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Posted: 11 years ago
Haaye mera Maan! Lakshmi - Maarne ka iraada hai kya?😉
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART VIII. MAAN GOES ROMANTIC!

Maan woke with a jerk as he stared around in confusion. Why was he feeling so happy today? He wondered. Suddenly, he remembered. Today was the day he was planning to woo Geet. He smiled as he remembered Dev's plan. Dev kehta hai ki ladkiyon ko discos mein jaana bahut pasand hai! So today I and Geet are of to Disco. There we will dance, spend some time together and then I will propose her when I will drop her home. He got up with excitement written on his face.

MISSION PROPOSE GEET PLAN NO. 1

Maan stood with Geet in a corner as both looked on uncomfortably. Maan had sent Pinky home with a bouquet of roses and a sorry card as per Dev's instructions. After seeing the flowers Geet had forgiven him and called him up. Maan was now sure that as Dev's plan for forgiveness worked his other plan of going to disco would also work. And hence, Maan had eagerly asked Geet to join him for going somewhere special. Geet had agreed and soon Maan picked Geet up in his car and brought her to one of the best discotheques in Dilli. And now here they stood in a corner looking around in confusion. The way people were dancing with their body parts touching each and everybody were enough to make Geet and Maan uncomfortable. Why did he thought that Disco was a good place for a date? Maan wondered.

Geet pinched Maan which made Maan howl. He turned to look at her only to see her glaring at him. She gave him a sweet smile and pointed the door to him. Then she gave him another pointed glare for good measure and stalked away. Maan swallowed. Ab maine kya kiya? He followed Geet and noticed her standing outside with arms folded across his chest glaring at him while tapping her feet on the floor. He gave her a smile but her glare did not lessen. "Uhhh... kya hua Geet?", he gave her his best smile that would have guaranteed to make many girls in his office swoon but it had no effect on Geet. She just continued to glare at him. Maan smiled in apology, "Atleast bataaogi ki meri galti kya hai?" Geet huffed and finally let loose her anger, "Galti? Aap mujhse poochte hain ki aapki galti kya hai? Aap mujhe Disco lekar aaye hain aur poochte hain ki galti kya hai? Aapne dekha nahi! Kaise naach rahe the woh log. Itna chipak chipak ke! Kaise matak matak ke! Aur kitne chote chote kapde pehne the! Chi!" She made a disapproving face. Maan wanted to smile at her antics but controlled it knowing very well that it would not go down well with her. She turned and glared at him, "Aur aap mujhe yahaan le aaye hain? Behetar hoga ki aap mujhe ghar hi chod dein!" She turned and stalked towards the car. Maan followed her with a kicked puppy look on his face. The whole drive Geet did not look at him and when they reached her house she just walked in without giving him one glance. Maan sighed; PLAN NO. 1 FLOPPED.

MISSION PROPOSE GEET PLAN NO. 2

Dev sighed as he took in the defeated look on Maan's face. Maan had just narrated the story of the whole evening to him. Dev shook his head and mumbled, "Bro! Ek plan flop gaya uska matlab yeh nahi ki aap itna sad ho jaao! Koi dekhega toh kahega ki Geet ki shaadi ho chuki hai isliye aap aise ho!" Maan gave him a glare and Dev smiled, "Dekho Bro! Relax! I have got another plan in my mind!" He explained his plan and Maan smiled.

Geet loked around in confusion. Hey Babaji! Yeh kaisi jagaa Maan mujhe le aaye? Earlier this evening, Maan had called her up asking her to come with him for a party. She had huffed and puffed but after a while his pleadings had wore down her resistance and she agreed. Dressed in a silver saree she waited for him. He came dressed in a black suit and she felt as if her Rajkumar was here to sweep her off her feet. How wrong she was! Maan had brought her to a party thrown by his client. While at first both stayed together meeting all sorts of unknown people; unknown for Geet that is, but soon Maan and her got separated and now it was three hours to their arrival and Maan was so busy with his clients, that he even forgot that Geet was in the party too. After a while, Geet had enough. She turned and marched away to hail a taxi. It was half hour later, when Maan remembered that Geet was with him. He searched for a while for her but she had vanished. He called her cell only for her to bark at him, "Mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni! Jahannum mein jaayiye!" and then she cut the call. Maan sighed; PLAN NO. 2 FLOPPED.

