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- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 57


All met in d evening ,, spend time together with normal talk after that Geet excused herself for some work and Maan went to freshen up. Dev and Meera were alone in Patio and they talked till late ,,CS came to call them for dinner and they went in.( now a days they craved to talk and to spend more and more time with each other)

After dinner Geet requested Dev to drop Meera at her place and he agreed ,, both left from there. Geet came in Maan's room ,, he was busy with his work ,, she gave him an envelope and said ..


Geet: Ye tumhare liye hai ,, written statement ,, keep it safe with u. I hope she never try to look this side ,, her career and chapter both r closed from here.


Maan took that and thanked her.


Geet: Mr Maan, please do a favour for me( Maan looked at her in concern) few months back I gave u some pics to trouble u ,, i hope u have discarded them but if not then please do that.


Maan gave a smile to her and said: i'll do that , don't worry.


Geet thanked him ,, wished GN and came back to her room . She took a book ,, read for some time and then slept .


Next day she was very busy ,, Maan called her in lunch time and they talked foe few mnts ,, they all met only at dinner table and talked for some time then left to their respective rooms. All became busy in their lives as before but there was a little change ,, all were happy now and chatted to each other normally.


Days changed in to weeks ,, Maan and Geet didn't realise that when 2months term was going to end . It was their last Sunday in her house. Maan's parents and Dadi came to meet them ,, they were very happy that from next Sunday both will be with them in KM. They were in living room and having their tea/coffee and talking to each other. Geet was not at home ,, she was hell busy coz of CM's visit in d city. Dadi and Rano's happiness has no bounds ,, Dadi spoke happily ...


Daadi: Maan and Dev i m so happy today that from next Sunday u r with us .. I m dying to see u there beta.


Rano: yes beta , i knew how we spend these days without u ? We missed u a lot beta. Now u'll be back to your home with us from next week and i m eagerly waiting for that day. ( her eyes became teary saying this) Dev who was sitting with her beamed with happiness and hugged her lovingly,, but one heart skipped a beat ,, his heart sunk with this realisation that he has to leave this house ,,, Geet's house next Sunday.


He became quiet and a restlessness engulfed him . he was so much happy and content in these days that he forgot d count of days. His day started with her GM and ended with her GN. Her presence, her aroma near him r source of mental peace ,, he waited night to dream about her and morning for a sweet GM wish from her. He was lost in his thoughts ,, he didn't know what all were talking about. His mind and heart stuck at one point separation from Geet. Now he was used to this life and was very happy. Though he missed his family in these days and he wanted to be with them, but away from Geet ,, Oh!! Lord ab mai kya karu?


His family went back after spending some time with them. Dev went to his room ,, he called Meera and they started their chatting. Maan was not in mood to talk anybody. He was very restless and sat there in living room alone ,, the one thing going away from Geet was killing him and he didn't have any option to avoid that. CS came there to call him for lunch but he denied saying that he was not feeling hungry ,, he asked about Geet and CS replied that she won't come on lunch and left to call Dev.

He didn't have courage to call her and to talk her ,, he remained there all alone lost in his thoughts. He forgot d track of time ,, day advanced in to eve.


Geet was back at home and went to change in her room. She came out after half an hour and demanded for a strong coffee for her ,,, she was very tired ,,, there was not a single day rest for her in this week. She asked about Maan and Dev and CS informed her ,, he said that Maan didn't take his lunch and he was in living room from hours. She felt odd and went to living room to meet him ,, he was half laying in sofa closing his eyes. Geet patted his shoulder to wake him ,, he opened his eyes and looked at her ,, she asked ...


Geet: kya hua esse ku soe ho? R u allright?


Maan replied in a low voice: hmmm .. i m fine.


Geet: U didn't take ur lunch ,, she touched his forehead to check d temp. And he closed his eyes to feel that touch ( he just wanted to hug her and pour out his heart to her),, yahan akele ku baithe ho? Aao chalo bahar coffee peete hai ,, I m too was feeling very tired.


Maan: u r so late ,, anything serious?


He got up and came out with her in open ,, they sat there and CS brought their coffee and snacks ,, dev was busy in his laptop and he didn't come out.


Geet: CM ka visit hai ,, naak mei dum ,,, so much arrangements for security.


Maan: Feeling very tired? Lunch kiya tha ya nahi?


Geet: kiska lunch ,, meetings per meetings aur chai(tea) peete raho ,, dil hi nahi kiya. CS ne bataya tum ne khana nahi khaya ,,, kya hua ,, tum theek ho na ,, koi prob to nahi?


Maan: nahi bas esse hi mera bhi dil nahi tha ,, don't worry mai theek hu. ( how could he say what situation he was going to face)


Both sat there for long and he was asking about her day course ,, he felt relief after talking to her and spending a quality time with her. It was getting dark and Geet told him to get fresh for dinner ,, they came inside ,, he went to his room and she to hers. They all met at dining table ,, took their dinner with little chit-chat.


Geet was tired so she went to sleep ,, Maan too was not in mood to talk and to work so he decided to sleep early ,, but sleep was far away from him. He was just thinking about him and Geet ,,he was thinking how Geet would react when she come to know about it,, Did she know about it? She never talk about their leaving ,, Pata nhi wo mere bare mei kya sochti hai?Wo bhi mujhe miss karegi ya nahi? Usse bhi ferk padega ya nahi? In his thoughts he didn't realised when he slept.



Missing you could turn from pain to pleasure ,

If i know you were missing me too.

Unknown


Sorry for mistakes.
Part - 58

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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NICE UPDATE...

MAAN IN CONFUSION...


GEET KA KYA REACTION HOGA...ABT MAAN AND DEV'S RETURN



DO CONTINUE SOON
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Lakshu .. Mona se baat ker rahi ho..😆
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lovely ud
Maan worried about geet and he knows that he is falling for her man restless to leave geet alone and go to his house
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back to home
maan wil miss her but wat about geet
waiting fr nxt
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😆😆 aaja Lakshu duje ghar..
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ab main yahaan hoon... tum ho???
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

ab main yahaan hoon... tum ho???



😆😆 Kahan jaungi..?
Aaj din mei aai thi tum..??
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Originally posted by: singh24



😆😆 aaja Lakshu duje ghar..



lagtha hain dono ek saath aa gaye...

am reading ur update now,,,

aaj thoda commenting kiya.. abhi bhi bahut main baaki hain... tu meri special hain is liye socha fursat se arroongi... kal paakaa... and after than non stop

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