SS : Geet Aur Dev Ki Kahaani, Maan Ki Zubaani! (Maaneet) Complete!

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

first of all thanx for the pm u sent for the first part... sorry i was lil busy.. was not able to read it before...

part 1

so much loved this concept ... and the update too...

its obviously a relief knowing devs real intention...

maan though seems to be a strict person but he just is the best bro... he knows at each step what dev was upto, ready with cash too😉, and also ready to help him even though it seems that maan doesnt like the idea of dev and geet together...

dev on the other hand seems hell bent to make geet as his bhabhi... i dont have even a slight objection in that...😃

dev and dadi dono mile hue hain... good...

am so eager for the upcoming parts and to know how maaneet dosti will turn up and also dev dadimas future planning too...

part 2

what a lovely part yaar... loved so much... and the best thing i found after this part is... i could relate ur maan and geet to out maaneet in the show... the door sequence where both where cursing each other and were fighting on and on for no reason ... was easy to imagine with them... thanx to ur brilliant writing...

maan is really determined to befriend with geet, though sad that its for dev... but am sure with the planning team behind and geets charm... he will surely fall for her..

i liked geet most when she was analysing herself at the end and concluded that yes she was rude... 😆

looking forward for maans next step towards dosti and geets reaction...

ps: am reading just ur this story... if its not a big problem pls pm me... am sending a buddy request... thanx

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: punam2712
GEET IGNORED MAAN TODAY
WILL HE SUCCEED TOMORROW IN BEING FRIENDS WITH HER

You have to wait and watch!

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: chavvi16
yeh babaji kya karen inka
ego aur attitude ki dukaan hain yeh
abbe dosti karne aaye the ki kya
aur aise dosti karte hain
wait file in dustbin really
this geet is ajeeb i tell ya
poori ki poori khalli hain yeh
what was that looking for file like that
dekho maan ko matlab ke liye dosti aur phir jab kaam ho jaayega toh bhaad mein jaaye geet
babaji kaise insaan hain yeh
parr kya jhaada hai geet ne inhe
maana ki yeh inse pyaar karti hai parr agar yeh kuch bole toh geet bhi chup nahin reh sakti
waise naubat nahin aayegi ki aap inhe aage jaake ignore karein
after all pyaar jo ho jaayega
cheers for pm

Thanks for the review dear!

Ha ha ha! Ego aur Attitude ki dukaan! Nice name!🤣

Yes, file in dustbin! I wanted to show Geet really frustrated because she is not the type of girl who would shout at Maan without reason! As I did not have any reason for why she should be annoyed at Maan, I gave her frustration of not getting the file! The file search was just so that I would have a reason for Geet to be annoyed enough to shout on anybody who comes to meet her at that time!

Yes, matlab ke liye he is befriending her but dont worry! Ek baar dosti kar li then Maan will never think about getting away from her.

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: rashmivaish
That was superb kalpana.
maan and Feet
I loved them. jhagda hi to pyar ki shuruaat hai
hai na?

Exactly! Fight is the starting step of love! But dont worry! In the next chap dosti jaroor hogi! Bas chapter likhna baaki hai!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21
Geet ignoring maan wah wah!
Haha thTs geet, who will turn the glue upside down for little things and start talking to herself!
Haye kitni rude thi tum geet today with maan, but it's okie pyar mein chalta hai!
What can we say maan singh khurana will always remain maan singh khurana, he will never accept defeat! He will do his best to become friends with geet no matter what.

LOL I loved their argument about andar nahi aa sakte app!
How they insulted eachother and called eachother nMes!
Hitler to sar dard. It was hilarious.

Thanks for the update and do continue soon
Loved the update.
Love
Rafia

Thanks for the review, little sis!

Yes, I wanted Geet to be frustrated when Maan comes to meet her as I wanted them to fight and hence, the searching the whole house and turning it upside down which made her frustrated enough to fight with Maan!

Yes, Maan will have his next attempt to befriend Geet in next chap!

