Originally posted by: chavvi16
ummm why to her house
if she is missing she will hardly be in her house
He is searching there coz he does not know from where to start the search and he thought searching for clues in her house by asking neighbours would be a good start!
though thats another matter that she is there
what a way to be missing by being in your own home thats good though
awww his geet yeh tab naa yaad aya when you were so freaking busy with your business
man kismat hi phooti hai geet ki yaar aise toh
parr ab karr bhi kya sakte hain
well duh dude agar dil ko dard naa hoga toh kisse hoga
😆
so lets see if he does find her what and how he says anything to her
oh my he really is speeding to get to his love good
hmm so geet called
and it seems drama shuru down her end cool
Yes! Nautanki ki nautanki shuru!😆
hain thats the plan her attempting to commit suicide
hmm well if that wont make him go to her and confess guess nothing else will
waah kya shock diya aapne maan ko
now stop wasting time talking to her on the phone and get to where ever she is jumping from
which he told you in her talks
run your car maan if you wanna save your geet
go get her back dude
so this is dadi plan to make him come to her and confess
Yup! Daadi zindabad! Sab ladkon ko aisi daadi mile!😉😆
well he did ask for it
but now she is guilty that she is worrying him so much but did you forget how much he worried you dear when he wasnt talking to you
itna toh banta hai
aww she dont wanna trouble him this way
or play with his feelings
he is lucky that she loves him that much that she is ready to abandon the plan for him
So true!
dang she is in two minds now
what to do stop this plan or carry on
what a dilemma for her
waise i wouldnt be surprised if he did just that as in another project he will start working on forgetting her again
😆 Maan ka kuch bharosa nahi!😆
she is right this way they will never marry
good she was saved from going away by man coming in time
hmmm but hope she doesnt accidentally fall either
Oh! Let's hope not!
or she wont survive for sure and that we dont want
well lets get ready for this confrontation then
what a performance so far and she hasnt even started yet
really will you solve all her problems
parr inki sab se badi problem toh aap ho usse kasie solve karoge
see told ya you are her problem
😆
oh teri this situation is really dangerous for geet
haila dont come close maan warna by mistake she could fall
now tell how you gonna solve this problem when it turns out you ae her problem even geet confirmed it mate
she sure made him guilty enough to realise his mistakes and it had to be done too
or he would take her for granted every time
okay all that you are visualising will only happen if you she steps off the ledge mate
i know dear kuch cheezen kabhi nahin badalti like maan and his bosiness
dude do not roll your eyes at her
and listen to what she has to say to you
well did you say you love her hell no she did but you havent
see she said it being a girl and all
she didnt have any trouble in saying it then why didnt you mate
come on it isnt that hard
oh teri now she actualy was thinking to jump
dont you dare geet
NAHIII! Kudna mat Geet! NAHI! 😆
but then what was she to think if he didnt say anything
thankfully though he said it and just in time too
warna ram naam satay ho jaata geet ka aaj
and boy did he say it more than once making her and us very happy
more importantly she is off that ledge and into his loving arms
ahhh that was just beautiful
Thank you!😳
chalo der aaye durusat aaye
teri did she just metnion the plan
yeh ladki bhi naa kya karein inka
haila she ratted the whole plan out to him is she mad
😆
and he reacted badly to that kya zaroorat thi apna muh kholne ki geet
uff yeh kya karr diya aapne
and she almost listened to him too
phew that was scary moment for sure when i thought geet gayi yaar
Got ya! Dara diya na?😉😆
but of course you wont do that
she faked it but it didnt work out that well for her
hey drama queen ho ya nahin hai toh aapki
now pull her up maan
arrey maaf karr dijiye warna yeh baar baar khudne ki dhamki dengi aap ko
😆
and he does listen to her
good one geet
did she have to tell about daid role in this
ufff yeh bhi kuch kam nautanki nahin hai khud
inki fights toh kabhi khatam nahin ho sakti
no matter what right
Exactly! That is what I wanted to convey at the end! The fought when they met and they fought even after confessing their love! That is what I wanted to show!
ahhh that was so beautiful though
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Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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