Zara hatke ishq: OS maaneet pls read & give long comments

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

who is the boy who is the boy?????😆😆😆

nice story di.. i really miss ur stories...

same here

I also miss my writings😳

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Hai to hatke but ek problem ho gayi. Geet ki jagah maine half story me tumhe imagine kia. And these words- "His cabin! Detention! Wow!" seems that u got a treat (as I imagined u).

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awww that was sooo cute! Loved it!

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erumzaheer

@erumzaheer

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

OMG OMG shruti the story is mind blowing a totally
new n unique idea hats off to u.

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

this was just BRILLIANT!!!!!⭐️

I was going to sleep bt after seeing dat u have written an OS, cudnt stop myself from reading it!!!😳

And i must say THANK GOD I READ IT NOW!!!!😃
else if i wud hv read it later, i wud hv cursed myself for ignoring this master piece for my sleep!!!😉

u said dat this os is real n reel both...atlst tell which part is real n which reel???

HATS OFF TO UR WRITING!!!
👏👏👏

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wov...fantastic os. i appreciate your writing skill in successfully depicting the main characters using IF and falling in love. awesome one.👏

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

😃very creative...

enjoyed it

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Smily

@angel_smily

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wow lovely os

really zara hatke ishq

luvd it

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

completely hat ke. very nice OS

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

🤣 subah subah hi mera din ban gaya ...

simply beautiful os

you should have written this for os copetition, you have definately won frist prise...

loved the idea of geet worried about os competition, discussing her problems with her IF-friends, writing stories..lovely idea...

omg she was shocked to know that maan sir also usign IF for 7 years and follow her stories, stalking her all the time...

so both fell for each other in their IF world only...

loved pinky helping maan to post her stories without her knowledge...

but glad that finally they confessed and everything happened in good...

really really loved your sara hatke story...

missed you lot...

waiting for another hillarious story from you...

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Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

!! Prologue !!! Akeli hi chal rahi thi is zindagi ki raho pe Na manjil or na raste ka tha kuch pata Rote bilkate le rahi thi saase kaise be Apni...

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Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

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Posted by: priya_21 · 4 years ago

due to inactivity my previous thread closed,so opening new one here Maaneet magical couple Maaneet Dreamworld bookmark the update thread or join...

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Posted by: tellyme · 1 years ago

Dear All, No, no no... No idea of starting it in near future. Just wanted to book this title as I have an overall idea of the story. These days...

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Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

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