Zehal-e-Miskeen - A Tale of Lost Love [part 2 link, page 23]

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Kalam.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie
i lost the track of story... reading now.. Dev drugged geet.😲😡..

i m desparately waiting for season two...

Season 2 is well underway!

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
just came across the Season 2 thread and navigated to this one before I start reading that one.

Wonderful story and updates..I am not good at commenting but just wanted to mention it's a brilliant piece of work and you have great writing style. 👏

Thank you for taking the time out to show some love for season 1, I appreciate it. Thanks once again.

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

And some mystery/questions still unsolved..

Who has fallen from the cliff 😲

What will happen to Geet when she comes to know the truth

Whose photo Geet was looking at in Part 1...

*Clicking on the Season 2 thread link for answers*

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Kalam.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
some more comments about the story...
Loved the mysterious touch given to the whole story and unfolding of the same in each part and the complex relationship the three share - where Maaneet loved each other in the past, Geet is drugged by Dev impacting her memory and now she is living happily (?) with Dev.

Seems Dev's obsession/love for Geet always takes over his self-conscience, he probably left all the wealthy life for her, but gone to the extent of drugging her medicines. Liked the metaphoric mention of the stolen cigarette during his dilemma.

Geet is still trying to recollect the pieces from past and wants to know Maan more to know herself or her past. And Maan determined to know the truth, but knows it may damage Geet more.

Thank you. I wanted to create a mysterious suspenseful aura around the story, almost replicating the unknown that Maan, Geet and Dev feel in their tangled web.

I like the way you've filtered the characters down. It portrays that all of them are suffering at one point or another. Although Dev's actions are immoral, I wouldn't say he's a villain through and through... everything he's done, he did it for a reason which may be deeper than we think.. okay i'm giving too much away, head over to season 2!

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
And some mystery/questions still unsolved..
Who has fallen from the cliff 😲

What will happen to Geet when she comes to know the truth

Whose photo Geet was looking at in Part 1...

*Clicking on the Season 2 thread link for answers*

Season 2 will answer some of your questions but raise more...

You've remembered the photo, interesting. That will also come into play as the truths start slowly crawling out of the woodwork.

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

I could think of one possibility for the photo when I read it -- as Maaneet's son or Maan's childhood photo.

Edit - not one, two possibilities..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago

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Kalam.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
I could think of one possibility for the photo when I read it -- as Maaneet's son or Maan's childhood photo.
Edit - not one, two possibilities..

Warm, but not blazing hot. There's no children involved, but it is related to Maan...

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Finally read all parts...loved the suspense touch...dev & geet married...happily married for y years...?...and maan came claiming his love for geet since their childhood...but surprisingly geet doesnt remeber him at all...for her this situation dev was responsible...he kept her under spell of drugs ...how much he was obsessed in love for geet that he ruined their lives...

she was confused with the images, dreams that she saw frequently and want to know more about maan...

omg...who fell from the cliff...is ti maan ...or ...dev...?

suspense created beautifully