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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: geetsmile
nyc n nautanki wala ending me loved it
waiting for epilouge

Sorry! But there will be no epilogue! The story is complete!

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: priya111111
maan ko sab batadiya buddu geet neaur wo gussa bhi hogaya aur yeh phir manane keliye girne ki act bhi kiya . sach much ab maan ka kya hoga😆😆aur tho aur geet ne dadima ka naam bhi liya aur wo decide hi karliya ki indo nautanki waalon se dur jaakar sanyaas lena chahtha hai😆😆😆

just loved their fighting

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
awesome update...
poor maan bechara do nautankiyo k bech phas gaya😆😆
loved it

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: preeti555
lovely part
geet is such a nautanki bechara maan kaha phas gaya
epilogue toh banta hai

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: KReyAS
maan pe bhi geet ka asar aa gaya
such a natunki
love the updt

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: honeygrape
haha...awesome part...geet shoudnt have had so much of fun on his behalf..poor maan...😆😆
lovvd that dialog of maan where he said that he l go for sanyaas😆😆 enjooyed reading the story...is there any chance for an epilogue?

Sorry! There wont be any epilogue! This story is complete!

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: punam2712
FOR A MINUTE HEARING THAT GEET WAS MISSING MAAN LOST HIS SENSES
HE REALIZED HOW MUCH HE LOVED HER
BUT GEET WAS ANOTHER NAUTANKI
SHE COULDNT DECIDE WHETHER TO CARRY ON WITH THE DRAMA OR TELL MAAN THE TRUTH
BUT THEN SHE SPILLED THE BEANS HERSELF
LOVED READING THIS UPDATE
IT WAS LIKE A PING PONG MATCH WITH BOTH OF THEM BEING A BIGGER NAUTANKI THAN THE OTHER
LOVED THE STORY TOO

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: priyasree
fabulous update

Thank you!😃

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
having mixed emotions right now... feeling absolutely great reading the nautanki😆 but feeling sad that this is the last part... as this is the only one which i read among ur ffs, i would definitely miss u , if u didnt staart a new one soon... tumhein miss karne ka quota already poora ho chuka hain tho dont even think of keeping me waiting... start the new one asap😳... though i wish to read ur ongoing ones... but due to time constraints am not able to... opening two new threads is eating all my spare time😳...

It is ok! I understand you completely! May be one day you might get time to read it! I will wait for that day!😊 And the next story will be up soon!😃

coming to the udate now...
u cracked me up BB... just enjoyed and was laughing continuosly reading the update...

That is what I hoped for when I started this story! Wanted you to keep on laughing while you read it!

though i loved how geet was feeling guilty for troubling maan but i loved it more when she left all her guilt trip hearing maans simple query as to what was his mistake!!!

I thought Geet is the type who would feel guilty for playing games! And then her reacting like that to Maan's response was something I felt Geet would do!

hearing the next splash, i though it is the end of the roller coaster laughter ride, as like maan i too thought geet had definitely jumped ... but again surprised me... imaging geet latking pading on the bridge just cracked me up😆

Actually till the day I started to write the chapter, that was plan. Geet was supposed to fall in and Maan was supposed to save her. But while I was writing this idea came and I thought that this was better ending for a rom com story!😉😆

and the end... what more to ask...sanyaas ke peeche bhaagtha maan... aur maan ke peeche bhaagthi geet...😆

I don't know why but I felt this was a better end. In my other two versions, the guy takes the girl to his house where the rishta gets finalised but here I felt this was a better approach! They fought from the day they met, now it was fitting that the story ended with their fighting.

when i read the title of the story for the first time when u started this off... i was quite apprehensive... whether to read this or not... i thought may be an emotional drama waala hoga... triangle love between two brothers... but thank god, i read this ... not only i got to read such an awesome piece of work but also got to know u BB...

That is why I named it that way! I wanted to confuse people with the name and make them curious to read it!😉 Even I am thankful that I wrote it coz I got to meet an awesome person like you!😳😃

start the new one asap... will be waiting ... nahi tho geet ki tarah bridge doondke nikal padoongi mein... phir tum aana mere peeche😆

Haila! Dont jump! Don't jump! I will write the next one sooner! Pakka promise! Just give me a week! Then you will have a new one!😃

Thank you for your love and support during the course of this story! Really appreciate it!

Hope to keep on entertaining you in the future too!😃

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-
amazing end
sach mei geet and dadima are full nautanki!!!!!!😆
bechare maan ki kya halat kar di!!!😆
loved that finally maan confessed to geet!!!!😳
loved the whole update
thanks for giving such a wonderful story!!!!!!

Thanks for your review!

Hope to keep on entertaining you!

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