MISSION PROPOSE GEET PLAN NO. 3

It was late night as Maan sat thinking about his next plan. It has been few days since the party incident and Dev had indicated that this might be the right time to implement a new one. And hence, here he was thinking over whether his plan was right or not. After the failure of the last two, he was a bit unsure of any new plan. But Dev had assured him that it would work. Dev's plan was simple; buy Geet a beautiful cake and then while eating it he should confess his feelings for her. Maan took a deep breath. This seemed a safe plan! Sab theek hojaayega Maan! He tried to assure himself and went to sleep.

Maan nervously adjusted his tie as he rang the bell of Manchanda House. He hoped Geet would not throw him out of the house after what he had done last time he implemented a plan. Dev had assured him that Geet's anger must have cooled down by now. Or not! Maan thought as the door opened and Geet glared at him. Maan gulped and looked around in confusion. What was he supposed to say? Dev had coached him on how to talk to a smiling Geet but he did not tell Maan how to pacify an angry Geet! But before he could say anything, Geet noticed the parcel in his hand and her eyes widened. Maan looked down to see what could have alarmed her only to notice that the cake was in a box which had the logo of the company. "Cake!", Geet squealed and Maan looked at her and smiled in relief. She was smiling! Dev was right; cake does dissipate anger of any lady. He absentimindedly noted in his mind to buy as much cake as possible if Geet ever geot angry at him after marriage. Before Maan could say something, Geet lunged at him and gave him a hug leaving Maan shocked. She pulled back and smiled at him, "Aapko yaad tha?" "Yaad...", Maan mumbled lost in the daze of her hug. Geet grabbed his hand and dragged him in excitedly, "Pinky! Dekh Maan ko tera birthday yaad tha aur tere liye cake bhi laaye hain!" PINKY! Maan looked at Geet horrified as she brought him in front of Pinky while Pinky looked at him eagerly. Maan smiled uneasily while handing over the cake to Pinky. Soon, he was standing by Geet singing Happy Birthday in a horribly off key manner along with the Manchandas and Geet. If anyone noticed Maan's horrible singing they preferred to ignore it which Maan was thankful for. As he sat on the sofa eating Cake, he realized that his PLAN NO. 3 had FLOPPED. Koi Nai! Atleast Geet ka ghusssa toh chala gaya!

MISSION PROPOSE GEET PLAN NO. 4

"Sachchi?", Dev asked all the while laughing loudly. Maan nodded and sighed miserably. He had just come home and Dev had asked the result of the plan. Maan narrated the whole story which Dev felt hilarious. After a while, when Maan felt annoyed at Dev's laughing he gave Dev a glare which effectively shut him. Dev sat beside Maan and sighed, "It's ok Bro! Hota hai kabhi kabhi aisa!" Maan huffed, "Kabhi kabhi hota hai Dev! Har waqt nahi! Lekin mere saath toh teeno plans flop hue hai!" Dev rolled his eyes but then brightened, "Another plan! Yeh final waala hai!" Maan looked at him warily but nodded after a while. After all what he had to loose!

Maan sat staring at Geet who in turn sat staring at the dish in front of her. According to Dev's plan, Maan had taken Geet to a candlelight dinner in a five star restaurant. There Maan was supposed to eat and dance with Geet before declaring his feelings for her. But the way Geet was looking at the dish, Maan felt that things were about to turn a very wrong way. Already, while coming here, many ladies had commented on Geet's attire which consisted of Salwar Kameez while those ladies wore high class dresses. Though Maan was not sure why they thought so highly of themselves, Geet was looking lot more beautiful than them but their behavior had upset Geet. And then the menu which was written in such a complicated jargon had confused her. And now she sat staring at the dish in front of her. Maan had a feeling that the volcano named Geet was going to erupt soon. And soon enough Geet looked up and glared at him, "Yeh kya hai Maan?", she whispered at him in harsh voice. Maan looked at the dish in question and looked back, "Dish...", he ventured a guess. Geet's eyes narrowed and she mumbled, "Ek toh itna kum diya hai ki ek bachche ka bhi pet na bhare aur upar se itna beswaad ki khaane ko bhi dil na kare! Yeh kaisi jagah laaye ho mujhe Maan?" Maan shrugged, "This is where people like me eat Geet! This is called class!" It took Maan a second to realize that he had almost insulted Geet; a second too late. Before he could say anything, Geet had vanished away. His mobile beeped and a message from Geet flashed, Main taxi le loongi! Aap apna classy khaana khaayiye!' Maan huffed and put a morsel of food in his mouth. He frowned and looked at the dish. Geet was right! This stuff is beswaad! PLAN NO. 4 FLOPPED! Ab main kya karoon? Maan wondered in confusion.

