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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

@laks :: wow!! lucky you!!
Yup.. will definitely update!
do u fast on karvachauth?



nope😳
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Posted: 11 years ago




hai rems...

my new creations... do tell me how u find them

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Posted: 11 years ago
@laks: wow yaar.. I loved 1st one most. Its so superb..

Anyways updating now!!
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33. Say Yes, Dad!!


We could feel Sam tensing beside us b/c of Dad's intense stare or rather say I will kill u looks. Today morning Shraddha confessed her love. Mom was squealing in happiness while dad kept his silence. It was actually intriguing us. The only word he spoke was 'tell him to meet us for dinner today'. Adi took the next flight saying that he likes Shraddha, but he is not perfect for her. We dint tell his truth. That's for him to say, if he wish.


Sam's POV


The way he is looking at me it feels like I asked him to marry me. Mr. Dad, I want to marry ur daughter, not u. But dint have the courage to voice my thots. yaar.. kuch toh bolo!! Suddenly maan said some jokes interrupting the silence. Laughter erupted but then when his eyes landed on me his smile vanished. I managed to impress mom by giving flowers and she kissed my cheeks in a motherly affection. Pata nahi dad ka problem kya hain!! Shraddha was giving me worried looks.

What do u like most about her?

Now all the attention turned towards me. Be confident Sam.

Dad.. Pls

Its okay sweethea..

dad cleared his throat.

I mean Shraddha.

I then looked at him confidently.

Her honesty, compassion and brains. She is a beautiful person inside and out.

Hmm.. Can we go for a walk. Just U and me!

A test!! God help me!!

Sure da.. Uncle.

He took me to a beach faraway from the curious eyes. Is he going to drown me?

What do u do for a living?

I m a fashion designer. 'Elegance' is one of the most famous fashion designing house here. And I m proud to be its owner.

So u work with plenty of women, rt?

Uh-oh!!

Well professionally, that's my Job!!

Oh really? Then what was the reason for dumping my daughter back in college?

I looked at him stunned. How did he noe? This is going to be a tough journey. I looked back at Shraddha and I saw her laughing at some joke. She is my energy against all the obstacles. I felt my body filling with warmth and love for her.

Geets POV


Y is it taking so much time?? Maan ko aisi koi problem nahi thi.

Its b/c he noes him for years. And for dad Sam is some stranger who loves his daughter.

Oh god!! I m so nervous. What r they talking?

May be Dad is threatening him to run away b4 he gets himself in another trap. He noes living with a Handa girl is not an easy job.

I narrowed my eyes at him. But Shraddha dumped bowl of chips on his head.

Ouch!! See.. that's what I m saying!

Stop it u both. Have some wine.

Mom chided at both of them.

White wine!! Wow! Whats the occasion?

Next second one of the wine glass was took by Sam. The interrogation got over!! I looked at Dad and he looked surprise but happy??

To all the people in the room, I want to give a toast to lovely Shradhha, who makes me the happiest man in the world.

Sam looked at her lovingly. Aww!! How sweet! I nudged at maan and whispered

Kuch seekho Sam se

He shrugged.

Oh come on Sam. Put on the show!

Sweetheart.. I love u a lot and I m sorry for being a dumbass back in the past. I could have made u happier much faster. But I think its better late than never.

Next second, he knelt down on one knee and reached into his pocket. He pulled out a small red box and opened it to reveal a beautiful rose cut diamond ring. Di gasped beside me.

I noe if I don't do this sooner ur dad is going to hunt me down and marry u off to another jackass. Will u take the risk of marrying me??

Di's eyes were filled with happy tears but then her gaze moved to dad. He looked content but his eyes were curious. I can feel her struggle. Oh come on dad!! As if he heard my thots, dad suddenly smiled and winked at her.

Oh god!! Yes!! Yes!!

She managed to choke out with excitement and he slipped the ring and hugged her.

