SS : Geet Aur Dev Ki Kahaani, Maan Ki Zubaani! (Maaneet) Complete! - Page 8

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

i m waiting for that only😃

Originally posted by: singh24

love their nok-jhok...😛

Waiting for d next part dear..😊

Congrats dear..

Thanks to Lakshmi .. she gave ur SS link...

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

NO probs! Happy that you atleast read it now!

😆Why is everyone shocked to see a positive Dev? Is it that unbelievable? Has no other writer attempted a positive Dev?

Maan is just like in the show except he has a soft corner for Dev but then if Dev was like this in the show I am sure Maan would have treated him the same way! But Dev in the show decided to gamble many of his money which Maan hated! I am sure that when Maan and Dev pf the show were young this was how they behaved too. Yes, Maan dislikes Geet. Generally, in a story the guy loves the girl secretly but acts differently but here that is not the case. Maan seriously does not like Geet. But don't worry. The situation will change in next two chapters itself!

Neither have I!😉

Hope that you would enjoy the next few chapters the same way you enjoyed this!

Yes (Punching the fist in the air)! By saying that you could relate Maan and Geet to the Maaneet of the show you made me really proud of myself! Coz this means I have stayed true to their character. So your compliment has really made my day!😃

You are so right! With Geet's charm Maan will fall for her! But Dev and Daadima will not have anymore hand in it till he falls for her. Then this story will take lots of twists and turns! You will find the story take a different turn in each part! The fun actually is yet to start. It will start after Maan falls for Geet!

Of course! Geet will analyse! Her personality in the show is such that she does not behave rudely to anybody and I am trying to stay true to her character. So she will feel guilty for her behaviour! Infact, I was confused as to how to get Maan and Geet to start fighting as Geet is generally polite to everybody unless she is annoyed at anything. That is why the file scene where she is so annoyed at her situation that she removed her anger on whoever came her way and this time unfortunately it was Maan!

Thanks for the review! Really loved reading it! Phew! You are one of the few whose words elicited me to write almost a monologue over the story!😉

I will PM you but you will receive PM for other works of mine too! Sorry but I have problem of forgetfulness. cant remember who is reading which of my story. SO I PM everybody! Hope you understand! I am writing only three stories and I update all of them only once a week! So if you dont mind getting one two extra PMs in a week, then sure I will PM you!

Thanks for reading!

am so touched with ur reply... thank u so much

i will be waiting for all the twists and turns u have planned for our maaneet...

waiting eagerly for the next

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Thanks for the review!

And really lovely pic!

And thank you Lakshmi for providing me with a new reader!

@kalpana... ur story deserves more and more readers ...its really an amazing one...

Originally posted by: spvd

u took the words from my mouth dear...
i exactly though that way only about this MG version from AK version...

part 2
awesome...
my God this is so so different dear...
but am enjoying this more...
my God Geet was too good...
the way she and Maan fought was so hilarious...
and at the end Maan completely forgot about what he wanted to tell and do...
shes such a beautiful and naughty distraction...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

@ babie ... no thanks among friends dear...

@kalpana... ur story deserves more and more readers ...its really an amazing one...

Originally posted by: gurti30

awesome dear

poor maan geet ne enter bhi nahi karne diya😆

and the way they were fighting i dont think it will be easy for them to be friends😆