Zara hatke ishq: OS maaneet pls read & give long comments

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
wow..really hatke story..
great job

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: maansee

👏...

or bhi hum bhi to the is story mai . bhul kyo gayi ...

kaisa laga😉😆

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

when r u planning to update this one dear waiting for it :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3479916/myonlymistakeimafemale-mg-pt-82-pg-63-22-july-15

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: kkiddoo
when r u planning to update this one dear waiting for it :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3479916/myonlymistakeimafemale-mg-pt-82-pg-63-22-july-15

not soon

sorry

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kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti

not soon

sorry

ohh yaar plz do it as soon as u can and plz don't leave it in btw i just love this work of urs plzzz 😊 no force but do try to do it soon 😊

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

its was really a hatke ishq..and hatke story..👏👏

i never expected something like this before reading the story...

loved it very much

i just started reading the story seeing the title...which seemed interesting..

and surprised to see geet was a writer in IF and maan came into picture as a professor cum her story reader cum her 7 year long friend..😲😲

bechari geet how she had felt knowing this...wo bhi she shared her drooling session with maan...😆

now this is what shocking..

i mean the flow of the story and the shocks and surprises you have given..omg i loved it so much...

and maan kept her storries alive in IF without her knowledge...

finally they met and confessed heir feeling...😳

awesome story...brilliant

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deepthich

@deepthich

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

ofcourse it is zara hatke ishq...

n it was FABULOUS!!!

OMG!!! loved it... u are awesome yaar...

very well written... i guess its ur first os... if it is not then also u are too good... it would be so difficult to make someone like os ... n u have done this very well... keep it up