😆 Happy that you loved their andar nahi aa sakte waala fight!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: aditi_2010
It was too good...I felt like I a living the initial days of maaneet again...Do continue soon😊

Wow! I reminded you of initial Maaneet days! You have given me one of the best compliments coz my work reminding you of Maaneet means I havent shown them OOC! I have kept them true to character!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: honeygrape
omg lovvvd the 1st part...lovvvly one...seeing Dev in this form is somethng new...but loovd his n dadimas idea of getting both of them together...eager to read more

Thanks for the review!

Happy that you liked my positive Dev!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
first of all thanx for the pm u sent for the first part... sorry i was lil busy.. was not able to read it before...

NO probs! Happy that you atleast read it now!

part 1

so much loved this concept ... and the update too...

its obviously a relief knowing devs real intention...

😆Why is everyone shocked to see a positive Dev? Is it that unbelievable? Has no other writer attempted a positive Dev?

maan though seems to be a strict person but he just is the best bro... he knows at each step what dev was upto, ready with cash too😉, and also ready to help him even though it seems that maan doesnt like the idea of dev and geet together...

Maan is just like in the show except he has a soft corner for Dev but then if Dev was like this in the show I am sure Maan would have treated him the same way! But Dev in the show decided to gamble many of his money which Maan hated! I am sure that when Maan and Dev pf the show were young this was how they behaved too. Yes, Maan dislikes Geet. Generally, in a story the guy loves the girl secretly but acts differently but here that is not the case. Maan seriously does not like Geet. But don't worry. The situation will change in next two chapters itself!

dev on the other hand seems hell bent to make geet as his bhabhi... i dont have even a slight objection in that...😃

Neither have I!😉

dev and dadi dono mile hue hain... good...

am so eager for the upcoming parts and to know how maaneet dosti will turn up and also dev dadimas future planning too...

Hope that you would enjoy the next few chapters the same way you enjoyed this!

part 2

what a lovely part yaar... loved so much... and the best thing i found after this part is... i could relate ur maan and geet to out maaneet in the show... the door sequence where both where cursing each other and were fighting on and on for no reason ... was easy to imagine with them... thanx to ur brilliant writing...

Yes (Punching the fist in the air)! By saying that you could relate Maan and Geet to the Maaneet of the show you made me really proud of myself! Coz this means I have stayed true to their character. So your compliment has really made my day!😃

maan is really determined to befriend with geet, though sad that its for dev... but am sure with the planning team behind and geets charm... he will surely fall for her..

You are so right! With Geet's charm Maan will fall for her! But Dev and Daadima will not have anymore hand in it till he falls for her. Then this story will take lots of twists and turns! You will find the story take a different turn in each part! The fun actually is yet to start. It will start after Maan falls for Geet!

i liked geet most when she was analysing herself at the end and concluded that yes she was rude... 😆

Of course! Geet will analyse! Her personality in the show is such that she does not behave rudely to anybody and I am trying to stay true to her character. So she will feel guilty for her behaviour! Infact, I was confused as to how to get Maan and Geet to start fighting as Geet is generally polite to everybody unless she is annoyed at anything. That is why the file scene where she is so annoyed at her situation that she removed her anger on whoever came her way and this time unfortunately it was Maan!

looking forward for maans next step towards dosti and geets reaction...

ps: am reading just ur this story... if its not a big problem pls pm me... am sending a buddy request... thanx

Thanks for the review! Really loved reading it! Phew! You are one of the few whose words elicited me to write almost a monologue over the story!😉

I will PM you but you will receive PM for other works of mine too! Sorry but I have problem of forgetfulness. cant remember who is reading which of my story. SO I PM everybody! Hope you understand! I am writing only three stories and I update all of them only once a week! So if you dont mind getting one two extra PMs in a week, then sure I will PM you!

Thanks for reading!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Exactly! Fight is the starting step of love! But dont worry! In the next chap dosti jaroor hogi! Bas chapter likhna baaki hai!

i m waiting for that only😃