The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 98

dang she couldnt meet him once
well we already know that
but knowing of it from now makes it worse
he waited for her to declare his love for her but she couldnt come
one storm really did some damage
he thinks she betrayed him
that she never felt for him
but that was all down to destiny
they werent supposed to meet when they did
and that too after their first kiss makes it even worse
well she is still waiting for him
but he thinks she may have moved on
how can she when he is in her heart soul and everything
and when he does see her well we all know what happened then
well not long till he knows the truth
and dev tara wedding
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

I am dead with this Maan thud!!! Will type a comment when I can form sentences again 😉

Okay I am back to update my comment... wish i knew enough words in English to describe what I felt...icing on the cake was the rain...I love rain and have formed many beautiful memories with rain so I kind of connected with this part...I felt each of geet's emotion..her love, her anxiety, her anticipation and foremost her trust and belief behind her waiting for maan...It did not feel like a story rather a beautiful piece of poetry to me and I love poems...Thank you di for making my friday evening so beautiful...will love to read about maan's POV but don't forget my dear Dev and his mysterious I-Star...👏

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

beautiful and as always seedhe saadhe bhole romantic praani :-D just following their hearts.
Feelgood effect :-)

Originally posted by: dumas

AMAZING UPDATE BEAUTIFULLY DONE LOVED THAT MAAN AND GEET MOMENT AND GEET IS WAITING FOR HIM TO COME BACK SHE IS MISSING HIM SO MUCH AWESOME UPDATE BEAUTIFULLY DONE AWESOME SONG THANKS FOR THE PM

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Lovely update👏

Maaneet moment awesome😳

Continue soon

Thanks for pm😊

Originally posted by: annbell

hai .. i'm a silent reader .. i like ur works very much .. its very romatic .. da way you write each and everyones emotions dat was brilliant ..

from da begining itslf i used read dis ff .. after dat i couldn't stop reading dis .. part which shows maan trys to move on .. i thought in dis case i'm going to stop reading dis ff for a while . .. n nw here i'm writing u a comment 😆 .. da way u manage dev naintara n maan geet equally .. its awesome.. few parts i have got confused wid kabir , chandan n dev .. but nw all is well .. ..

eagerly waiting for ur next update ..

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

"Aaj toh main Maan thud se kahi
mar na jaaoon!"
Seriously,with such sensuous description of kiss that too on Maaneet,are you planning to kill us Avi.God it was so real that I cud almost feel it 😳 Oopsy me going too carried away!!

"Bengali word hai .. Mishti
means sweet"

Meri mother tongue se toh mujhe pyar tha hi ab aur bhi zyada ho gaya😃

The last moments of their togetherness in d library seemed eternal,engraved in both d hearts.And d parting kiss made my heart sink coz I know future is gonna be cruel.


Geet cudnt make it to the farewell party and an heartbroken Maan leaves for London,to be returned as a changed man.
And Geet is living these two years only waiting for Her Maan.
How tragic,when she's so happy that Maan is back,may be she receive smthng unexpected fm d new Maan.

Have no adjectives to describe d update.Aksar apke updates padhne par aisa ho jata hai mere saath,so I write this line but I loved it to core.


Eagerly waiting for d next.

Originally posted by: valli30

awesome update

maaneet's kiss and maan calling her mishti😳

due to the floods geet couldn't make to the fairwell party

isme dono ki galthi nahi thi

eargely waiting for next part

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Geet's birthday was indeed special for her... Maneet kiss.. their lovey dovey talks... So amazing part.. waiting for Dev-tara moments.. Geet remembering her Maan... 😳 Nice one..

Originally posted by: anvi12

wow maan calling her mishti...

awesome

waiting for next