Zara hatke ishq: OS maaneet pls read & give long comments

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

who is the boy who is the boy?????😆😆😆

nice story di.. i really miss ur stories...

same here

I also miss my writings😳

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Hai to hatke but ek problem ho gayi. Geet ki jagah maine half story me tumhe imagine kia. And these words- "His cabin! Detention! Wow!" seems that u got a treat (as I imagined u).

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awww that was sooo cute! Loved it!

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erumzaheer

@erumzaheer

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

OMG OMG shruti the story is mind blowing a totally
new n unique idea hats off to u.

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

this was just BRILLIANT!!!!!⭐️

I was going to sleep bt after seeing dat u have written an OS, cudnt stop myself from reading it!!!😳

And i must say THANK GOD I READ IT NOW!!!!😃
else if i wud hv read it later, i wud hv cursed myself for ignoring this master piece for my sleep!!!😉

u said dat this os is real n reel both...atlst tell which part is real n which reel???

HATS OFF TO UR WRITING!!!
👏👏👏