Zehal-e-Miskeen - A Tale of Lost Love [part 2 link, page 23]

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

It is Maan and hence the tale of lost love ;-). Cliffhanger ;-).
On a side note a drug can cause memory loss like that? Sedatives? Depressants?

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Mansi Tripathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

OMG
Who fell???

Shocking

Maan and dev in fight

Awesome update

Continue soon

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BloodDiamond

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Oh God its Maan who fell update soon !

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Kalam.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Interesting end !!!
But throughout the story I could only se maan n dev's fights
It was good read geet's fight through her memory line in the other part ...
I still didn't get y dev had to take such a step against his brothers love n y maan left for 10 long years!!

These loopholes will be addressed in part 2... I promise!

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos
It is Maan and hence the tale of lost love ;-). Cliffhanger ;-).
On a side note a drug can cause memory loss like that? Sedatives? Depressants?

It could be either brother, or it may be someone completely different...

I'm no pharmaceutical expert, or even particularly knowledgeable in sciences as a whole, however I would like to redeem creative liberties when it comes to the memory loss issue.

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi
OMG
Who fell???
Shocking
Maan and dev in fight
Awesome update
Continue soon

All will be revealed in the next part...

Originally posted by: BloodDiamond
Oh God its Maan who fell update soon !

What makes you think it's Maan...? I'm just curious as to why the consensus seems to favour Maan falling down, when it could be anyone really...

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

maan n dev's fight
who fell!!!
cliff hanger...

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

ahh you stopped there...now the question remains, who fell ?? eager to know more...waiting for the season 2...hope you wont take much time in clearing this suspense😊

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Kalam.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

The thread for part 2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3842138/zehal-e-miskeen-the-tale-continues-note-pg-12-and-blog-link

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

i lost the track of story... reading now.. Dev drugged geet.😲😡..

i m desparately waiting for season two...

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

just came across the Season 2 thread and navigated to this one before I start reading that one.

Wonderful story and updates..I am not good at commenting but just wanted to mention it's a brilliant piece of work and you have great writing style. 👏

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

some more comments about the story...

Loved the mysterious touch given to the whole story and unfolding of the same in each part and the complex relationship the three share - where Maaneet loved each other in the past, Geet is drugged by Dev impacting her memory and now she is living happily (?) with Dev.

Seems Dev's obsession/love for Geet always takes over his self-conscience, he probably left all the wealthy life for her, but gone to the extent of drugging her medicines. Liked the metaphoric mention of the stolen cigarette during his dilemma.

Geet is still trying to recollect the pieces from past and wants to know Maan more to know herself or her past. And Maan determined to know the truth, but knows it may damage Geet more.