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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the next part...
update soon!!!!
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PART IX. SOME ROMANTIC MOMENTS!

"NAHI!", Geet shouted while glaring at Maan. Maan closed his eyes praying to any God available to give him patience for a while or else he was sure he would strangle Geet pretty soon, lover or not. After yesterday's debacle of Maan accidently insulting Geet, Maan had decided to start ignoring Dev's advice. It was obvious to him now that all the advice Dev gave were for girls he dated and not the type of girl Geet was. So Maan decided to just ignore Dev and use his own brain. Pretty soon, he remembered his Daadima saying once that when it came to matters of love forget the brain and listen to your heart and Maan decided to follow his Daadima's words and ignored all the plots and plans made by Dev. And hence, here he was trying to pick Geet up from her office. "Geet please!", Maan spoke in a calm voice, "Get in the car!" Geet shook her head while glaring at him, "Nahi! Main nahi aane waali!" She looked up and mumbled, "Dekha! Dekha aapne Babaji! Kaise baat karte hain yeh mujhse! Inse keh dijiye ki mujhe inse baat hi nahi karni!" She folded her arms against her chest and huffed. Maan rolled his eyes at her antics and got down from the car. She looked at him and frowned. He got near her and she felt nervousness creep into her. Suddenly, he grabbed her hand and before she could react, he opened the car door and practically threw her in. He closed the door and got in from the other side. She glared at him as he started the car. "Dekhiye Maan! Aap mere saath aisi zabardasti nahi kar sakte. Gaadi rokiye!", Geet spoke up. Maan gave her a glare and continued driving. Geet start shouting, "Maine kahaa gaadi rokiye! Abhi ke abhi!" When Maan did not react, she tried to grab the car keys. Maan caught her hand and glared at her, "Geet! Do minute shanti se baith sakti ho." Geet shook her head and Maan growled, "Fine! I am sorry!" Geet frowned and Maan continued, "Kal ke mere bartaav ke liye. And to make up for my fault, main tumhein dhaabe pe khaana khilaane le jaa raha hoon. Got it! Ab toh shanti se baitho!" Suddenly, Geet stoped glaring and started grinning. She excitedly shouted, "Dhaabe pe dinner! Pehle kyun nahi bataaya? Main toh chup chaap gaadi mein baith jaati!" Maan shook his head and roared, "Geet! Surprise naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai!" Geet bit her tongue and remained quiet for rest of the trip.

Soon, they reached the Dhaaba and were eating dal makhani, roti and sabzi. Both of them remained quiet the whole time they were eating. Just as there Lassi arrived, Geet's phone beeped indicating a message. She burst out laughing after reading it and Maan frowned in confusion. Geet explained all the while laughing, "Woh ... he he he... Dev...Dev ne Joke bheja... He he he!" Maan felt jealousy stir inside him and he grumbled, "Tum usse jyaada hi close ho! Nahi?" Geet nodded not noticing his anger, "He is my best friend. Infact, NT se maine hi toh uski introduction karwaayi thi. Aur jab use NT se pyaar hua toh main hi thi jise usne pehle yeh baat bataayi!" Maan looked at her with sadness, "Bahut dard hua hoga na?" Geet looked at him in confusion and Maan elaborated, "Jab tumhein pata chala ki he doesn't love you!" Geet continued to give him a confused look and Maan continued, "You know, with you loving him and all!" Geet's jaw dropped open and after few seconds of silence she burst out laughing. Now it was Maan's turn to be confused. She stopped laughing and shyly looked at him. Should she... Yes, she should. They were friends. There was no harm in telling him now. Worst situation would be he would reject her but she had to try right? She smiled and mumbled softly, "Ab tak toh aapko samajh jaana chaahiye Mr. Maan Singh Khurana ki mujhe kaun pasand hai!" As she pointedly looked at him, his eyes widened. He remained silent for few seconds trying to get his brain to work enough to give her a response. After a while, she could not stand his silence anymore and got up and walked away. Maan just sat there in shock till her words finally penetrated his brain. He started grinning at this news. He got up from the place and went and stood by Geet. She sensed him but remained staring in front unsure of what he felt for her.

Preet Ki Lat Mohe Aisi Laagi

Ho Gayi Main Matwaari

Geet looked at Maan nervously.

Bal Bal Jaaun Apne Piya Ko

He Main Jaaun Vaari Vaari

Maan felt his breath stop for a moment when he saw the love in her eyes.

Mohe Sudh Budh Naa Rahi Tan Mann Ki

Yeh Toh Jaane Duniya Saari

She looked away but Maan stared at her.

Bebas Aur Laachaar Phiru Main

Haari Main Dil Haari

Maan caught her hand in his hand and held it tightly.

Haari Main Dil Haari

Geet smiled but remained quiet. She realized his answer at that moment.

Tere Naam Se Jee Loon

Tere Naam Se Marr Jaaun

Maan raised her hand and kissed it softly.

Tere Naam Se Jee Loon

Tere Naam Se Marr Jaaun

Maan took few steps sideways getting close to her.

Tere Jaan Ke Sadke Mein

Kuch Aisa Kar Jaaun

Geet leaned towards him and placed her head on his shoulder.

