My Crush(MG SS) Part 6 Pg 54 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for ur view :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet



Thankyu...Sri I need Some time To continue Pyar ki Manzil...
N About Venomous Desire It contains 18+ content So strictly not allowed Bacha there 😆😭



achchaji!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haan ji 😆
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( credit : My shona (sam Di) 😳

PART - 1

Everyone Were Searching Where D hell Dis Geet AGAIN disappear.

Whenever There Is Competition in which SENIOR are Present She runs away...Said Meera

Sachi. She is crazy or will make us crazy. First she says she wants to go n see N for her smile we bunked our class n den she runs off Said Yash agreeing With Her Girlfriend Meera.

Meera : Yash Lets find Her There Where We always find her

Yes said Yash n her other friends

As usual She Was there Hiding herself. So that Her SENIOR can't see.

Meera : Baby Jab Tuje Chupna Hi tha toh humse class kyu bunk kar wahi Said sarcastically

Yash : sweety Meera wen did I hide😕

Geet : abey ghadda She is referring To me Baby not u😆

Yash : what ever

Geet : arey Meer aur tum sab Ghadde..Move n let Me see him

All Moved from her way as they know wen she is doing her fav hobby. No one Is allowed To Disturb her.

Yash : Meer Go n make Geetu understand

Meera : I have tried But she is just its just Crush Nothing Else

Yash : Uff..Pata nahi pehle Janam mein meine aise kya Paap kia ki iss nakchadi ko Mila mein

Meera : YASH

Pinky : No meer Yash is right.. She needs To understand Its last year Of him. He will Go n den Wat will happen to our Geet

Armaan : I guess Pinky Is right For first time *same Moment He got glares From pinky* We need To make her understand her Now or else later she will Suffer.

Here All Were Worried for her n other side Geet Madam Was Enjoying A Good View

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Karan : Go For It..Man You should Win. Humare liye na sahi Apne izzat ke liye Jeet Jaa...

Adi : haan Agar tu Haar gaya toh Impression kharab ho jayega

Person : Don't Worry.. Mere liye na sahi Uske Liye I Will give my 110%

Karan : hoyye oyyee Majnu Control Urself N concentrate

Person : Adi Aaj karan yaha kaise aa gaya Uss Nisha Ko chod kar

Karan : Nisha nai Isha

Person : ek hi baat hai nisha ho ya isha

Adi : Break up ho gaya bechare Kaa

Karan : tu Chup kar Adi Warna Mein tera Break up kara doonga Pinky se

Adi : As if I am scared from U

Karan : u both better Shut ur Mouth. Concentrate On ur work

Adi n Person Giggled

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Geet here Continuously watching Senior as she thinks if she blink she will miss out a move.

Meer: Geet Cum Lets GO n watch it. No need To Hide For God sake

Geet : NNOOO Meer I am Comfortable here. Dekh na Waha kitna crowd hai.

Meer : Just shut n Come Or else u C

Geet making a Pout face Walked with Meera

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Here The Person Is the Boxing Ring. Already he was not able To control N now that person is infront of him.

He tried all ways to control But whenever he sees tat person it gave him More Confidence n He won the Match.

He Was Happy But he was more happy to see that for whose happiness he did is tat person Is Happy or not.? But he couldn't find that person over there. His eyes searched every where to get atleast a glimpse but all in vain.

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Geet Just Couldn't Control Herself n went to washroom running with tears in her eyes

Geet in washroom cried But she herself didn't knew Was it happy one or sad one Tears. She just had tears

Meer just came back of geet as she saw her crying

As soon as she saw Meer She hugged her n cried

Meer : Sshh baby Don't cry...He won nah den y u crying

Geet : I don't know Meer. I am happy but I am in pain as he is in pain

Meera : who said u he is pain. See he won nah

Geet : No Meer. You cant understand . I know he is in pain but he is hiding it behind his fake smile

Meer Was getting More n more tensed As Geet is in Love But now able to understand tat love but says As MY CRUSH n always shrugs of the topic.

Meer Knows her best fiend will not able TO handle Wen She will see him Goin Off next year.

Meer decided tat by dis fare well She has to do sumthing . with tat She took Geet out N made her relaxed but nothing worked. Yash Asked Meer by his signals To which meer said later she wil say.

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Geet reached Home N here someone saw her entering her house. He Relaxed seeing her being fine as in College she looked Dull. Seeing her reached safely n made his way to his house.

She Took her Diary Pouring Out her Feelings. N dozep off due to heaviness in her eyes.

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Meer says yash all wat happen in washroom with Geet

Meer : we need To Do something Before Farewell

Yash : yes we have tO I have plan

Meera : Kya

Yash says n Meer Immediately hugs him by saying thanxxx its wonderful Idea

Yash :
So Now First We need To find Tat Geet feeling is strong Or not N the vice versa.

Meera : Yes and For that We need Pinky's Help

Precap : Excuting D Plan...AND...????😆

Plzzz Once check the Page 1 to get to know theme of story 😳

PART 2

Ok Done With The First Part..Hope U all Understand 😆 n Like 😳

I Would Like To say Thankyuuu To my Shona (sam) n sorry tooo

BANNER credit MY Shona Lub u😳

Drashti Won The title Of JDJ 6 . Take this as A treat from my side 😉

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DO LIKE N COMMENT. It Means ALOT for me...Dis Story is Special For me😉

Luv,

Vanshi🤗

Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
yeshhh
me 1st 😆

nice starting,
ullu Geet, she is definitely in love with Maan, it can nvr be a crush
and also Maan is definitely in love with her

n he was watching Geet na?
if not then boxing ring mai tujhe leke mai pitungi 😆

next part JALDIII
Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think Geet loves Maan and Maan also loves her only...the person he wants to see is her only...

but both don't know each other's feelings and termed their love as crush...

now what meera and Yash are planning to do...hope they don't do anything that will separate them before they meet each other face to face...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesme!!
Whose the "person"
maan toh nahe😉
great start
pls con n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!! Wonderful start!!
Geet na jhalli bhi hain or emotional bhi..
i hope Maan is too in love with his geet..
Thanx for the pm sweets..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Superb start
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow great start both r felling 4 eachother but cant say to eachother lovely update

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