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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
🤣 subah subah hi mera din ban gaya ...
simply beautiful os

you should have written this for os copetition, you have definately won frist prise...

loved the idea of geet worried about os competition, discussing her problems with her IF-friends, writing stories..lovely idea...

omg she was shocked to know that maan sir also usign IF for 7 years and follow her stories, stalking her all the time...

so both fell for each other in their IF world only...

loved pinky helping maan to post her stories without her knowledge...

but glad that finally they confessed and everything happened in good...

really really loved your sara hatke story...

missed you lot...

waiting for another hillarious story from you...

👏...

or bhi hum bhi to the is story mai . bhul kyo gayi ...

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

omg shruti ...tu cheej kya hai yaar ...awesome ... i m speechless ...

hai ram hame bhi nahi chora ... if stroy mai add kar liya ... thanku for this ...i m on cloud nine ...

lotss o hugs and kisses from us for u ...

missing u alot now a these days ...

jaldi se free ho kar totally active ho jao if par ...

story ke bare mai kya likhu ...uff kitna hatke tha ye ishq ... awesome dear ...

unka milna . ...if partner hona ...phir takrar ...

phir alag alag hona ...

or finally apne ishq ko samgh kar ek dussre se bina shikwa shikay mlna ...

come back soon dear with more and more time of yours for your if friends ...

your all three friends of if ...thanking you to make them alive in your story ...MAANSEE ... MADHURI ...AND REACHSKY ...

love u dear ...

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
😛

kya ho raha hai khabri ...

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

heyy chulbuli woww it was really soo nice i am loved it soo much

sapne mai bhi nahi socha ki ise koi stpry hogi haha it was too good

and that too from you i am dead for this totally

well geet using IF and discussing with Pinky lol same happeing with me with my friends but my friend supporting me here haha

and maan is fan of geet that was really good to see that

and he is chasing her every where haha it was really soo cool story loved it soo much thanks for this story

and maaneet fight uff they were apart but at end they were together

and maan poting her stories ahaa what a thought ji

really unique one and you did soo well must say soo soo much

and ha so aap ki IF journey started with these three i came to know about this now only soo sad part is my IF wali friend not with me now this was very sad for me ok leave it now

this story was too good i am speechless di nice to see this type of story form you

Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: DevilClan
Hai to hatke but ek problem ho gayi. Geet ki jagah maine half story me tumhe imagine kia. And these words- "His cabin! Detention! Wow!" seems that u got a treat (as I imagined u).

naughty😳

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: rashi_jain
this was just BRILLIANT!!!!!⭐️

I was going to sleep bt after seeing dat u have written an OS, cudnt stop myself from reading it!!!😳

And i must say THANK GOD I READ IT NOW!!!!😃
else if i wud hv read it later, i wud hv cursed myself for ignoring this master piece for my sleep!!!😉

u said dat this os is real n reel both...atlst tell which part is real n which reel???

HATS OFF TO UR WRITING!!!
👏👏👏

the part that where the main lead tries to write an OS was real

after entry of Maan all was reel

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

very unique concept! loved it.😛 It was truly Hat Ke!

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

unique n lovely love story...
loved it

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: maansee
omg shruti ...tu cheej kya hai yaar ...awesome ... i m speechless ...

hai ram hame bhi nahi chora ... if stroy mai add kar liya ... thanku for this ...i m on cloud nine ...

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lotss o hugs and kisses from us for u ...

missing u alot now a these days ...

jaldi se free ho kar totally active ho jao if par ...

story ke bare mai kya likhu ...uff kitna hatke tha ye ishq ... awesome dear ...

unka milna . ...if partner hona ...phir takrar ...

phir alag alag hona ...

or finally apne ishq ko samgh kar ek dussre se bina shikwa shikay mlna ...

come back soon dear with more and more time of yours for your if friends ...

your all three friends of if ...thanking you to make them alive in your story ...MAANSEE ... MADHURI ...AND REACHSKY ...

love u dear ...