Tu Ne Kya Kar Daala

Marr Gayi Main

Mit Gayi Main

Ho Ji Ha Ji Hogayi Main

He lifted her face with his hand and kissed her forehead.

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Teri Deewani

Deewani

She smiled at him and hugged him tightly.

Tu Ne Kya Kar Daala

Marr Gayi Main

Mit Gayi Main

Ho Ji Ha Ji Hogayi Main

Suddenly, it started raining.

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Maan grabbed Geet's hand and dragged her away to the car but she pulled her hand away and stood there enjoying the rain.

Ishq Junoon Jab Hadh Se Badh Jaaye

Maan stopped running and turned around.

Ishq Junoon Jab Hadh Se Badh Jaaye

He felt his heart skipping beats as he saw her standing in the rain with rain drizzing down her face giving her an ethereal look.

Haste Haste Aashiq Sooli Chad Jaaye

He walked towards her letting himself get wet.

Ishq Ka Jaadu Sar Chad Kar Bole

Geet was standing in the middle of the road with her hands outstretched and eyes closed.


Ishq Ka Jaadu Sar Chad Kar Bole

Maan came close to her and she opened her eyes.

Khoob Laga Lo Pehre Raste Rab Khole

She smiled shyly but he just stared at her.

Yahi Ishq Di Marzi Hai

Yahi Rab Di Marzi Hai

He grabbed her hands and pulled her close.

Yahi Ishq Di Marzi Hai

Yahi Rab Di Marzi Hai

She shyly pushed him away.

Tere Bin Jeena Kaisa

Haan Khudgarzi Hai

She turned to walk away when he grabbed her hand.

Tu Ne Kya Kar Daala

Marr Gayi Main

Mit Gayi Main

Ho Ji Ha Ji Hogayi Main

She turned to look at him with love in her eyes.

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Teri Deewani

Deewani

She walked towards him.

Ho... Ho...

She stood on her tiptoes and placed a kiss on his cheek

Ho... Ho...

He stood there astonished while she ran away.

Hey Main Rang Rangeeli Deewani

Hey Main Rang Rangeeli Deewani

She stopped few steps ahead and twirled around enjoying the feeling of being in love.

Hey Main Albeli Main Mastani

She grinned happily as she twirled around.

Gaaun Bajaaun

Sabko Rijhaaun

Hey Main Deen Dharam Se Begaani

He stood there just staring at her happy in his heart that he was the reason behind her happiness.

Hey Main Deewani Main Deewani

She felt her heart would burst with happiness.

Tere Naam Se Jee Loon

Tere Naam Se Mar Jaaun

She stopped spinning and just stared at him.

Tere Naam Se Jee Loon

Tere Naam Se Mar Jaaun

He opened his arms for her.

Tu Ne Kya Kar Daala

Mar Gayi Main

Mit Gayi Main

Ho Ji Ha Ja Hogayi Main

She felt tears well up in her eyes as she realized that her love was not unrequited anymore. She ran and hugged him tightly.

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Teri Deewani

Deewani

Teri Deewani

Deewani

AUTHOR NOTES

If you want PMs, then buddy me!

And sorry for the delay, we had no net for a while here!

Oh and by the way, I won't be able to reply your reviews or mails for a while coz my net is still not alright! Will reply when it gets normal!

PRECAP

Daadima makes a final plan.

Why did she have to make one?

You will get the reasons in next part!

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Posted: 11 years ago


thanx for updating yaara... missed this...

maan finally decided to use his rather than devs brains for patofying geet!!! and what a result in a single day!!! aise hi MSK nahi hain😉

loved their confession...hatke😳...

final plan... kyu???

ps: hope ur net would be back soon ... missing u BB

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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welcome back BB

aise bhi koi gayab hotha hain kya???

any ways happy to see u back and that too with an update

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Posted: 11 years ago
lol dhaba pehle bata dete mein baith jati.. omg geet is 1 piece.. awwnn romantic... lol precap? y does dadi have to make a plan? cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
At last they got to knew that they love each other and dev was nothing but misunderstanding.
The scene Maan dragging and throwing Geet into car and drive to dhaba was very nice and the song is very romantic.
Geet is one of a kind, she is the lover of food.
LOLZ on her calm reaction as soon as Maan state that they are going for diner at her favourite dhaba.
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Dhaba date! Maan talks abt her n Dev! Geet realises! Superb song! Geet decides to revela her feelings! Awesum romnace n dance in the rain! She kisses his cheek n Maan hugs her! update soon, well written! interestin precap
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Posted: 11 years ago

😊





Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
well about time man
that he ignored dev advice they are useless when it comes to geet
well thats one thing out of the way then
bless he took her by force to dhabba
ufff inki yeh adat kab jayegi kabhi nahin i am sure
awww he was so jealous of dev there right
when he doesnt need to of course
good thing she told him
he didnt really have to tell her she did it for him
man her reaction to her being in love with dev was just what i expected
well he had gone completely numb for that time right
that was funny
but he finally got it she loves him and only him
that rain sequence was just perfect for them
ahhh now dadi and her plans to look forward to
all is well with maneet for now
before maan screws up again hope not fingers crossed
hope you are better though
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago



chalo ab tho maan ko patha chalgaya ki geet dev se nahi balki usse pyaar karthi hai😳

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