situation banaayi hain mona tumne? maan brough a duppatta for geet... he though gave it to her only by chance and he is angry on her for that ... brilliant...👏

loved maans concern for geet... which u shown in some stages after they met...

maan came to know about his angels miseries... koina when he meets her he will fade them off with a jhoo mantar ...

aaj ke update main msk ka ghor avtaar ka kya kahoon? he is so upset with the findings of geets misery and also the frustration that he couldnt find her... and geet although terrified with his raduhr roop was so loveable that she tried to ease him to her level best...

the last part of the update was magical... where he kissed her on forehead and uttered those words... maan... hope the reveltion of his name will make the situation easier between the two..

precap... hailaaa... dono mile bhi nahi lekin daddu ko wahaa baite pata bhi chal gaya ke maan kahaa aur kyu gaya hain...

once again sorry for not commenting to the prior parts... but aage se mera bhashan padne ke liye tayyar ho jaao... aaj ka kaiisa raha

















Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maan was so much hurt with all d information he got about geet in village
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Posted: 11 years ago


how r u today mona???
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Posted: 11 years ago
hai mona



sachhi yaar... likhne ke baad size dekha tho mein bhi yahi soch rahi thi ... kahi mona beech main hi sone na lage... but didnt had the mind to delete any thing😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



how r u today mona???




ab mat puch kasi hu .. jab thik ho jaungi to bol dungi ..
aaj skul gayi .. cool weather tha ..fir se sardi ho gayi



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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan is going back to U.S.. ?But still they don't know each other..? no... how can Maan go back empty hand...?😭 Dadji came to know that maan is in india for searching Geet...
Waiting for next part..
Edited by CutieTeju - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!! that was so touching..
maaneet convo was just superb..
they way she calmly attented the situation was so touching..
Finally maan said his name, but will she think that he has got an other lover?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oooh no man he can't go without knowing that the pull he was feeling for the strange girl is none other than his angel ...:)nd really luv their binding even without knowing ...nd the understanding...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111


first a very big sorry for not giving comments for last few updates.

kya karoon tumtho mujhe kuch kehthi nahi hona issliye thoda easily leliya par sach kahoon dil tho sad feel karrahi thi ki maine mona ko comment he nahi deparahihoon.

chalo kaha se shuru karoon.

maan ne tho geet ko bhool he nahi paaya aur yaha geet ko kuch patha he nahi hai and thanks to panna ki usko yaad dilaya ki wo shaadi shuda hai. And their plan to get the full details got success. And now geet ne bhi mann he mann may maan ko apna pati maan liya.

Maan ki maa ne tho usko poora support karke india bhejdiya taaki wo apni angel se mil sake par maan ne tho angel se mil bhi liya par recognise nahi karpaya aur usse gussa bhi hogaya. Lekin uske bandhan ne undono ko door jaane nahi diya aur jaha pahunchna hai dupatta ko ussi ke paas pahunchgayi par maan ne samjhnahi paya aur usko laga ki wo uss ajnabi ladki se attract hokar apni angel ko dhoka deraha hai.

aur yaha geet ne tho panna se kehdiya ki koi uski dil ko chunahi payega because maan has made his place in her heart👏👏👏

Yeh kya gussa may maan ne geet se shadi karna chaha. thank god uska dimaag sahi time par tikana aagaya. Loved how geet supported shattered maan by consoling him with her sweet talks.

At last maan ke muh se uska naam nikal gaya dekhthe hai geet wo sunn gayi ya nahi.

precap ke baaremein kya kahoon ab tak indono ko nahi maloom ki wo geet aur maan hai par yash ko maloom hogaya hai budda kahika kyun maan ke peeche pada hai😡



















priyaaa why felt sad haan!!!

aree i knew tum busy thi so saddy saddy feel karne ki koi jarurat nahi samjhi









Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago

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