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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Well written! Maan busy wid wrk n ignores Geet! Dadi played a prank! Maan worried abt Geet! Regd note - np! Glad u did well! update soon! Btw unable to read updates frm 31 Jan to 22 Feb! Gng to India! Will read wen I get back

Thanks for the review!

Enjoy your trip!

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: chavvi16
and welcome back here too
why did she have to fall in love with such a workaholic man

I dont know! Ask the makers!😆

i agree i dont maan to leave his work for her
but there is a limit to all this
i mean come on at least you should have told her naa that you are busy due to this reason
thats why you arent talking to her taking her calls etc
itna toh banta hai apne pyaar ke liye

Agreed! Totally agreed!😆

parr nahin yeh toh MSK hai naa aisi baat inke dimaag mein kahan aayengi
awww she was thinking he might be ill or something so she went to see him but nope that wasnt the case
but thank god for dadima man she sure helped the love birds

Daadima Zindabaad!😉

by telling maan that geet has disappeared
well that got our lover boy back to his senses regarding his geet
and about time too
so he is go looking for her
and he better confess and also propose warna dadi toh inhe bilkul naa chodengi
cheers for pm
and you dear take your time shall wait for it

Next chapter will be one of my best work, guarantee!

Thanks for the review!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21
Lovely update!
Geet is worrying so much about maan here and maan Sab is busy with his project, atleast he should've called or texted her once letting her know why he was busy and why he didn't talk to her at. Poor geet! Thankfully dadi maa is there to solve this problem. I love this partner in crime Jodi. Dadi maa and dev. Maan ko sirf dadi maa hi seedhe raaste layengi.
I love how dadi maa called maan and how maan replied in a calm voice " that he is busy and that he can't help her" but when it came to geet he got all worried!
Yep he deserves it. I don't know what you have in store for us at the next chapter but damnn I know for sure it'll be good!
Geet missing plan all the way.

Thanks for the pm and the update.
Continue soon <3

Thanks for the review!

Partner in crime??? LOL! That is so funny!😆

Exactly! Maan ko toh sirf Daadima hi line pe laa sakti hai! So true!

Next chapter will be one of my best, thats a guarantee! It will also be the funniest chapter out of all 11 chapter!

Take care

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: mauaa
aww aap bhi studnt ho meri trh.. i know hw its dificlt.. wese muze to abhi hi pta chal raha hai.. i m in 1st yr..
anws.. nice update.. me to bhul hi gyi thi ye wali story.. last 2-3 chaptr padhe to yaad aa gya..😆

Thanks for the review!

Haila! Only first year! Bahut paapad belne baaki hai! Abhi toh bas shuruvaat hai! I am so thankful I passed College 6 years back!

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
you are back 😊 and glad to know that you scored well in exams.

lovely update - here Geet is worried for Maan, aur Maan hain ke kaam ke chakkar mein Geet ko to bhul hi gaye 😡

drama queen Dadi ka plan chal gaya...ab dekhate hai Geet kya karegi, chhodana nahi Maan ko. Attaaackkk

Thanks for the review!

Yes! Geet will attack! I think next chappy will be the best ad funniest out of all 11 chapters!

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#806

part 10
awesome dear...
nice one...
Geet is disappointed with Maan's ignorance...
stupid Maan...
hahaha Daadima's plan is gonna work...
but to what intensity we will get to know in the next update...
cont soon dear...

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: spvd
part 10
awesome dear...
nice one...
Geet is disappointed with Maan's ignorance...
stupid Maan...
hahaha Daadima's plan is gonna work...
but to what intensity we will get to know in the next update...
cont soon dear...

Thanks for the review, dear!

Yes, Maan is stupid when it comes to feelings! I told you before in this story Maan is going to be a total businessman!

Next chapter will be one of the best chapter I have written in terms of dialogue and plot, thats a guarantee!

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#808

pehle... welcome back... as u had told about ur net prob, i dint thought it would take so many days,... and as days were passing i was wondering what happened!! but happy now that u r here and also that u ave got good marks... keep it up...

the update was as usual lovely one... felt sad when geet was crying hugging daadi missing maan and for this weird ignorant behaviour... but jab daadi dev saath ho tho tension kis baat ki...😆

what a great idea daadi came up with and teer seedha nishaane par!!! am looking forward for geet in attack mode...

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
pehle... welcome back... as u had told about ur net prob, i dint thought it would take so many days,... and as days were passing i was wondering what happened!! but happy now that u r here and also that u ave got good marks... keep it up...
the update was as usual lovely one... felt sad when geet was crying hugging daadi missing maan and for this weird ignorant behaviour... but jab daadi dev saath ho tho tension kis baat ki...😆

what a great idea daadi came up with and teer seedha nishaane par!!! am looking forward for geet in attack mode...

Hi dear,

Even I did not think the net would take so much time! Some wire was broken and hence the net went slow and then stopped totally. The whole situation was horrible. And the worst part was that I could not inform here about me freaking coz the nearest Cyber cafe was linked to same net cable and was also down and the next cafe was far enough that I did not have time to go there. The freak out during exam got to me and going to that cafe meant wastage of half hour just to get ready and go there and another half hour while coming back. And at that time I could not afford to loose that much time. Finally, the exams went well and I am feeling really better. The horrible thing was that all this madness was not due to me studying less but due to me taking too much stress. The subject I barely passed was the one where due to stress I blanked out. But now I have two months for my next and final exams (after which I am free) so I can prepare properly and not stress myself during the process. Infact, earlier I used to study daily but nowadays I have given myself break on Saturdays and Sundays. Feeling so better mentally that I can focus really well on writing. Really eager to read you review on the last chappy! Might update tonight or tomorrow!

Take care

Kalpana