Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 21

What an engaging tale ! I read all of the story within the last 2 days - whenever I could get to my phone !
Love the way you have shaped the characters-- they are complex but very real. It would be great if all was hunky dory after a love marriage . But it is not so in real life. How do people go from being madly in love to indifferent ? Are they indifferent to each other ? do they not care ?-- or did they just let go and fall into a rut ? Trapped by their egos - not able to reach each other. The dream sequences are brilliantly written. Gives a glimpse into the subconscious of Maan and Geet.
The entry of Dev will definitely add some spice to the story. Is he getting caught in alive triangle with Heer and NT ? Waiting to find out.
Please continue whenever you can :-)

Thanks a lot for updating! I had one day suddenly stumbled across this one and I had hoped you would write. There is something unique about this story I can't pt my finger on. Every character has many shades and I can't say I have completely understood them or something. However it is still enjoyable. Maybe the fogs of the darzeeling and the rains make it easier for them to play hide and seek. I don't know what you have planned ahead but it is intriguing. They are indifferent yet are they? I hope I will get more answers as I read on. Healing is a gradual process and it takes its own time to do that.

Breadcrumb 😉 Update is on the previous page (29).

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

I have been reading this story since couple of days...it's a beautiful story...I may not be able to analyze / review the story through comments due to my limited ability of expressing through words, but would certainly say that I have understood and felt the depth of emotions and words you have woven in it...all the updates are fabulous and and you have a great writing style...pls continue soon..also waiting for Smoke and Mirrors

Edit - typo correction

Firstly, I'm so sorry for the late reply. Secondly, thank you very much for such a kind response. Don't sell yourself short - your ability to express yourself is in no way limited. Your comment was one of the reasons I was feeling inspired to write again and I can't thank you enough for that. I would love to hear about what you think of the characters/story if you have the time.

Thank you so much for reading my stories :)

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

What a contrast of worlds. They both are right in the own way, yet I have felt more at ease with Heer's reasoning... but that's a personal opinion. There is no right and no wrong obviously, in real world.

Heer's right is something I sort of believe in, while Nayantara's right is something I would not disagree with.

I think I would like to see more of the interactions of these both.

Two ways of living, neither wrong, neither right. Passion vs. reason. Maybe moderation is the key.

(This comment refused to be anything but cryptic/faux-intellectual 😆)

Originally posted by: dqno1

I like Naintara

There is "thehraav" in her character.

Heer is a thundering storm where as NT seems more like gentle rain

Wondering about their equation with Dev now

I've been thinking about this comment a lot. I could never have put it better.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Healing is so hard to do!

Small steps, one step up and two steps back all the time!

Nice chapter

Steps that feel all the more tedious with my updating speed. Even I'm getting annoyed 😆

Thank you for still being here, Avi ji 🤗

Originally posted by: muskanp

Geet knew wat she wanted
Now more than ever
Welcome back
Thanks

Precisely. Thank you very much :)

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

I remember, during their first meet at Darjeeling, Maan had said he has not come after/for her, though he was desperately searching for her the day and after when she left him...but then he wanted to give her own space and time to come out of it...

and her healing process is already on I guess..

was the let us go back referring to going back to their home, the haveli or their old self of past..fabulous update.

I think he's begun to accept that it's not enough to just have her come home and get on with life again. They have to solve and heal.

In the most literal sense, the haveli. Everything else is open to interpretation 😉