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PRECAP

Finally the moments you guys waited for!

Maan and Geet have some romantic moments!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so maan started using dev plan no 1 by taking geet to disc.waha jaane ke baad patha chala geet ka reaction

🤣wo tho kabhi nahi socha hoga geet aise react karegi😆😆😆

aur plan no 1 flopped😆

plan no.2

maan geet ko client ki party may lekar gaye aur usko bhoolgaya😲😆😆jab yaad tho geet tho already jaachuki hai party se

yeh plan bhi flop huwa😆


plan no.3

😆😆the most hillarious part. bechari kitna sajh dajh ke aaya tha cake lekar geet ko propose karne keliye jab geet cake ko dekha tho usko laga chalo yeh tho khush huyi cake ko dekhkar. lekin bechara ko itna high voltage shock laga jab geet ne uss cake ko pinky ki bday cake samjhkar pinky se cut karwaayi 😆😆😆😆


plan no.4

5star hotel may lekar gaye aur upar se geet insult bhi hogayi hai uski dress ko dekhkar wo sab alag baat hai lekin geet dish ko dekhkar rok nahi paayi😆😆😆😆aur upar se maan ne yeh dialogue maari

"This is where people like me eat Geet! This is called class!

and geet gayab aur yeh kaha usko apna classy khaana khaaneko😆



Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update...i think it is time for maan to make his own plans and not listen to dev...
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Posted: 11 years ago

😊

essa love guru to esse hi idea dega..🤣
Poor Maan proposs ke chakker mei insult ker baitha.
Koi ek plan to khudd soch leta..
ab kya hoga mere maanu ka..🥺
Hope ab apna dimaag use kare...⭐️

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
His three plans got flops, but it doesn't look like his fourth plan will be flop.
Dave ideas for dating were good but they all ended in failure hilariously.🤣
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god ..
i can't stop laughing .. its hilarious ..
dev's 4 PLANS .. FLOPPED ..
maan's reaction to each plan back fired was awesome ..
most hilarious part was .. maan brought cake 4 for geet ..
n geet's reaction to it was " Pinky! Dekh Maan ko tera birthday yaad tha aur tere liye cake bhi laaye hain!"
🤣 .. i couldn't stop myself ..
after each plan except PLAN 3 .. geet was angry on him ..
dev is absolutely funny n very very cute .. 😆 .. 😆 ..
n restaurant scene .. 😆 ...
awesome update .. hats off .. 😃 .. 😃 ..




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Posted: 11 years ago
o m g.. lmao soii loving this maan wooing geet.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow he asked his brother dev
well that was bound to go kaput then
oh hello not exactly your or geet scene mate
you guys arent cut out for this
would have been if you had taken her to a nice private restaurant or even a dabba then would have worked out better
but then here we are
well at least she accepted his apology right that counts or does it
what do mean ab maine kya kiya
you dont even know if she is comfortable going to disc or not mate
hello geet is made of sterner stuff sometimes
especially when you are giving her so much attention
dont laugh at what she said or good bye geet for sure
well he did ask for that telling off for sure man
oyye dont go for dev plans mate it wont work out
he may be her best friend but it seems he doesnt know geet well
what is wrong with this man client party
okay that was fine but he forgot he came with geet no wonder she was mad at him
babaji kya hoga inka kuch bhi nahin it seems
well this plan wasnt that bad but shame it was pinky birthday and hence that went down too
but at least she aint mad at him after his last time right
what ever you do maan do not i repeat do not ever sing
it shall be better that way mate
told you didnt i use a plan that you come up with not dev
oh boy he just made her more mad than before three
doesnt he know by now what geet likes or not seems not huh
he didnt just say that dude not helping this
well did he really think she would stay there after he insulted her
ufff what to do with this man he is hopeless like that
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
ROFL

Sare ke sare plans flop!

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