Wow buddy!! U did it!

I looked at maan longingly, but he never glanced at me. Dad cleared the throat and Sam immediately separated him from di.

I m happy for u dear. he may not be perfect, but he has got a good heart and respect us. Besides he make u so happy. But if one tear from her eyes then I m going to drown u in that beach, understand?

Sam's eyes widened but nodded quickly and dad just hugged both of them.

So I m thinking to arrange a grand ceremony to announce my daughters engagement next week after Nandu's arrival from tour. She will be so happy. What say?

I looked at my bare fingers and sighed. Maan never proposed me, but all r thinking that he has already proposed. I glanced at him but he was in deep conversation with Sam. Di is so lucky!!


Today was such an eventful one, haina maan?

Hmm..

We were in kitchen preparing another set of refreshments before calling it a night.

Di is so lucky..

Yeah. She is. Sam loves her so much.

That was the romantic proposal I hv ever witnessed!!

So u have witnessed another one?

He teased me preparing another drink. I was so tempted to dump that glass on his head, but controlled my violent behavior. Pata nahi kab tak!! Here I am giving some hints, but janaab is not at all interested!

Did u c that ring. Its so beautiful!

Of course I hv seen. I helped him to select it.

U knew that he was going to propose?

Yea.

And that idea was urs?

I asked at him expectantly.

No.

Oh!! But it was so beautiful. Every girl dreams such a day, haina maan?

I dunno geet. As far as I remember I m not a girl!

That was the last straw. I dumped all the drinks on his head and stormed out! One day I m going to dump him too!!




Thanku for all the support u were giving. Enjoyed reading all your comments. I noe many of u are disappointed of ending news. But i dont want to drag it anymore. After this story i will be writing only OS b/c of my time limit. Love u all.

@sona rai : welcome back.
@stinnasim : congrats dear for the success and all the best.
@princesssarah: how r u??
@deepa: congrats for the 8th thread of FF daily Updates
@laks, lils, poo, maansee : Thanx for waiting



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Edited by Remya_Pillai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Men to men talk between Sam and Mohinder. Sam's monologue was very funny to read. The way Mohinder was looking at him with serious look. Mohinder only wants Sharadha's happiness and for that he personally wants to ensure Sam is the right person.
Sam's proposal was simple ans sweet, Sharadha's was happy but she wants her dad's approval. A small smile and wink from her dad was all needed.
I missed Nandu, its been some time never read bout the bubbly girl.
Aww Geet's cribbing is really cute. Maan never did a proposal for her and he didn't even bother about it. Something is missing. Geet tries to give all the hint, that he is missing the proposal part in their relationship but Maan didn't get it. And finally it irked Geet, she pour the drinks on Maan's head. Poor Maan.

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Posted: 11 years ago
ROFL.!
Poor Sam, But He Finally Got Through The Test...
But Seriously, His Monologue was Funny...😆 Glad Sam And Shraddha Are Happy now...
As For Maaneet...Lol...Maan Knows Everything..Still Pretending..
Jeez, What a Day For Him...First He Got Dumped With A Chips Bowl On His Head..And Now Drinks And All.. 🤣 He Is Such A Tease...

Really Waiting For The Next Part...Wanna See How Maan Manaofys His Wild Cat...😳 Update Soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol superb update
finally sam nd shraddha r also together wid elders blessing
loved maaneet cute moment
poor geet wanting him to say something but lol man bhi na
m sad tht ur ending this story yaar
do cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

@laks: wow yaar.. I loved 1st one most. Its so superb..

Anyways updating now!!



thanx rems

off to read the update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet should just wait as Maan will make her proposal more dreamy...he is unique & full of ideas😊
Awesome part
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Posted: 11 years ago
CO INCIDENCE HIAN KYA TUM AUR MAI EK SATH ONLINE AND UPDATE ALSO HEAD SPIINING kk CAME FROM JOURNEY
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