The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 61

Sorry Avi this and next week is crazy in terms of office. Just taken out an hour to update and catch up on some FFs ...awesome updates as usual and here is my combined feedback

Ch 44

Finally Tara gave into Dev's way...but more than that I felt she gave into her heart. Her whole life she has been fighting sadness so now she is taking a plunge in happiness before what she thinks she will have to push away with her won hands. But mere thought of love and happiness is weakening her then how she will get out of this pool once she is drowned in it. I guess that is what Dev is betting on really. Like Dev even I want her to realize that it is no use fighting love...instead she should fight for love.

I just loved his wishes...as Tara aptly summarized...and Maan immortalized in the serial...mere din ki shuruwaat tumse, uska ant bhi bas tumse...

Simply loved the whole update

Ch 45

Whole update was thud romantic and thudding...

And you used one of my fav songs...I just love the feel of this song and it made the whole update extra special. I could just visualize both of them sitting and enjoying those paranthas and then Maan drooling over her...thud

Geet feeling his abs...thru the clothes...that was actually a triple thud moment...in whole GHSP they had just one bike seen and that was reentry of stupid Dev and Meera...i wish they had shown Maan suing the bike with Geet behind him...

Beautufil update once again

Now lastly coming to your question. For me especially it is a dharma sankat...I just love Dev-Tara in this story but then I also love Maaneet...

So after giving it a lot of thought I want you to update the one which will progress the story. As I want Maan back from London soon, I will vote for Maaneet thinking that maybe this farewell night chapter when he will ask for her love but she wont be able to make it for reciprocating...

Originally posted by: Jannat94

Awwwe Dear killed with ur precap
I loved the whole update
it was brilliantly written
and the last part was amazing
thanx 4 the PM
waiting for next part
update soon😃

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

aww bina bataye Maan Geet ko date par le gaya and Geet ko pata bhi nahin chala...

loved their cute and mute romance but this time Maan atleast said some dialogues that he don't like her tears and he didn't like when professor scolded her...

I want precap 1...yaar Maaneet fan hain and u will give 2 options with one maaneet and one Dev then we will choose only Maaneet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Now that really is going to haunt me for the whole night and day and the whole time till u update !! Sorry😆

Woahhh on side are after effects of rainy nights! And the other side is the after shock of misty mornings ! Wah kya mausam hai ! Taapmaan Bohot bad gayaa hai ..mujhe decide karne Bohot dikhat Ho rahi hai !!!

After such a thudding mini ( due to the length of the chapter) attack .. I don't think I have recently come to love a new word as much as the Maan-thud ! Literally depicts the thuds the whoosh and tiggles everything one feels when Maaneet are in the chapter esp written by you... Loved it ... His purple and chocolate Brown combo and her pearly blush Haaye ..the way u described them ..I swear that mirror he smiles into does not justify how beauty personified of a picture they make !! It may be a small update but hey I has no complains coz u still had all the necessary AVI magic in here ...take care of yourself before u update .. I am happy with being haunted... Back aches should be taken seriously dude .. so please do so ..
And after calming myself from wishfully dreaming of the precaps I would like Maaneet please since we are in the flow with them ...AVI magic😆. It is only Maaneet magic over us, that makes you feel so. Thud generally describes it when they are together..

Btw I absolutely drooled over this chapter no no not coz of my second love Maaneet but u mentioned my Pehlaa pyaarrr ..khaaanaaa.. paaraathaa .. achaar ..raitaaa.. and I can't continue coz I'm hungry all over again ..hehee ..please bear with my mishtakes ji ...I'm not just hungry but also writing from my phone...
See u after the thud shattering next chapter ...
😳

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hyee avi kya likhtee ho yaar ...thud ...😉aur paranthe wali gali ki sair ,,,,maja aa gaya saath mein muh mein paaniii...hyee yeh gali mere city mein kyon nehii hei...??😆I want only my maaneet...😳

Originally posted by: anjalisen85

awesome👏👏




maaneet r coming closer😳




i want precap 1😉

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Sorry Avi this and next week is crazy in terms of office. Just taken out an hour to update and catch up on some FFs ...awesome updates as usual and here is my combined feedback

Ch 44

Finally Tara gave into Dev's way...but more than that I felt she gave into her heart. Her whole life she has been fighting sadness so now she is taking a plunge in happiness before what she thinks she will have to push away with her won hands. But mere thought of love and happiness is weakening her then how she will get out of this pool once she is drowned in it. I guess that is what Dev is betting on really. Like Dev even I want her to realize that it is no use fighting love...instead she should fight for love.

I just loved his wishes...as Tara aptly summarized...and Maan immortalized in the serial...mere din ki shuruwaat tumse, uska ant bhi bas tumse...

Simply loved the whole update

Ch 45

Whole update was thud romantic and thudding...

And you used one of my fav songs...I just love the feel of this song and it made the whole update extra special. I could just visualize both of them sitting and enjoying those paranthas and then Maan drooling over her...thud

Geet feeling his abs...thru the clothes...that was actually a triple thud moment...in whole GHSP they had just one bike seen and that was reentry of stupid Dev and Meera...i wish they had shown Maan suing the bike with Geet behind him...

Beautufil update once again

Now lastly coming to your question. For me especially it is a dharma sankat...I just love Dev-Tara in this story but then I also love Maaneet...

So after giving it a lot of thought I want you to update the one which will progress the story. As I want Maan back from London soon, I will vote for Maaneet thinking that maybe this farewell night chapter when he will ask for her love but she wont be able to make it for reciprocating...

Originally posted by: mayyo

My 9000th post in one of my most favourite story's thread! 😳

Originally posted by: dqno1

🤗

I saw that yesterday... 4 were left...

Mari... did u see this... I am beaming today... Maaneet 14, DevTara 14

😃