SS : Geet Aur Dev Ki Kahaani, Maan Ki Zubaani! (Maaneet) Complete! - Page 84

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the update!
It was truly an awesome one!
Geet acting and all was just amazing and funny!
Hahah but thank god finally he said I love you.
If he hadn't I'm pretty sure she would've jumped off the cliff and killed herself. Hahah!!
Lol when maan found out how it was all a drama was hilarious. And how he is to geet to go away from him. Even at the end they were arguing.
This lovestlry started with arguing and ended with it.
Loved it so much. Happy ending!
Thanks so much :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ...a perfect ending to a cute love story...
sorry for late commenting...my parents strictly restricted me from surfing net as I am busy with competitive exams...but still my addiction to maaneet made me to comment when my parents are asleep...I hope u will forgive me...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely ending...
just love all of your stories
thanks for the pm and keep writing 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11
last part
awesome dear...
that was so dramatic...
Geet was too much...
but her mouth didnt stop from saying everything to Maan...
hahaha and Maan was so flabbergasted...
poor him 2 nautankis in his life...
nice one dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

ummm why to her house
if she is missing she will hardly be in her house


He is searching there coz he does not know from where to start the search and he thought searching for clues in her house by asking neighbours would be a good start!

though thats another matter that she is there
what a way to be missing by being in your own home thats good though
awww his geet yeh tab naa yaad aya when you were so freaking busy with your business
man kismat hi phooti hai geet ki yaar aise toh
parr ab karr bhi kya sakte hain
well duh dude agar dil ko dard naa hoga toh kisse hoga


😆

so lets see if he does find her what and how he says anything to her
oh my he really is speeding to get to his love good
hmm so geet called
and it seems drama shuru down her end cool


Yes! Nautanki ki nautanki shuru!😆

hain thats the plan her attempting to commit suicide
hmm well if that wont make him go to her and confess guess nothing else will
waah kya shock diya aapne maan ko
now stop wasting time talking to her on the phone and get to where ever she is jumping from
which he told you in her talks
run your car maan if you wanna save your geet
go get her back dude
so this is dadi plan to make him come to her and confess


Yup! Daadi zindabad! Sab ladkon ko aisi daadi mile!😉😆

well he did ask for it
but now she is guilty that she is worrying him so much but did you forget how much he worried you dear when he wasnt talking to you
itna toh banta hai
aww she dont wanna trouble him this way
or play with his feelings
he is lucky that she loves him that much that she is ready to abandon the plan for him


So true!

dang she is in two minds now

what to do stop this plan or carry on
what a dilemma for her
waise i wouldnt be surprised if he did just that as in another project he will start working on forgetting her again


😆 Maan ka kuch bharosa nahi!😆

she is right this way they will never marry
good she was saved from going away by man coming in time
hmmm but hope she doesnt accidentally fall either


Oh! Let's hope not!

or she wont survive for sure and that we dont want
well lets get ready for this confrontation then
what a performance so far and she hasnt even started yet
really will you solve all her problems
parr inki sab se badi problem toh aap ho usse kasie solve karoge
see told ya you are her problem


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oh teri this situation is really dangerous for geet
haila dont come close maan warna by mistake she could fall
now tell how you gonna solve this problem when it turns out you ae her problem even geet confirmed it mate
she sure made him guilty enough to realise his mistakes and it had to be done too
or he would take her for granted every time
okay all that you are visualising will only happen if you she steps off the ledge mate
i know dear kuch cheezen kabhi nahin badalti like maan and his bosiness
dude do not roll your eyes at her
and listen to what she has to say to you
well did you say you love her hell no she did but you havent
see she said it being a girl and all
she didnt have any trouble in saying it then why didnt you mate
come on it isnt that hard
oh teri now she actualy was thinking to jump
dont you dare geet


NAHIII! Kudna mat Geet! NAHI! 😆

but then what was she to think if he didnt say anything
thankfully though he said it and just in time too
warna ram naam satay ho jaata geet ka aaj
and boy did he say it more than once making her and us very happy
more importantly she is off that ledge and into his loving arms
ahhh that was just beautiful


Thank you!😳

chalo der aaye durusat aaye
teri did she just metnion the plan
yeh ladki bhi naa kya karein inka
haila she ratted the whole plan out to him is she mad


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and he reacted badly to that kya zaroorat thi apna muh kholne ki geet
uff yeh kya karr diya aapne
and she almost listened to him too
phew that was scary moment for sure when i thought geet gayi yaar


Got ya! Dara diya na?😉😆

but of course you wont do that
she faked it but it didnt work out that well for her
hey drama queen ho ya nahin hai toh aapki
now pull her up maan
arrey maaf karr dijiye warna yeh baar baar khudne ki dhamki dengi aap ko


😆

and he does listen to her
good one geet
did she have to tell about daid role in this
ufff yeh bhi kuch kam nautanki nahin hai khud
inki fights toh kabhi khatam nahin ho sakti
no matter what right


Exactly! That is what I wanted to convey at the end! The fought when they met and they fought even after confessing their love! That is what I wanted to show!

ahhh that was so beautiful though
cheers for pm

Thanks for your review! And lots of hugs and kisses for your constant support and encouragement!
If it had not been for you, I don't think I might have the guts to write another story! It is your long reviews which make me want to keep on writing!
Thanks a lot for your long reviews And may I keep on entertaining you till I can!

Take care
Kalpana
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update and lovely end.

WOW Geet acted to jump from the bridge and thrice to make Maan confess his feelings to her again, She is a drama queen and nautanki.
I will miss this story.

Thank you for your reviews and all the support you gave while I was writing it!
Thank you!
And I will miss this story too!😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

🤣 two drama queens. poor maan poori zindagi jhelna padega. 😆.

awesome story Kalpana... loved it.

Thank you!
And thanks for your awesome support!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

🤣 hilarious, fabulous update.

best part was when Geet said - 'paththar dupatte se ataka aur main iss taraf gir gayi, luckily maine deewar pakad li' 🤣

and instead of pulling her up Maan is asking her questions letting her hanging there 😆

Imagine after marriage, after every fight Geet giving this dhamaki to Maan *in Monisha from sarabhai v/s sarabhai style* - 'main bridge pe se kudke jaan dene jaa rahi hun' 😆




Thank you for your review!
And thank you for your constant support and encouragement!
That scene is my favorite too!
Sarabhai V/S Sarabhai!!!!! One of my fav TV shows! Mummyji! Main ghar chodke jaa rahi hun! 😆
I love that show and watch it everytime it is shown on TV!
Thanks once again for your review!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

And the last part was too good..Geet innocently blabbering about the plan and Maan in shock, saying 'main jaa raha hun, sanyaas lene...'

I could imagine Maan walking away and Geet running behind him. that was the perfect end for the story.
And Thank you for such a fabulous RomCom flavored story...Enjoyed it a lot 😊

Thank you for your kind words! I never thought that I was so good at writing Comedies but this story came out so good! I hope I can put up more stories like this!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

loved it.

nice ending

Thank you! And thanks for your support!

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