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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update..geet is behaving like a jealous baby😆😆sooo cute...this an amazing story and sad that it going to end soon.. thanks for giving us a very lovely story..pls update next part soon..
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Superb part...
Iguess geet got jealous hearinf maan call sm1 else as pari..
Loved the part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
geet is J of Pari means her own maansi...
maansi missing maan so amy called maan so that she can talk with him
geet snatched his mobile and throw it maan was shocked at her behaviour
he wants to take her to hospital seeing her condition but first he wants to make her dress change so he has taken her to KP...
eagerly waiting for next part
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ADHOORI ZINDAGI




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Part 28



@ cutie teju and rami 92 I am ending this because all lost inertest in it already I don't want to force any one nor beg them to read mine

@ coockie monster thanks for ur pics envi to you also



Maan's eyes dropped out from his sockets with her next set for words. "Kiss me" said geet with meek voice but maan heard that. From the time she cut the call she is blabbering many things but he simply ignored all those. Maan freed himself from her hold roughly breaking geet's trance. Opening her droopy eyes geet checked her surroundings.


She is lying on master bed which is arranged very neatly while the room illuminated with slight lighting. She searched for him but he is not there fear raised in her heart. She again lost him he is here right up to now. Maan entered in to the room with plate which is having some food. Her eyes shined up looking at him geet ran up to him to hug him tightly.
Maan opened his mouth to say something geet hugged him tight sobbing hard. "Mai dar gaye thi aap kaha chali gaya" asked geet with complaining voice.


"Calm down geet see I am here and here you go you should eat something now" said maan breaking the hug not meeting her gauze. Only god knows how much he is controlling himself and her every gesture awaking his desire and her every word "Kiss me". That's why he left the room saving her as he knows he won't be able to take his passion.


He is not that much sick person to take advantage of girl and she is his love. He won't be able to control himself around her when she is giving in like that. Geet silently listened his words she can sense his indifference now. She know he is not hers but the though itself making her go mad.


"Geet come here now" said maan bit sternly. Geet got scared for a sec but obeyed his words silently sat beside him. "You didn't taken anything from morning right" asked maan while placing morsel in to her mouth. Geet looked away maan got his answers kept silent after that. Maan forcefully feed her whole meal with her constant protest also.


"Aap ne khaya kuch?" asked geet grabbing his wrist when maan about to go. Maan didn't answer her tried to take away his hand from her hold. "Bath nahi karogi kya" asked geet with heavy tone. Maan looked away from her she don't know what is going on in his mind right now.

"Aap kaha jaa raha hai" asked geet making maan to look at her face. "Mat javo plz" pleaded geet melting his heart. Maan controlled the urge to hug her and console her.
"He doesn't need me now" thought geet buried her head in pillow crying silently. Maan turned back sensing her hold loosening up. Maan started to go away from that room from her but stopped listening her muffling cry.


Geet cursing herself her fate sobbing silently. She don't know what she is craving for. All she knew is being with him giving immense happiness courage to fight over odd things. His warm embrace is giving solace to her heart her soul even to her body. She wants him by her side alcohol effect also not helping her to think anything. "Pari" word ringing in her mind making her condition more worst.


When she is so lost in her miseries geet felt warm hand touching her cheeks rubbing them softly. She knows who is that person she don't need to open her eyes to confirm he is he or not. Maan hugged her tight from back locking her whole body with his rough surface. He is running away from her only for her but when she is crying for him like that he cont leave her.
He very well know she is not fully in her senses but she is his love. He knows the barrier giving his warmth of his body to her is not a big mistake. This is the thing running in his mind when maan hovered on her. But the instance his body landed on her he lost it completely. Desire taken up his senses mind clouded with wild fantasies.
Geet melted like candle with his touch his hot breathe falling on her back. She clutched the pillow tightly trying to hold back the sensation he is creating in her. Sliding his hands along with her hands he entwined them with his.




Maan kissed her hair gently making her shudder. Sucked her ear slightly making her gasp turning her to his side maan stared at her angelic face.




Placing his thumb on corner of her lips maan touched the scar which was created because of him. Maan blow air on her lips carrying them sensually making her out of breathe with his gentle touch.




Before geet cope up with his over flow passion his lips landed on her corner of lips. His lips were rough but the gentleness of his love still lingered in his touch. Geet all the way sinking in his passion giving up for his passion his desire.
Maan pressed the scar with his lips making her moan but not with pain but with pleasure. Her moan added fuel to his desire and this night alone with her like that not at all helping him. Placing his tongue the scar maan licked her rosy petals pushing her to edge of sanity. Geet wriggled with his torture he is not kissing her but trying to wipe away the pain he given to her. Locking her both hands with his Maan kissed her both eyes which were closed. He kissed her cheeks hard licking her tears in the process not leaving single tears spots on her face.



Geet felt like flowing in heaven with his each kiss. Maan stopped after some time stared at her brief time. Finally his lips landed on hers making it as full mouth kiss. Chewing her lips with his rough lips. His entire body burned with desire he don't want to leave her.
There 1st kiss speaks about their pain and anger but this is entirely different. This kiss is making him wilder with desire taking her to his desired world. Her petals trembled but her heart craved for more. Maan stopped when he heard her screaming loud "Aahh".
His trance broken left her lips realizing what he is doing with her. Guilt ran through his heart for kissing her. She is not in senses how he can take advantage of her stage.
What he don't know is the solace for her soul is his arms his kiss his touch. Maan rested his head on hers panting with their long kiss. His mouth can sense the alcohol taste as his tongue collided with hers. "I am really sorry geet" whispered maan kissing her forehead. Geet heard him saying sorry her heart cried thinking he is regretting there kiss.
No she don't want that to be happen he is hers. Her's? Her thought confused her. When did they agree for relationship? She is thinking like that. There is no promise nor any confession but she know only one thing her heart saying truth. She don't want to gave up he is the 1st man touched her soul like this. His every touch speaking about his love only. Love? She don't know if love existed between them or not. In all these his tag a friend for her just eating her heart.
"Geet are you fine" asked maan placing her loose strands of hair aside. Maan is already feeling ashamed for taking advantage of her she is his love 1st girl he touched or kissed in entire life. Things are going on without his knowledge he just hate it. "Geet are you listening" asked maan scared if she again fainted because of his passion.
Geet is so lost in her own world didn't registered his words. Maan threaten her hair saying sweet things hugging her close. "Geet just sleep now" said maan resting on bed post taking her in his arms. He don't want to stress her more by taking her to hospital also.
For getting everything in his warmth geet slowly drifted in to deep sleep. Maan tried to make her sleep on bed after some time. Geet instantly opened her eyes hugged him tight by his waist. Maan smiled at her antics reciprocating the hug slept there in the same posture.

Happy kiss day gals hope you loved this part

So how many noticed I am giving short updates?? No one lolzz great


Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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